书面表达专题卷6
1．
：书面表达（满分15分）
假设你是某中学学生张华，某报社就目前学校中存在的不文明问题展开了调查。请你用英语给该报编辑部写一封信，反映目前存在的不文明现象，并就如何做一名文明中学生谈谈你的看法。
注意：词数:100左右,信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇： 不文明的 uncivilized
Dear Editors,
I’m writing to say something about some uncivilized behavior on our campus.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．基础写作(共1小题，满分20分)
上周，一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假设你是该校通讯员请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一篇英文报道。
[写作内容]
时间 上周
地点 华文中学
事件 一批英国学生到访
行程 了解中国学生的校园生活、参观佛山的著名景点，体验当地文化
佛山印象 洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品
回访计划 华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]
3．假如你叫李华，你班的同学就中学生是否应该带手机上学持不同意见。请你根据下列信息，给Teens的编辑写一封信，介绍同学们的看法，并阐明自己的观点。
60%的同学赞成 40%的同学反对
1.方便和家长、同学联系
2.有拍照、听音乐等多功能
可以放松自己
3.时尚 1.上网聊天，沉迷游戏，经常发短信
2.影响学生集中精力学习
3.有时影响课堂教学
注意 : 1. 信的格式与开头已为你写好;
2. 词数:120 左右
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether the school students should carry a mobile phone to school.
Opinions on the question are divided as follows.
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
4．前不久，学生会向高三学生发出倡议：十八岁生日时，请你为父母做一件事。同学们积极响应，纷纷表达自己的想法。请根据以上信息，以“Something Special for Parents”为题用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 描述以上有关学生会倡议的信息和同学们的反应；
2. 作为一名高三的学生，你的做法及理由是什么。
注意：1. 词数：120左右；
2. 可适当增加细节， 以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 短文的标题及开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Something Special for Parents
Not long ago,Student Union in our school advocated that_______________
5．书面表达（15分）
根据中文意思,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。中文提示内容不必逐句翻译；可适当加入与话题相关内容.题目已拟 (80词左右)
几年以前我家只有一间小屋。三个人住一间屋真是艰难。现在我们已经搬进了一套两室一厅 的单元房。我非常高兴。当我父母做. . . , 我能. . . 。我爱我的家。单元房：a new flat
I love my home
6．假如你是红星中学学生会主席李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Jack推荐一名学生助手（assistant）。请根据所给提示给Jack写封推荐信。
1. 欢迎Jack的到来；
2. 推荐刘佳做学生助手；
3. 刘佳的基本情况（18岁，高三学生，学校十佳学生）；
4. 刘佳的特点与特长（活泼、乐观；电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等）。
注意：词数：120~150；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考答案
1．
One possible version
Dear Editors,
I’m writing to say something about some uncivilized behavior on our campus.
As we all know, the school is where students receive an education. However, what is happening around us is worrying. For instance, some students are often late for school or leave early. In addition we can’t fail to notice that some students often make too much noise or throw rubbish. Instead of showing respect for our teachers, some students often answer them back rudely. If teachers are strict with them, they feel uncomfortable. As a result, they often cheat rather than study hard. Some others may go even further---they tend to smoke, fight with others or make rude remarks about others, destroying the image of our school.
In order to build a harmonious school, we must take measures to get rid of all the bad behavior and develop good habits. Besides we should also try our best to persuade others to be civilized.
【解析】
2．
Huawen Middle School in Foshan City received a group of students from Britain last week. During their one-week stay in Foshan, the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students. They also visited some places of interest in Foshan and learned about the local culture. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students, cleanness of the city and niceness of food. At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March.
【解析】
试题分析：题目要求根据所给内容写一篇英文报道。写作内容包括：事情发生的时间、地点、行程、对佛山的印象、回访计划等。要求使用5个句子表达全部内容，句子结构要正确，包含所有要点，并保持行文的连贯性。
亮点说明：
范文使用了被动语态were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students；
范文使用了较多的短语：places of interest，learned about，set for等，丰富了作文的内容。
考点：类作文
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether mobile phones should be brought to school. Opinions on the question are divided as follows.
Sixty percent of the students subscribe to the view that students can bring a mobile phone to school because it has many advantages. If a student has a mobile phone, he she can contact his parents and friends easily. (It is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends.) He can also take pictures and enjoy music to relax himself. Besides, it’s fashionable to have a mobile phone.
While 40 percent of the students are opposed to the view, because with mobile phones some students may have a chat on the Internet and be addicted to playing games. What is worse, some even get into the habit of sending text messages to their friends. Thus, students may not focus their attention on (concentrate on /pay much attention to) their lessons. If by chance the phone is not turned off, the ringing will disturb the class. Furthermore, using mobile phones will add to their parents’ economic burdens.
Actually, students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones. Personally, I don’t think it’s a good idea to bring mobile phones to school,
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【解析】
试题分析：本文是关于是否应该带手机上学的话题的讨论，文章的要点很全，对于考生来说，只需要翻译成英文即可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型文章更有档次。
4．不唯一
Something Special for Parents
Not long ago,Student Union in our school advocated that Senior Three students should do something special for their parents on their 18th birthday. All the students were actively in response to it and most of them have come up with their ideas. Some choose to write a letter,saying it’s the best way to express their appreciation as well as love for their dearest parants. Others prefer to cook a big meal to show that they’ve already grown up.
As for me, I tend to do up hair,wash feet and cut fingernails for my parents. By doing what my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they devote to bringing me up. Also, being eighteen years old means it’s time that I should take responsibility to take care of them.
【解析】
试题分析：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
A few years ago, my family had only one small room. It was very hard for three people to live in the same room， because sometimes it’s very inconvenient .Now we have moved into a new flat with one living room and two bedrooms. I'm very happy. I can do my homework quietly in my own room when my parents do the housework or other things. On weekends my family often watch TV ,chat or listen to music in the living room. love my home.
【解析】略
6．
Dear Jack,
I’m Li Ming, Chairman of the students’ Union of Hongxing Middle School. It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.
I was asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant. Liu Jia is a friendly, active and optimistic girl. She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken English is extremely excellent. I’m sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China.
If you have any questions about it, please contact me.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Ming
【解析】
试题分析：本文是书信类作文，要求根据所给提示给Jack写封推荐信，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：look forward to盼望，have a gift for有…天赋， It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.这句话用了it做形式主语， She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. 这句话用了定语从句，还有文章还使用了What’s more, 这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查书信类书面表达