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2017届高考英语一轮复习顶尖学案:必修5 Unit 13 People 人(北师大版)

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  2017届高考英语一轮复习顶尖学案:必修5 Unit 13 People 人(北师大版)

  核心词汇

  1.He had g____________ himself a reputation for unfairness.

  2.I remember you mentioned the same thing on a ____________ (以前的) occasion.

  3.They ____________ (应受,该得) to be punished.

  4.He ____________ (指责) his boss of having broken his word.

  5.The umbrella is a poor ____________ (躲避处) from heavy rain.

  6.I have no ____________ (欲望,渴望) to discuss the question.

  7.The latest developments c____________ me in my belief.

  8.I am g____________ to have you help me repair the house.

  9.He gave a d____________ (描写;叙述) of what he had seen.

  10.You can’t apply for the job until you have ____________ (满足……) certain conditions.

  11.My elder sisters and brothers have moved away from home and are now ____________ (自立的).

  12.The fund is for r____________ distress among the flood victims.

  13.We appreciated his ____________ (奉献) of time and money to the project.

  14.We must ____________ (集中)our attention on efficiency; ____________(专心,专注) is essential if you want to do a good job.

  15.I didn’t want to be ____________ (使有联系) with it at all because the ____________ (联系) had no good to me.

  1.gained 2.previous 3.deserved 4.accused 5.shelter 6.desire 7.confirmed 8.grateful 9.description 10.satisfied

  11.independent 12.relieving 13.devotion 14.concentrate;concentration 15.associated;association

  高频短语

  1._______________劝服某人做某事

  2._______________起草

  3._______________集中于;专心于

  4._______________结果为……,以……结束

  5._______________就某事来说,从某个角度上看

  6.________________

  愿意做某事

  7.________________

  处理,应付

  8.________________

  耐心对待某人

  9.________________

  斥责或责备某人

  10.________________

  怒视

  11.________________

  突然想到,猛然想到

  12.________________

  说实话

  13.________________

  禁不住要做某事

  14.________________

  把……比作……

  1.talk sb.into doing sth. 

  2.draw up 3.concentrate on

  4.end up 5.in terms of 6.be willing to do sth.

  7.deal with 

  8.be patient with sb. 

  9.tell sb.off

  10.glare at 

  11.come/spring to mind 

  12.to be honest 

  13.can’t help doing sth. 14.compare...to...

  重点句式

  1.____________ you are a group leader.

  假设你是组长。

  2.___________,look them up in a dictionary.

  如果有必要的话,就在词典中查一下它们。

  3.At work,____________ gets you hired but ____________ gets you promoted.

  在工作中,正是智商使你得到雇用但是情商使你被提升。

  4...._________________ people with low EQs often have problems getting on with other people and dealing with difficult situations;...

  ……毫无疑问情商低的人在与人相处、处理困难局面方面常有困难;……

  5....____________ upset I got,__________ I was able to concentrate...

  ……我越不安,就越不能集中精力。

  1.Suppose2.If necessary 

  3.it is IQ that;it is EQ that

  4.there is little doubt that 

  5.the more;the less

  知识详解

  1. gain vt.& vi.& n. 获得,赢得;(钟表)走快;利益

  (回归课本P4)Well,knowing these things can help you gain a better sense of yourself...

  噢,知道这些事情有助于更了解你自己……

  例句探源

  ①There is nothing to be gained from delaying the decision.

  推迟决定得不到任何好处。

  ②Wine bars have gained in popularity in recent years.

  近年来,以供应葡萄酒为主的酒吧越来越受欢迎。

  易混辨析

  gain,acquire,earn,achieve

  (1)gain收获;获得。指获得有用或必需的东西。可以用于体重、力量的增加,奖学金的获得,更常用于经验、知识、教育、满足等的获得。

  (2)acquire购得,得到(尤指昂贵的或难以得到的东西);获得,掌握(知识、技能等)。

  (3)earn取得;赚得。通常指通过工作挣钱,也可以用于应该得到的东西,如支持、认同、声望或尊敬。

  (4)achieve得到;获得。多指成就、目标、幸福的取得。

  ①(牛津P835)Her unusual talent gained her worldwide recognition.

