抓住机遇，成就伟岸

人生中会有弯道与挫折，然而正是人生中难以预料的弯道成就了不平凡的人生。

There will be detours and setbacks in life, but it is the unexpected detours in life that make an extraordinary life.

福楼拜曾对莫泊桑说过：“天才无非是忍耐”。大写的人又怎能逃脱苦难的磨砺？在困境中抓住机遇，迎接挑战，铸就人生的不屈与辉煌，何足畏哉？

Flaubert once said to Maupassant, "genius is nothing but patience.". How can a man in words escape from suffering? How daunting is it to seize the opportunity, meet the challenge and create the indomitable and brilliant life in the predicament?

大漠千里，黄沙漫漫，驼铃悠悠。你，一个柔韧的奇女子，王嫱，演绎出让人感伤的出塞的神话。一个江南水乡浸透温婉气息的女子却要在风沙裹蚀下把青丝熬成霜白，枯萎了红颜。又有谁可以承受这样的命运，而你，昭君，只是怀一幽怨的琵琶，留下了夕阳下无语的青冢。你，变坎坷的人生际遇为华夏史册上为民族和平而牺牲的永世光辉，熠熠生光。

The desert is thousands of miles, the yellow sand is long, and the camel bells are long. You, a flexible strange woman, Wang Yi, deduce the myth of sentimental going out of the fortress. A gentle woman in the south of the Yangtze River would boil the green silk into frost white and wither her red face under the wind and sand. Who can bear this fate, and you, Zhaojun, just with a bitter pipa, left a silent tomb under the setting sun. You, turn the rough life fortune into the eternal glory of sacrifice for national peace in the Chinese history books, shining.

白露横江，水光接天，纵一苇之所如，凌万顷之茫然。是你啊，旷达的子瞻，泛舟赤壁。你心中何尝不想“至君尧舜上，再使风流淳”？可你逃不了“乌台诗案”，你选择了黄州，造福一方百姓又何尝不好？“羽扇纶巾，谈笑间樯橹灰飞烟灭”，那雄姿英发的周瑜，你仰慕他，然而，你终是你，变人生的轨迹未尝不可？高歌“一蓑烟雨任平生”岂不快哉？

White Dew across the river, water and light connect the sky, like a reed, Ling Wanqing is at a loss. It's you, broad-minded Zizhan, boating in red cliff. Why don't you want to "go to the king, Yao and Shun, and make the wind pure"? But you can't escape the "Wutai poem case". Why don't you choose Huangzhou to benefit the common people? "The feather fan, the silk towel, the scull and the scuttle in the conversation and the laughter are all gone", that magnificent Zhou Yu, you admire him, however, you are you finally, the track of changing your life is not too bad? Isn't it pleasant to sing "let life be like a drizzle"?

“沅湘流不尽，屈子怨何消！”郑袖的谗言，子兰的诽谤，怀王的昏聩，那儿不是你的容身之所啊，三闾大夫！痛心与失望，如此被排挤，命运多舛，可你依然保存一颗赤子之心！试问，史上还有如你一样的忠主人么？感念朝廷的日益衰败却无力相助，于是，你，自沉汨罗，多么可歌可泣的举动，《离骚》中句句都是你的一片丹心！

"Yuan Xiang flow endless, Quzi resentment how to eliminate!" Zheng Xiu's slander, Zi Lan's slander and Huai Wang's enlightenment. That's not where you live, doctor Sanlu! Sad and disappointed, so excluded, ill fated, but you still keep a childish heart! Is there any loyal master like you in history? I'm sorry that the imperial court is failing day by day, but I can't help you. So, you, self sinking Miluo, what a song and cry move. Every sentence in Lisao is your one piece of devotion!

“水光潋滟晴方好，山色空蒙雨亦奇”，西湖美景，三月小雨润如酥，你，范蠡，携西施泛舟西湖，散发扁舟。何必留恋勾践的高位名利？你深知越王的可以同苦难，难以同甘，世人谁不留恋名利权位，可你明白“飞鸟尽，良弓藏，狡兔死，走狗烹”的道理和功高盖主皆殒身的教训。走吧，陶朱公三置千金，你，写下了最完美的明哲保身的人生准则。放弃名利，成就了最善的命运。

"The water is shining, the mountains are clear and the rain is strange." the beautiful scenery of the West Lake, the drizzle in March, is crisp. You, Fan Li, take Xi Shi to boat the West Lake and send out boats. Why linger on Goujian's high position and fame? You know that King Yue's sufferings are hard to reconcile with his sufferings. Who in the world does not want fame and power? But you know the truth of "birds are exhausted, good bows are hidden, cunning rabbits are dead, and running dogs are cooked" and the lesson of the failure of all the great masters. Let's go, Mr. Tao Zhugong. You have written down the most perfect life principle of being wise and protecting yourself. Give up fame and gain, and achieve the best fate.

