专题二十六 记叙文型书面 表达 专 题 导 读 真 题 典 例
新 题 预 测 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 英语记叙文的写作一般要求考生根据提示中提供的情景，组织语言材料。要想高分完卷，必须注意： 1．写作前要根据要求或暗示确定好用什么人称。一般来说，英语记叙文要以“第一人称(I/we)和第三人称(he/she/it/they)”展开叙述。第一人称是从“参与者”的角度进行叙述；第三人称是以“观察者”的身份展开叙述。要根据具体情况合理选用时态和要点。要就事论事，不要画蛇添足，节外生枝。 返回目录 专 题 导 读 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 2．交代清楚记叙文写作的六要素：人物(who/whom)、时间(when)、地点(where)、事由(what)、原因(why)、结果(how)。注意从具体的材料中提炼中心，并根据中心思想选择材料，合理安排情节。注意写作的顺序以及记叙的详略。 3．注意选择合适的时态和叙述的方法。记叙文一般是叙述已经发生过的事情，因此其基本时态应该是一般过去时。其记叙的顺序包括： 返回目录 专 题 导 读 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 (1)以时间为线索，按时间的顺序展开。常用的标志词语有：afterwards, at the same time, first, then, next, finally, soon, immediately, following等。 (2)以地点为线索，以地点的转移为顺序。 (3)以事件的发展为线索，或以人物的出现先后展开。 4．记叙事情时，要注意主题鲜明突出，清楚具体，内容感人深刻。写人时，要抓住典型事例、典型行动和表现。对中心事件和最能表现中心思想的地方，要详细叙述；对于次要的东西，就少写或不写。 返回目录 专 题 导 读 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 真 题 典 例
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请以“One thing I'm proud of”为题， 用英语写一篇100～120个词的短文， 记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下： 1．记述事情经过； 2．简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。 注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入总词数。 One thing I'm proud of 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 真 题 典 例
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从文章体裁分析，这是较典型的开放式记叙文写作，主要让考生就one thing I'm proud of展开叙述，同时写出自豪的原因和启示。考生要根据自己的经历，先要详细叙述事情，然后补充一定的自我剖析以及对此的看法和评述等。文章可以从三方面来写：第一部分简要叙述自豪的事情；第二部分重点讲述事情的经过，可以按照事情发展的顺序写；第三部分则要说明自豪的理由。 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 真 题 典 例
在写作过程中，要注意好词好句的运用，可以使用remember,
be amazed at，be determined to do, learn the techniques, keep practising, at the end of, be proud of, fulfil one's potential, achieve one's goal等重要的词汇和词组。句式要多样化，如可以用名词性从句：It helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work…；状语从句：Then I kept practising until I became confident…；非谓语结构：Amazed at how skilful they were, I was… 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 真 题 典 例
One possible version： One thing I'm proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class. 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 真 题 典 例
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.” 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 新 题 预 测 (一) 最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。 内容要点如下： 1．每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解； 2．你谈到了自己的梦想； 3．如何实现自己的梦想。 注意： 1．词数120左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 新 题 预 测 One possible version： May 8 Wednesday Sunny Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi's Chinese Dream，everyone talked enthusiastically about their understanding of the Chinese Dream.We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream.I have always wanted to be a doctor.Not only can doctors save people's lives, but also they are doing a respectable job.Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 新 题 预 测 To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor.Only in this way can I accomplish my goal. 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 新 题 预 测 (二) 下面六幅图画描述了发生在李明放学回家路上的一件事，请根据图画内容用英语写一篇短文。
注意： 1．短文必须包括所有图画的主要内容； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使短文内容连贯、完整； 3．词数120左右。 (二) 下面六幅图画描述了发生在李明放学回家路上的一件事，请根据图画内容用英语写一篇短文。
注意： 1．短文必须包括所有图画的主要内容； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使短文内容连贯、完整； 3．词数120左右。 返回目录 专题二十六 记叙文型书面表达 新 题 预 测 One possible version： It was raining heavily yesterday afternoon when Li Ming came out of school heading for the bus station. While waiting for the bus, Li Ming found a man ahead of him keeping looking around, as if searching for something. All of a sudden, the man reached his hand into the bag of a lady. However, the lady didn't realize what had happened until Li Ming shouted, “Stop thief！” Hearing that, the thief turned around and ran away. Immediately, several brave young men began to run after him. As soon as the thief was caught, the police hurried over and took him to the police station. Li Ming was praised for his bravery. 返回目录 教师备用习题 请根据下面四幅图画内容，用英语写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。
注意：词数100左右。 参考词汇：吊销驾照revoke a driving licence 请根据下面四幅图画内容，用英语写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。
注意：词数120左右。 参考词汇：吊销驾照revoke a driving licence 返回目录 教师备用习题 One possible version： My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday. Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result he got drunk. After the meal, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didn't listen to them, saying “no problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away. A few minutes later, he was winding his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive.
返回目录 教师备用习题 The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. Unfortunately, he had to stay in hospital for several days.Worse still, he was fined by the police and his driving licence was revoked. How he regretted what he had done!