  ②(牛津P15)He had finally achieved success.

  ③(牛津P17)She has acquired a good knowledge of English.

  ④He earned the respect of his students.

  1.—I don’t think Cheng Fei should be to blame.What about you?

  —Yes.________.

  A.No pains,no gains

  B.Early birds catch worms

  C.Great minds think alike

  D.Facts speak louder than words

  解析:选C。考查交际用语。从yes来看,答话人同意说话者的观点,只有“Great minds think alike.(英雄所见略同。)”符合语境。No pains,no gains.不劳无获;Early birds catch worms.笨鸟先飞;Facts speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。

  2 deserve vt. 应得,应受;值得

  (回归课本P8)For example,have you ever wondered why some of the smartest students in your class,who you think deserve good grades,

  sometimes end up failing exams?

  例如:你是不是感到惊讶,为什么班里最聪明的学生,那些你认为应该成绩很好的,有时会考试不及格呢?

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①She deserves a reward for her efforts.

  她积极努力,应得到奖赏。

  ②These proposals deserve serious consideration.

  这些建议值得认真考虑。

  2.完成句子

  After all the efforts she has made,she ______ ________ ________ ________ (得到什么都是应该的).

  答案:deserves whatever she wants

  3 accuse vt. 控告;指控

  (回归课本P9)The man was accused of stealing money.

  那人被控告偷钱。

  例句探源

  ①She accused him of stealing her money.

  她控告他偷了她的钱。

  ②The boy was punished by his father for his stealing money.

  那孩子由于偷钱而受到了父亲的惩罚。

  ③(朗文P2046)Her father scolded her for upsetting her mother.

  她因惹母亲生气而遭父亲斥责。

  3.The shop assistant was dismissed as she was ________ of cheating customers.

  A.accusedB.charged

  C.scolded

  D.cursed

  解析:选A。考查动词辨析。句意:那个售货员被解雇了,因为她被指控欺骗顾客。be accused of“因某事而被指控”;be charged with “因某事被起诉”;be scolded for“因……而受责备”;be cursed for“因……而受诅咒”。

  4 concentrate vt.& vi. 集中(思想、注意力等)

  (回归课本P5)Concentrate on what is really important.

  把注意力集中到真正重要的东西上去。

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①I can’t concentrate with all that noise going on.

  吵闹声不绝于耳,我无法集中精神。

  ②I decided to concentrate all my efforts on studying.

  我决定全力以赴学习。

  ③(朗文P276)After the incident,she buried herself in her work.

  那件事情之后,她埋头工作。

  4.There is too much noise outside,I can hardly

  ________my attention on my book.

  A.fill B.pay

  C.connect

  D.concentrate

  解析:选D。句意:外面太吵了,我很难把注意力集中到书本上。concentrate集中;fill装满,充满,指装满容器或者充满空间等,不能说装满注意力;connect连接,联系;pay attention to sth.为固定搭配,pay attention不能与介词on搭配。

  5 desire n. 愿望,欲望,渴望 v.  渴望,期望

  (回归课本P119)Tour guides need to be independent,outgoing and have a desire to share information.

  导游需要有独立的、外向的并有分享信息的意愿。

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①The fans of Liu Dehua have a strong desire to know his wedding date.

  刘德华的歌迷非常渴望知道他的婚期。

  ②He expressed a desire that the papers should be made public.

  他表示很希望这些文件能公之于众。

  5.完成句子

  (1)我不想再谈此事。

  I _______ _______ _______ to discuss the matter further.

  答案:have no desire

  (2)想住在这个国家北方的人很少。

  Few people desire _______ _______ _______ ________ _______ _______ _______ _______.

