写作指导 栏目索引 写作指导 栏目索引 课标卷外研版 英语 写作指导五 话题类记叙文 1 写作指导 话题类记叙文要注意以下几点: 第一,掌握记叙文的“六要素”。一般按照事件发展的时间顺序来讲述, 先交代事件发生的时间、地点以及事件所涉及的人物,然后叙述事件发 生的原因、经过,最后交代结果。但有时也采取插叙和倒叙的手法。 第二,首先确定时间立足点,并以此确定时态。报道、日记或故事类记叙 文通常是记录过去发生的事情,因此经常采用一般过去时;叙述当前的事 情或自然、社会现象则用一般现在时。 第三,从谋篇布局角度讲,该类文章可分为三段:第一段引出话题;第二段讲述过程;第三段说明结果或发表感慨。 写作指导 2 常用句式 (1)One morning/day.../Last week/Saturday.../On a winter day.../This morn- ing.../It was June 20,2017.../On May 4,2017... (2)...was doing sth.when.../As soon as...+主句/When...+主句/Before I could...+主句 (3)As/Because/Since...+主句 (4)After some time.../After a while.../A few minutes later.../A moment lat- er.../Then... (5)Some were doing...some were doing...and/while others were doing... (6)When it was time(for sb.)to...we... (7)Just then.../At that moment.../Hardly had...when (8)And.../So.../Therefore.../As a result.../For that... 3 写作典例 (2017四川) 假设你是李夏,你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况,请根据以 下要点回信告知。 1.考试日期与科目; 2.考试准备情况; 3.考试时的状态; 4.对试题的感受; 5.可能的考试结果。 注意: 1.词数120左右; 2.开头语和结尾语已为你写好; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 4.文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇:高考college entrance examination Dear Sam, Thank you for your concern. Best wishes! Yours, Li Xia 【范文】 Dear Sam, Thank you for your concern.I’m writing to tell you something about my college entrance examination. I attended it on June 7th and June 8th.We were examined on all the subjects that we had learned in high school,that is,Chinese,math,English and science which includes physics,chemistry and biology.Before the exam,I devoted myself to preparing for it.Our teacher chose many important exercises for us,and I went over the language points at the same time.I know it is of equal significance to have a good sleep at night.So while sitting in the classroom and doing my papers,I felt confident and was full of energy. As far as I am concerned,I feel the exam is not too difficult.I will be satisfied with the result of the exam. Best wishes! Yours, Li Xia 【写作点评】 (1)第一段开门见山地阐明写作主题。 (2)第二段使用了过渡词或短语that is,and,so,使得文章上下文之间衔接自如,通顺流畅。 (3)第二段中还使用了定语从句、宾语从句,丰富了文章的句式结构,彰显 了作者的写作功底,也增加了得分点。 4 跟踪训练 (2017黑龙江双鸭山一中期中) 假如你是李华,在上一周去英国参加了由Fiona的学校组织的两校学生交 流活动,在英国期间,你居住在Fiona的家中。回国后,请你给Fiona写封感 谢信,内容包括: 1.交流活动中的收获和感受 2.回忆在Fiona家度过的美好日子 3.感谢她送你的英文图书
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数) 提示词汇:文化交流活动:Cultural Exchange activity Dear Fiona, I’ve been back home safely from England. 【范文】 Dear Fiona, I’ve been back home safely from England.Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.Last week,I participated in the Cultural Exchange activity.I enjoyed myself in your country.We visited the city museum and some places of interest,which made me have a better understanding of the English society,culture and history.Of course,I also made many new friends.
What’s more,I was lucky enough to stay at your home.And I’ll never forget the days we spent together. Here I especially thank you for the book you offered me as a gift.It’s a great help for me to learn about your country.I will treasure and make full use of it. Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you! Yours, Li Hu