浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）短文改错（共10小题; 每小题分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily
I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in
Friday evening.
Last weekend I went to Jiangbin Park as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near Xinchang River while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
书面表达（满分分）☺
随着网络的普及，越来越多的中学生上网交友。某英语报社就“Should students make friends online?”这个主题进行了征文大赛。请你给英语报社投一篇稿子。
内容要点：1、网上交友的优点。
2、网上交友的弊端。 3. 你自己的看法。: 1). 词数120左右（开头已为你写好，不计入总词数）
2). 必须使用手写印刷体，书写工整，字迹清楚。
3). 抄写阅读理解文章得零分，空白者报教务处处理。nternet is a great place to hung out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.
短文改错（共10小题; 每小题分，满分10分）Last weekend I went to Jiangbin Park as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near Xinchang River while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud∧what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
书面表达（满分15分）One possible version
Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hung out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.
The Internet helps students make as many friends as they want easily. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely. Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies. Some students even get help with their foreign language studies.
However, each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of students’ precious time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students sometiomes get cheated online.
In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmate other people around us.
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