  答案:to live in the north of the country

  6 aboard adv.& prep. 在船(飞机、车)上,上船,上飞机

  (回归课本P11)I feel that airlines should not allow new­born babies aboard their long distance flights.

  我认为航空公司不能允许新生儿登机进行远距离飞行。

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①We went on board the ship.

  我们登上了轮船。

  ②Everyone aboard the plane got worried when the plane was out of control.

  当飞机失控时,机上的所有人都感到担心。

  易混辨析

  ①The plane crashed,killing all 157 passengers aboard/on_board.

  ②Passengers are waiting to board.

  ③My brother has never been abroad before,so he is very excited.

  6.翻译句子

  (1)他已经登机了。

  ________________________________________

  答案:He was already aboard the plane.

  (2)该上轮船了。

  ________________________________________

  答案:It’s time to board the ship.

  (3)他去世的消息很快传到了国外。

  ________________________________________

  答案:The news of his death soon spread abroad.

  7 anxiety n. 忧虑,担心

  (回归课本P14)The day that I met my best friend for the first time,I was full of anxiety.

  我第一次遇见我最好的朋友的那天心里充满了忧虑。

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①(牛津P75)Some hospital patients experience high levels of anxiety.

  有些住院病人十分焦虑不安。

  ②His anxiety to succeed led him to work hard.

  他渴望成功之心促使他努力工作。

  ③(朗文P76)He was a bit anxious about the safety of the machinery.

  他有些担心机器的安全。

  7.用anxiety的适当形式填空

  (1)I am ________ about her illness.

  答案:anxious

  (2)She tried hard to hide her ________ about the result.

  答案:anxiety

  8 requirement n. 需要,要求;规定

  (回归课本P119)Can you think of any jobs where this isn’t a requirement?

  你能想到不需要这点的工作吗?

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①Our immediate requirement is extra staff.

  我们急需增加工作人员。

  ②Not all goods satisfy the customers’ requirements.

  并非所有的商品都能满足顾客的需求。

  ③(朗文P1946)Most house plants require regular watering.

  大多数室内盆栽植物需要定期浇水。

  8.It was required that all the waste paper _____ put into the rubbish bin.

  A.wasB.must

  C.be

  D.should

  解析:选C。“废纸”和“放”之间为被动关系,所以此处应用“should be”,should被省略。

  9confirm v. 证实;坚定(决心,意见)使有信心

  (回归课本P14)After confirming that I was,Jenny said that she had noticed I’d left my book in the library...

  在确定我是(珍)之后,珍妮告诉我说她发现我把书落到图书馆里了……

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①(牛津P415)I’m still waiting for confirmation of the test results.

  我仍在等待考试结果的通知书。

  ②The experiment confirmed his theory.

  那个实验证实了他的理论。

  ③The expression on his face confirmed me in my suspicions.

  他脸上的表情证实了我的怀疑。

  9.The President ________ that he would visit France the following month.

  A.deservedB.confirmed

  C.predicted

  D.doubted

  解析:选B。考查动词词义辨析。句意:这位总统证实说他下个月会访问法国。confirm(进一步)证实;deserve值得;predict推测,预测;

  doubt怀疑。A、C、D三项均不符合句意,故选B。

  10 shelter n. 居所,住处;遮蔽;避难处

  vi. 掩蔽;躲避

  (回归课本P12)They might be sheltering in a cave.

  他们可能栖身在一个山洞里。

  归纳拓展

  take shelter from the rain/wind/bad weather

  躲避雨/风/恶劣的天气

  shelter...from...保护……不受……的破坏

  protect...from...保护……免于……

  shelter from sth.躲避某事

  例句探源

  ①Trees shelter the house from the wind.

  树给房子挡风。

  ②(牛津P1838)People were desperately seeking shelter from the gunfire.

  人们拼命地找地方躲避炮火。

  10.The mosque(清真寺)provided ________ for hundreds of families whose homes had been flooded.

