人生旅途中，你苦苦追寻着生命的色彩。蓦然回首的一刹那，你才发现，答案原来是丰富多彩的。---小引
In the journey of life, you are searching for the color of life. Suddenly looking back, you find that the answer is colorful. - a little quote
夏日的梧桐树下，一个稚嫩的童声打破了闲静，"爷爷，爷爷，你说，生命是什么东西呀？它是什么颜色的？"看着孩子那双渴求的眼睛，爷爷想了想，用慈爱的口吻回答说："生命是紫色的，里面有各式各样新奇的事，等你长大后就明白了。"孩子似懂非懂地点了点头，心中却盼望着自己早点长大。
Under the summer Wutong tree, a young child's voice broke the quiet. ", Grandpa, Grandpa, what is life? What color is it? &Looking at the children's thirsty eyes, Grandpa thought about it and replied in a loving voice: "life is purple, and there are all kinds of new things in it, you will understand when you grow up. &The child nodded knowingly, but looked forward to growing up earlier.
夕阳西下，枫叶似火，整个教室都被映得红红的。小孩变成了学生，学生向自己心目中最崇敬的人----老师，提出了同一个问题，老师稍微沉吟了一下，深情地说："生命是红色的，就像蜡烛，它带来了光明，也带来了温暖。"学生仔细品味着老师的话，觉得蕴含着深刻的道理。
At sunset, maple leaves are like fire, and the whole classroom is red. The child becomes a student. The student asks the same question to the most revered person in his mind --- the teacher. The teacher ponders for a moment and says affectionately: "life is red, just like a candle, which brings light and warmth. &Students carefully savor the teacher's words and feel that they contain profound truth.
白雪皑皑，一望无际。风呼啸着吹起哨卡窗外的积雪，纷纷扬扬地又洒下来。兵站在窗口，心里还在隐隐作痛，十年的寒窗苦读，三分之差的名落孙山。苦闷中，他向班长提出了那个埋藏在心底很久的问题："生命是什么颜色的？"班长知道兵的心，缓缓地回答道："生命是白色的，就像这唐古拉山的白雪，风吹不散它，阳光照不化它。"兵听了班长的话，陷入了沉思。
It's snowy and endless. The wind blew the snow outside the sentry post window, and it splashed down again. Standing in the window, my heart is still in a faint pain, ten years of hard study, three-thirds of the fall. In his depression, he asked the monitor the question that had been buried in his heart for a long time: what color is life? &Knowing the soldier's heart, the squad leader slowly replied, & quot; life is white, just like the snow in Tanggula Mountain. The wind can't disperse it, and the sun can't change it. &The soldier listened to the monitor and fell into deep thought.
阳春三月，草长莺飞。春天毫不吝啬地将大把大把的绿色洒在大地上。但兵却带着他的疑问，和战友们奔赴大西南。面对侵略者猖狂的气焰，兵心里就像烧着一团火，他和战友们摸爬滚打，挥着自己青春的汗水和生命。直到有一天，无情的炮火吞没了年轻的身躯，奄奄一息的兵，脑子却很清醒，二十年来对生命色彩追求的一幕一幕，仿佛就在眼前，突然之间，他明白了：生命的真正色彩并不是一种，不同的人会有不同的答案。爷爷的答案紫色寄托了对往昔生活的怀念；老师的答案红色是自己奉献精神的象征；班长的答案白色表明边防战士的坚强和忠贞。
In March, the grass grows and the warbler flies. Spring is not stingy to sprinkle a lot of green on the earth. But the soldiers, with his doubts, went to the southwest with their comrades. In the face of the aggressive spirit of the aggressor, the soldier is like a fire burning in his heart. He and his comrades in arms are fighting each other and waving their youth sweat and life. Until one day, the relentless artillery engulfed the young body, the dying soldier, but his brain was very clear. In the past 20 years, he had been pursuing the color of life, as if it was in front of him. Suddenly, he understood that the real color of life is not one kind, and different people will have different answers. Grandpa's answer purple reposes the memory of the past life; the teacher's answer red is the symbol of his dedication; the monitor's answer white shows the strength and loyalty of the border guards.
兵走了。他也找到了自己的答案，他的答案是那绿色的军装和长青的翠柏。他用自己绿色的答案铸成了一座属于自己的丰碑。
The soldiers went away. He also found his own answer, his answer is the green uniform and evergreen cypress. He made a monument of his own with his green answer.
一个问题，答案是丰富多彩的，在多彩的答案中找出属于你自己的那一种吧！
A question, the answer is colorful, in the colorful answer to find your own kind of it!
---后记
-- Postscript
【点评】
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作者紧紧把握住了题目的内涵，高明之处在于做了恰当的延伸，展开了丰富的想象，通过一个独特"人生旅途"的浓缩阐明了一个深刻的哲理。文章构思巧妙，"小引"和"后记"既在文章之外，又在文章之内；既是对文章内容的概括，又是对文章主题的升华，是动了一番心思的；"生命的色彩"像一条红线把不同的时空紧紧相连，使各段落既有跳跃，又自然贯通。语言清新委婉，朴素中透着华美，表现力很强，可见作者语言功底也是很深厚的。
The author holds the connotation of the topic tightly, and the brilliant point lies in the proper extension and rich imagination. Through a unique & quot; life journey & quot; concentration, the author expounds a profound philosophy. The idea of the article is ingenious. The quotation and postscript are not only outside but also inside the article. They are not only the summary of the content of the article, but also the sublimation of the theme of the article. They are the colors of life that have moved people's mind. Like a red line, they closely connect different time and space, making each paragraph jump and connect naturally. The language is fresh and euphemistic, plain and full of beauty and strong expressiveness, which shows that the author's language skills are also profound.
高分启示真情实感创意出新
High scores enlighten real feelings and create new ideas