做真正的自我
Be the real self
即使世俗的围墙挡住你万丈豪情，但挡不住你铿锵的步伐。做真正的自我，那是陶潜的五斗诗魂；
Even if the secular walls block your lofty feelings, they can't block your sonorous steps. To be a real self is Tao Qian's Five Spirits of poetry;
即使厚重的夜幕挡住你满天星斗，但挡不住你心中的灯火。做真正的自我，那是文天祥的零丁绝唱；
Even if the heavy night block your stars, but can not block the lights in your heart. To be a real self is Wen Tianxiang's unique singing;
即使岁月的樊篱挡住你坚强的身躯，但挡不住你忠贞的信念。做真正的自我，那是屈平的水中离骚。
Even if the time's barrier blocks your strong body, but can't block your faithful faith. To be a real self is Qu Ping's disdain in the water.
五斗诗魂
Five winds of poetry
采菊东篱下，悠然见南山。
Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely see Nanshan.
流云伴着坎坷，来到美丽的桃花源；风雨带着憧憬，来到清幽的山涧；万丈红光透过云雾，照射在晋代的山乡小巷……做真正的自我，不为五斗米折腰，你放弃了污浊尘世和荣华富贵，只为做真正的自我，远离勾心斗角的官场。江岸边，菊花旁，你陶然其间，这是飘逸洒脱，这是自由不羁。
With the ups and downs, the flowing clouds come to the beautiful peach blossom garden; with the wind and rain, they come to the quiet mountain stream; through the clouds and mist, the ten thousand Zhang red light shines on the mountain alleys of the Jin Dynasty To be a real self is not to stoop for five Dou meters. You have given up the dirty world and the splendor, just to be a real self, far away from the official arena of intrigue. By the Bank of the river, by the chrysanthemum, you are in the middle of Tao Ran. It's free and easy, it's free and uninhibited.
快哉！做真正的自我，那是陶潜的五斗诗魂。
Quick! To be a real self is Tao Qian's soul of five poems.
零丁绝唱
Singing alone
人生自古谁无死，留取丹心照汗青。
Since ancient times, no one has died. Let's take care of the history.
故国河山沦陷的无限愤慨与悲怆，昔日繁华的宫殿早已化为断壁残垣，你像那天边孤独的云无处着落。河山万里依然故我，你低头回望，满眼是百姓流离，尸骨遍野，无限感伤涌上心头。但你做真正的自我，宁死不降，一行热泪洒江天，成为零丁洋中的千古绝唱。
The boundless indignation and pathos of the fall of rivers and mountains in the old country, the former prosperous palace has already turned into ruins, and you are like the lonely cloud that day. The rivers and mountains are the same as me. You look back and look down. You see the people moving away, the bones are everywhere, and the infinite sadness comes to your heart. But you do the real self, rather die than fall, a line of hot tears in the river, become the eternal masterpiece in the world.
壮哉！做真正的自我，那是文天祥的零丁绝唱。
Great! To be a real self is Wen Tianxiang's unique singing.
水中离骚
Water Sao
举世皆浊我独清，众人皆醉我独醒。
The whole world is turbid and I am pure, and all people are drunk and I wake up alone.
记忆顺着汨罗江，流过春秋，越过战国，当秦攻破郢都的那一刻，你悲愤至极，在叹息中，在号哭中，在悲痛中，你虽背负太多的无奈与辛酸，但却做真正的自我，用生命表达你对祖国的忠贞与高洁的品行。
The memory follows the Miluo River, flows through the spring and Autumn period, crosses the Warring States period, when Qin conquers the capital of Yingdu, you are extremely sad and indignant. In sighing, crying and grieving, you bear too much helplessness and bitterness, but you are the real self, expressing your loyalty and noble conduct to the motherland with your life.
悲哉！做真正的自我，那是屈平的水中离骚。
Sad! To be a real self is Qu Ping's disdain in the water.
一缕清香一份洒脱，做真正的自我，展示高洁与傲岸，那是陶潜的五斗诗魂！
A wisp of fragrance, a free and easy way, to be a real self, to show noble and lofty, that is Tao Qian's five soul of poetry!
一江春水一曲悲歌，做真正的自我，满载大江与汪洋，那是文天祥的零丁绝唱！
A river, a sad song, to be a real self, full of river and ocean, that is Wen Tianxiang's unique singing!
一页历史一面镜子，做真正的自我，昭示理性与忠贞，那是屈平的水中离骚！
A page of history, a mirror, to be a real self, to show rationality and loyalty, that is Qu Ping's water Lisao!
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这篇考场作文的精彩之处主要有三：一是构思精巧，借助陶渊明等三位历史名人的行为来诠释文章主旨；二是语言精美，开篇及结尾部分精彩的排比，使全文神采飞扬；三是结构清晰，先总说，主体部分以小标题的形式分述，收篇处呼应开头，思路清晰而严谨。
There are three main highlights of this composition in the examination room: first, it is elaborately conceived, with the help of the behavior of three historical celebrities such as Tao Yuanming to interpret the main idea of the article; second, the language is exquisite, and the wonderful arrangement of the opening part and the ending part makes the full text lively; third, the structure is clear, first of all, the main part is described in the form of a small title, and the closing part echoes the beginning, with clear and rigorous thinking.