  A.shelter B.place

  C.religion

  D.thought

  解析:选A。考查名词词义辨析。句意:清真寺为家园被洪水淹没的成百上千的家庭提供庇护的地方。shelter庇护;religion宗教;thought想法;place地方,应用复数形式。

  11 judge vt. 判断;评价;判决;评判

  (回归课本P16)It’s difficult to judge but we thought they might be in the same class...

  很难判断但我们认为他们可能在同一个班里……

  归纳拓展

  judging by/from根据……作出判断,从……来看

  judge sb./sth.评判某人/某物

  judge sb./sth.(to be)+n./adj.认为某人/某物是 ……

  judge that...判断,估计……

  例句探源

  ①Teachers tend to be judged by their students’ exam grades.

  人们常以学生的考试分数来评判教师的优劣。

  ②In this fog,we can’t judge how far it is to the other side of the river.

  在这样的大雾天气下,我们无法判断到河对岸有多远。

  11.完成句子

  ________ ________ ________ ________ (从他的外貌判断),he lives a happy life.

  答案:Judging from/by his appearance

  12 devote vt. 献身;投入,专心;热爱

  (回归课本P17)She devotes a lot of her time to caring the neighbours.

  她把许多时间用于关心邻居们。

  例句探源

  ①On Teachers’ Day,Wen Jiabao called on teachers to be devoted to their educational career.

  在教师节那天,温家宝号召教师们献身于教育事业。

  ②(牛津P548)She devoted herself to her career.

  她全力倾注于自己的事业。

  ③(2010年高考四川卷)If you have a job,do devote yourself to it and finally you’ll succeed.

  如果你有了一份工作,付出努力去做它,最后你定能成功。

  12.The time he has devoted in the past ten years ________ the disabled is now considered ________ of great value.

  A.to help;being B.to helping;to be

  C.to help;to be

  D.helping;being

  解析:选B。devote...to doing sth.把……奉献于……;be considered to be...被认为……。其中he has devoted in the past ten years to helping the disabled为定语从句,修饰the time。故选B。

  13accountant n. 会计师

  (回归课本P15)As an experienced accountant,

  my father has gained the respect of his colleagues.

  作为一名有经验的会计,我的父亲赢得了他同事的尊敬。

  归纳拓展

  account v.认为,说明;总计有

  n.(银行)账户;说明,理由;帐目,报道

  open an account开一个账户

  account for说明(原因等);作出解释

  on account of由于,因为

  on no account决不(置于句首时,句子用部分倒装)

  on any account无论如何

  take account of=take...into consideration考虑到……

  keep an account of记录,记载

  例句探源

  ①He could not account for his foolish mistake.

  他无法解释他所犯的愚蠢的错误。

  ②The company takes account of environmental issues.

  这家公司考虑到了环境问题。

  ③(牛津P13)She retired early on account of ill health.

  由于体弱多病,她提前退休了。

  ④(朗文P14)There needn’t be any more worries on that account.

  没有必要再为那事担忧了。

  13._______his knowledge of the mountainous country,John Smith was appointed as our guide.

  A.In spite of B.On account of

  C.Regardless of

  D.Instead of

  解析:选B。句意:由于约翰·史密斯有丰富的山区知识,因此他被任命为我们的向导。on account of由于,因为。

  14 talk sb. into (doing) sth. 说服某人做某事

  (回归课本P8)Go and see your teacher and try to talk him or her into giving you a better grade.

  去见你的老师并努力去说服他/她给你更高的分。

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①It took me a long time to talk him into joining us.

  说服他加入到我们中来花了我很长时间。

  ②(朗文P1704)I finally managed to persuade her to go out for a drink with me.

  我终于想办法说服了她和我出去喝一杯。

  14.I tried millions of times,but I can never ________ him ______ smoking.

  A.ask;for B.persuade;into

  C.talk;into

  D.talk;out of

  解析:选D。考查动词短语辨析。句意:我试了很多次,但我从来不能说服他不吸烟。ask sb.for sth.请求某人某事;persuade/talk sb.into doing sth.说服某人做某事;talk sb.out of doing sth.说服某人不做某事,符合句意。

  15 end up 最后有某种结局,结果为……,结

  束

  (回归课本P8)For example,have you ever wondered why some of the smartest students in your class,who you think deserve good grades,

  sometimes end up failing exams?

