今年温州中考作文题为《从那一刻开始》,总分60分。一名阅卷老师记录了这样一段考生作文:“六年级时,我有了一个女朋友,她漂亮,活泼,可爱啊!可是好日子才刚过上,她就转学了。当时的我崩溃了。过了两个星期,我找到了第二个女朋友,比上次那个要好。从那一刻开始,我有了甜蜜的伴侣。”
This year, the composition of Wenzhou high school entrance examination is entitled "from that moment on", with a total score of 60 points. A marking teacher recorded the composition of the examinee: "in the sixth grade, I had a girlfriend. She was beautiful, lively and lovely!"! But just after the good days, she transferred to another school. I collapsed at the time. After two weeks, I found a second girlfriend, better than the last one. From that moment on, I had a sweet companion. "
“我找到了第二个女朋友,比上次那个要好。从那一刻开始,我有了甜蜜伴侣。”这是我市一名考生中考作文中的“雷人”句子。昨天,一位参与今年我市中考语文作文阅卷的老师透露,个别学生的中考作文涉及换女友、偷东西等内容,在情感倾向和道德观上出现偏差,造成严重失分。
"I found a second girlfriend, better than the one last time. From that moment on, I had a sweet companion. " This is the sentence "Lei Ren" in the composition of a examinee in our city. Yesterday, a teacher who participated in this year's senior high school entrance examination Chinese composition marking revealed that the composition of individual students involved in changing girlfriends, stealing and other contents, which deviated in emotional tendency and moral outlook, resulting in serious score loss.
“其实,我们并不完全排斥有关爱情主题的文章,但该学生所写的内容让人哭笑不得。”参与中考阅卷的温二十一中语文教师陈梦龙老师说,这篇作文在语言文字上缺乏美感,在主题思想上没有良好的立意,对换女朋友一事表达的是一种炫耀的情绪,着实让人惊诧,该考生的语文素养和综合素养有待提高。
"In fact, we don't completely exclude articles about love, but what the student wrote is very sad." Chen Menglong, a Chinese teacher at Wen's No.21 middle school who took part in the examination, said that the composition lacked aesthetic feeling in language and words, had no good idea in the theme, and expressed a show off mood in the event of changing girlfriend, which really surprised people. The language cultivation and comprehensive quality of the examinee need to be improved.
另一名考生的作文讲述了去养鸭场偷鸭蛋的事,文末有这样一段话:“我们三个人就向(像)狼一样的,见蛋就拿,最后手放不下了,口袋放不下了,我们三个人高兴回家了。从那一刻开始,我就有一点想摘点过来,偷点过来啊。”
Another examinee's composition tells about stealing duck eggs from a duck farm. At the end of the article, there is a saying: "the three of us are like wolves. We take the eggs when we see them. At last, we can't put our hands and pockets. The three of us are happy to go home. From that moment on, I wanted to pick some and steal some. "
陈梦龙老师说,此类中考作文虽只是一小部分,但它们折射出来的教育问题却值得人们深思。教育工作者不仅要在教学工作中提升学生的学科素养,还要引导学生形成正确的人生观、道德观、价值观。剔除这些个别、特殊的情况,就总体而言,此次中考作文体现了学业测评功能与筛选功能,考生作文得分以46至50分居多,涌现了不少材料新颖、立意深远、构思巧妙、语言精美的佳作。
Mr. Chen Menglong said that although such compositions are only a small part, the education problems reflected by them are worth people's thinking. Educators should not only improve students' subject quality in teaching work, but also guide students to form correct outlook on life, morality and values. Excluding these individual and special circumstances, as a whole, the composition of the high school entrance examination reflects the function of academic evaluation and screening. The scores of candidates' compositions are mostly 46-50, and many excellent works with novel materials, profound ideas, ingenious ideas and exquisite language have emerged.
温州市心理卫生协会秘书长林崇光表示,个别考生写另类作文,也许是希望引起别人的注意,说明他们平时受到关注不够,内心渴望得到关爱,在一定程度上反映出家庭教育的缺失。
Lin Chongguang, secretary-general of Wenzhou Mental Health Association, said that individual candidates may want to attract others' attention when writing alternative compositions, which shows that they are not paid enough attention to at ordinary times, and they are eager to be loved, which to a certain extent reflects the lack of family education.
此次中考,部分考生的作文还存在抄袭、套用文章的问题。阅卷老师认为,这与本次作文题过于开放有关,也与部分学生平时“热衷”于准备佳作以便考试套用有关。对疑似抄袭的“好文章”,阅卷教师通过查询、搜索等方式进行了甄别。老师们普遍认为只有诚实作文,才能体现中考选拔的公正和公平。
In this high school entrance examination, some candidates' compositions still have problems of plagiarizing and applying articles. According to the teacher, this is related to the over opening of the composition questions, and also to some students' enthusiasm for preparing good works for the examination. For the "good articles" suspected of plagiarism, the marking teacher screened them by means of inquiry, search, etc. Teachers generally believe that only honest composition can reflect the fairness and fairness of the middle school entrance examination.
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