青山一道同风雨

“轻轻地握着你的手，为你把眼泪擦干。这颗心永远属于你，告诉我不再孤单。”

"Gently hold your hand and dry your tears. This heart belongs to you forever, tell me no longer alone

5月19日14时28分起，整个奔忙飞跑的中国，在尖利的防空警报声后停顿三分钟。

From 14:28 on May 19, the whole China, running fast, stopped for three minutes after the sharp air defense alarm.

七天前的同一时刻，一场特大地震撼动了大半个中国，神州上下，共此国殇。

Seven days ago, at the same time, a huge earthquake shook most of China, Shenzhou up and down, a total of this war.

国殇是一场悲剧，然而，国殇更是一次空前的团聚。

War is a tragedy, however, war is an unprecedented reunion.

很久之前，诗人王昌龄这么写道：“青山一道同风雨，明月何曾是两乡。”青山无法阻隔我们风雨同舟的携手，地域也不会隐没团结一心的中华民族头上那轮共有的明月。

A long time ago, the poet Wang Changling wrote: "Qingshan is the same wind and rain, and the moon is not the two townships." Qingshan mountain can't prevent us from joining hands in the same boat, nor can the region conceal the bright moon shared by the United Chinese nation.

一个人，一丝希望，一颗坚定的心。当救援部队在汶川大地震的废墟下救出被困60余小时的姑娘乐刘会时，在场的人们激动地哭了，而她却没有哭。“我相信有人会来救我的，一定会，我相信你们！”从未掉过一滴眼泪，这个看上去灰头土脸的妙龄女子始终微笑着，紧紧拉着救援人员的手。一双手和十几双手紧紧地交握，这是一个灾民与她的救命恩人们最质朴也最真诚的团聚。

A person, a glimmer of hope, a firm heart. When the rescue forces rescued the girl Leliu Hui trapped for more than 60 hours under the ruins of Wenchuan earthquake, the people on the scene cried excitedly, but she did not cry. "I believe that someone will come to save me. I will. I believe you!" Never a drop of tears fell. The young woman, who looked ashen, smiled all the time and held the rescue workers' hands tightly. It is the most simple and sincere reunion between a disaster victim and her rescuers.

五千米的高空有多高？问起参加救援的解放军战士，他们会告诉你：五千米是我们能否拉住受灾人民的手的距离，是生与死的距离。五千米，这个国际专业领域深感不可能执行的跳伞高度，被解放军空降战士抛在脑后。拨不开汶川上空连天蔽日的迷雾，但他们必须拨开震区人民心上的乌云。就这样，“人民的军队”从五千米的高空降下，给灾区断绝天日、与世隔绝的乡镇带去了救命的福音。村人们激动地说：“解放军来了！”这壮烈的一幕便不只出现在革命战争年代，这是一地乡民与国家之间最动人的团聚。

How high is 5000 meters? Ask the PLA soldiers participating in the rescue, they will tell you: five thousand meters is the distance between us and the people affected by the disaster, the distance between life and death. Five thousand meters, which is a highly improbable skydiving altitude in the international professional field, was left behind by PLA airborne fighters. They couldn't get rid of the fog that covered the sky over Wenchuan, but they had to get rid of the dark clouds in the hearts of the people in the earthquake area. In this way, the "people's army" descended from a height of 5000 meters, bringing life-saving gospel to the isolated villages and towns in the disaster area. The villagers said excitedly, "the PLA is coming!" This heroic scene is not only in the Revolutionary War era, it is the most touching reunion between the villagers and the country.