  例如:你是不是感到惊讶,为什么班里最聪明

  的学生,那些你认为应该成绩很好的,有时会

  考试不及格呢?

  归纳拓展

  end up doing最后结果是……

  end up with...以……而结束

  end up in...结果为……,最终会……

  come to an end结束

  put...to an end=put an end to使……终止

  in the end最后,终于

  by the end of到……末为止

  例句探源

  ①He’ll end up in prison if he’s not careful.

  如果他不小心,最后会锒铛入狱的。

  ②We were going to go out,but ended up watching videos.

  我们原计划外出,但结果却是在家看录像。

  ③Winning the competition put an end to his financial problems.

  在比赛中获胜使他的财政问题随之消失。

  15.翻译句子

  (1)我可不想弄到最后和那个故事中的人一样。

  _______________________________________

  答案:I don’t want to end up like that man in the story.

  (2)大多数减肥的人最后又胖了。

  _______________________________________

  答案:Most slimmers end up putting weight back on.

  16 draw up 起草,拟订,拉起,(车辆)停止

  (回归课本P8)Draw up an agenda and discuss it with the group.

  起草一份议程表和大家讨论一下。

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①You draw up a list of names first and we shall discuss it at the meeting tomorrow.

  你先草拟一份名单,我们要在明天的会议上讨论。

  ②In October the nights start drawing in.

  到10月份,天黑得越来越早了。

  16.结合下列句子,翻译出画线部分draw up的不同含义

  (1)The boat was drawn up on the shore.()

  答案:拉起,提起

  (2)We must draw

  up a contract.()

  答案:起草,拟订

  (3)The car drew

  up at the gate and three men got out.()

  答案:停下,停止

  17 in terms of 从……角度,就……而言

  (回归课本P9)Some are trying to study the possibility of improving a person’s EQ,especially in terms of “people skills”,...

  有些(科学家)正在尝试研究改善一个人的EQ的可能性,特别是在“人际方面”,……

  归纳拓展

  例句探源

  ①(朗文P2065)US foreign policy tended to see everything in terms of the Vietnam war.

  美国的外交政策往往从越南战争的角度来看待一切。

  ②(朗文P2065)The company’s prospects look good in the long term.

  公司的远景看好。

  ③What can we learn about old women in terms of fashion?

  在时装方面我们能从老年女同志那学些什么呢?

  17.(2011年东阳模拟)I feel sure that ________ qualification,ability and experience,you are abundantly suited to the position we have in mind.

  A.in need of B.in terms of

  C.in favor of

  D.in face of

  解析:选B。考查介词短语辨析。句意:就你的资格、能力、经验而言,我肯定你非常适合我们一直向往的那个职位。in terms of就……而言,从……方面;in need of 需要;in favor of支持,赞成;in face of面对。

  18

  compare...to... 把……比作……

  (回归课本P9)They also showed a better understanding of the disabled students’ feelings compared to students who had not been involved in the study.

  相比于那些没有参加研究的学生来说,他们还表现出了对残疾学生的感受更好的理解。

  归纳拓展

  compare...with...把……和……相比

  compared with/to...和……相比(用作介词),在句中作状语

  compare notes交换意见

  by/in comparison with sb./sth.与……比较起来,相比之下

  beyond (without)compare无与伦比

  例句探源

  ①People like comparing beautiful girls to flowers.

  人们喜欢把漂亮的女孩比作花朵。

  ②Compared to many people,she was really very fortunate.

  和很多人相比,她的确很幸运。

  ③Compare this car with that one,and you will find the differences between them.

  把这辆汽车与那辆汽车相比,你就会发现他们之间的区别。

  18.完成句子

  (1)________ ________ ________ ________(与这个相比),that book is more difficult.