菜市口人头攒动，一辆囚车押来披头散发的你，戊戌六君子之一的谭嗣同。“变法会有牺牲，那就从我开始！”你大义凛然，昂着高傲的头颅，绝不会向顽固派屈服，用鲜血来唤醒民族意识的觉醒。“我自横刀向天笑，去留肝胆两昆仑”，你，变短暂的一生荣华为民族气节的不朽。

Caishikou is full of people. A prisoner's car is carrying you in a shawl. Tan Sitong, one of the Six Gentlemen in 1898, is in charge. "There will be sacrifice in the reform, then start from me!" You will never yield to the die hards and awaken the national consciousness with your blood. "I smile from the horizontal Dao to the sky, to keep the liver and gall of Kunlun", you, become a short life of glory for the immortality of national integrity.

人生会有很多充满艰辛的际遇，充满荆棘，扑朔迷离，可是，我们能够抓住机遇，成就伟岸。

Life will be full of hardships, thorns, and confusion. However, we can seize the opportunity and achieve great success.

[简评]：在本次高考阅卷中看到太多太多的司马迁宫刑，韩信的忍胯下之辱，勾践的卧薪尝胆和屈原的自沉汨罗……这类的“弯道”“机遇”，禁不住要问：我们的学生怎么了？究竟哪儿出了问题？别说学了十几年语文，就是长到如今十七八岁，每天的耳闻目睹也不止这么一点东西吧？作文中真的是没材料可用、可写了吗？但看到这篇作文，大家也会感到欣慰了！

[brief comment]: in this college entrance examination, I saw too many imperial punishments of Sima Qian, Han Xin's tolerance of humiliation, Gou Jian's hardships and Qu Yuan's self sinking Miluo Such "detours" and "opportunities" can't help asking: what's wrong with our students? What's wrong? Not to mention learning Chinese for more than ten years, I am now 17 or 18 years old. I hear and witness more than that every day, right? Is there really no material available in the composition? But when you see this composition, you will also feel relieved!

这篇作文不说语言的流畅优美，结尾的点题，结构的完整，但就文中使用的材料，就足以让我们很是惬意：无需买什么作文材料大全，也无需让有些老师去费神搜罗一大堆作文应考经典材料叫学生背，然后去套，更无需绞尽脑汁搜寻古今中外名人轶事，只要把手中课本读熟、弄懂，就不会有写作文没有材料的烦恼。看看这篇作文，哪一个材料不是我们课本中的？

This composition does not speak of the fluency and beauty of the language, the point at the end, and the integrity of the structure, but the materials used in this article are enough to make us very comfortable: no need to buy a complete set of composition materials, and no need for some teachers to bother to search for a large number of classical materials for composition examination, which are called learning students' backs, and then to set them up, not to mention to search for the anecdotes of celebrities at all times and in all countries, as long as you put your hands If the textbook is well read and understood, there will be no trouble of writing without materials. Look at this composition. Which material is not in our textbook?

语文是个脑力活，作文不是简单的泥瓦匠砌墙，否则自古以来“天下文章一大抄”，“抄”出这么许许多多千古传诵的美文，岂不成了许许多多笑话。作文是语文水平的最好体现之一，是知识积累、情感修养、道德熏陶、目标理想，是修身齐家治国平天下，是“千古事”……的综合体现。

Chinese is a mental work. Composition is not a simple bricklaying. Otherwise, since ancient times, it has become a joke to "copy" so many beautiful articles that have been handed down for thousands of years. Composition is one of the best embodiment of Chinese level, is knowledge accumulation, emotional cultivation, moral cultivation, goal ideal, is to cultivate one's moral integrity, rule the country and level the world, and is a "eternal event" The comprehensive embodiment of.

当然，文中也有一些牵强的瑕疵，但在高考的有限时间和紧张氛围中写成这样一篇佳作，没有平时的积累和操练是难以写成的，实在难能可贵。

Of course, there are some farfetched flaws in the article, but it is hard to write such a masterpiece without normal accumulation and practice in the limited time and tense atmosphere of college entrance examination.