浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his hand．On the wall was a fly he took for a nail．The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it,
fell and broke．When the landlady discovered what happened, she decided to do him favor．The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had been． the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him the accident．Looking at the spot he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped it with all his strengths．On hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in．To her surprise, the poor old man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched and the palm of his hand ble2011年一位用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人“低碳哥（Low-carbon Brother）”1．2．minimum）。
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请根据以上提示，写一篇短文介绍低碳哥的生活，并阐述自己对这种低碳生活的看法。
注意：
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2．120左右。
1．come---came 2．they--- it 3．been去掉 4．加a
5．exact--- exactly 6．Before--- When
7．加of
8．what--- where
9．strengths---- strength
10．bleed--- bleeding
One possible student version
A．young man called Low-Carbon Brother became a hit on the Internet in 2011．He suggests living a low-carbon life, which means using less enery in our daily life so that we can help reduce carbon dioxide in the air．For example, he always picks up some waste paper on the street and uses the blank side to write something．While he is watching TV, he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light．Besides, he goes to work by bike instead of driving．
Some people think what he is doing is just a show．No one can live such a simple life with so many modern inventions around us．As far as I am concerned, I strongly support his idea and his behavior．Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life．