海洋曾把世界割裂成对立的区域，而今天海洋再不能阻断世界的爱心汇聚到一起。这爱心来自东邻日本每一个便利店前的捐款箱，来自大洋彼岸的美国遍及各州的慈善机构，来自大陆西岸那些并不富有的亚非国家一笔笔友谊的捐款……中国和某些国家因意识形态而产生的分歧，在灾难面前湮没成沙，随着飞机和航船源源不断地向着东方的中国而来，这是全世界各个国家的人心最盛大的团聚。

The ocean once divided the world into opposing regions, but today the ocean can no longer stop the love of the world coming together. This love comes from the donation box in front of every convenience store in Japan, from the American charities all over the country on the other side of the ocean, and from the Asian and African countries that are not rich on the West Bank of the mainland The ideological differences between China and some other countries have been buried in the sand in the face of the disaster. With the continuous flow of airplanes and ships to China in the East, this is the most grand reunion of the people of all countries in the world.

怆然灾难，古来有之。然而历史由古至今，谁可曾见过这般撼天动地、凝聚人心的团结？《史记》中有云，民与民同心，则家安之；君与民同心，则国兴之。在今天，则是人民与人民、人民与国家、国家与世界的携手，又何愁家不安、国不兴？

Pathetic disaster has existed since ancient times. However, from ancient times to the present, who has ever seen such a shocking and cohesive unity? In historical records, it is said that if the people are united, the family will be safe; if the people are united, the country will be prosperous. Today, it's people and people, people and country, country and the world. Why worry about the uneasiness of home and country?

青山一道，我们同历风雨共团聚；而将五洲四海的人心联结在一起的纽带，是这样一种期望：为天下立心，为生民立命，为往圣继绝学，为万世享太平！

Together with Qingshan mountain, we have been reunited with the past. The bond that connects the hearts of people from all over the world is the expectation: to build a heart for the world, to build a life for the people, to inherit the unique learning for the saints, and to enjoy peace for all the world!

【名师点评】

[comments on famous teachers]

此文在亮出“国殇是一场悲剧，然而，国殇更是一次空前的团聚”这一观点后，精选典型事例，通过“一个灾民与她的救命恩人们最质朴也最真诚的团聚”等三个层次，逐层深入地展开论证，最后归结出“在今天，则是人民与人民、人民与国家、国家与世界的携手，又何愁家不安、国不兴”。全文见解新颖，内容集中，思路清晰，材料丰富。?文章语言流畅，巧妙融合现代歌词、古代诗文、现实场景于一炉，“青山无法阻隔我们风雨同舟的携手，地域也不会隐没团结一心的民族头上那轮共有的明月”“五千米是我们能否拉住受灾人民的手的距离，是生与死的距离”“拨不开汶川上空连天蔽日的迷雾，但他们必须拨开震区人民心上的乌云”等文句既饱含深情又文采飞扬，体现出作者深厚的写作功底。

This paper, after revealing the view that "war is a tragedy, but war is an unprecedented reunion", selects typical examples, and demonstrates them from three levels: the most simple and sincere reunion between a disaster victim and her benefactor. Finally, it comes to the conclusion that "in today's world, it's the joint efforts of people and people, people and country, and country and the world." How can I worry about my family's uneasiness and my country's unhappiness. The full text has novel ideas, concentrated content, clear thinking and rich materials. "The language of the article is fluent and skillfully integrates modern lyrics, ancient poems and realistic scenes in one furnace." Qingshan mountain can't block our hand in hand, and the region can't hide the common bright moon on the head of a united nation. "" 5000 meters is the distance between us and the victims' hands, the distance between life and death. "" we can't get rid of the fog that covers the sky and blocks the sun over Wenchuan, but They must get rid of the dark clouds in the hearts of the people in the earthquake area "and other sentences are full of affection and elegant, reflecting the author's profound writing skills.

《青山一道同风雨》一文不是简单地罗列现象，而是将内容集中到“团聚”这一个点上，取得了很好的表达效果。它给我们的启示是：考场作文角度要巧，开掘要深，应善于以小见大。

The article "Qingshan together with wind and rain" is not a simple list of phenomena, but focuses on the point of "Reunion", and achieves a good expression effect. The enlightenment it gives us is that we should be skillful in the angle of composition in the examination room, deep in exploration, and good at taking the small into the big.