  答案:Compared to this one

  (2)________ ________ ________ ________(与那本书比较),I found this one is more difficult.

  答案:Comparing with that book

  句型梳理

  1【教材原句】 On the other hand,there

  is

  little

  doubt

  that people with low EQs often have problems getting on with other people and dealing with difficult situations;...(P9)

  另一方面,毫无疑问情商低的人在与人相处、处理困难局面方面常有困难;……

  【句法分析】 there is little/no doubt that...毫无疑问,这是一个固定句型,其实doubt多作不可数名词,that引导的是同位语从句,用来说明doubt的具体内容。

  doubt作动词“怀疑”时,常用搭配为:在肯定句中,后接whether/if引导的宾语从句;在否定句或疑问句中,后接that引导的宾语从句。

  (1)对于……没有怀疑

  There is no doubt about/as to...

  There is little/not much doubt that...

  There is not much doubt about/as to...

  Sb.has/have no doubt that...

  (2)(某人)对于某事是否……持有怀疑

  There is some doubt whether...

  There is some doubt about/as to...

  Sb.has/have some doubt whether...

  Sb.has/have some doubt about/as to...

  (3)doubt的常见短语:

  beyond/out of doubt毫无疑问地;确实地

  in doubt可怀疑(的),不确定地(的)

  no doubt确实地,必定地

  without (a) doubt无疑地;必定地

  ①There is no doubt that he is an excellent student.

  毫无疑问,他是一名优秀学生。

  ②No doubt that she was disturbed by the noise.

  毫无疑问是噪音惊扰了她。

  ③Their acceptance of the contract is still in doubt.

  他们是否接受那份合同还说不准。

  19.完成句子

  Sally was ________ ________(无疑地;的确) one of the finest swimmers in the school.

  答案:no doubt

  20.(2011年上海模拟)There is no doubt _____ such an interesting story will be a box­office success.

  A.if B.so

  C.when

  D.that

  解析:选D。句意:这样有趣的故事无疑会取得票房成功的。“There is no doubt that...”毫无疑问。

  2【教材原句】 If

  necessary,look them up in a dictionary.(P14)

  如果有必要的话,就在词典中查一下它们。

  【句法分析】 If necessary=If it is necessary如果需要的话。

  如果从属连词后面的主语与主句的主语相同且谓语中含有be动词,可以省略从句中的主语和be动词;若从句中主谓是it+be的形式,it与be动词也可省略。常见结构有:If necessary/ possible...,When necessary...等。

  常见结构还有:从属连词+v.­ing/过去分词

  常用的从属连词有:when,while,though,as though,as if,although。

  ①I’ll stay up all night,if necessary,to get it finished.

  如果有必要,我会熬个通宵把这事做完。

  ②I want to avoid the rush­hour traffic if possible.如果有可能的话,我想避开交通高峰期的车流。

  【温馨提示】 这些连词后到底用doing还是done,取决于主语与动词的关系是主动还是被动。

  ③When asked about his father,he kept silent.

  当被问起他父亲时,他一句话也不说。

   ④Although coming very early,he didn’t see his friend.

  尽管来得很早,他还是没见到他的朋友。

  21.完成句子

  Have you got a free evening next week?________ ________(如果这样的话),let’s

  have dinner together.

  答案:If

  so

  22.—Do you think playing cards is beneficial to our study?

  —No,if ________,it can help us kill time when we have nothing to do.

  A.something B.anything

  C.nothing

  D.everything

  解析:选B。考查词义辨析。句意:——你认为打牌对我们的学习有益处吗?——没有。如果有帮助的话,当我们无事可干时,它可以帮助我们消磨时间。something多用于肯定陈述句;anything多用于疑问句、否定句、条件句中;nothing不合句意;everything所有一切,不合句意,故B项正确。

  作文指导

  记叙文(例:记人)

  【体裁导航】

  在高考写作中,要求直接对人物描述的文章不是很多,但写人的记叙文却是同学们必须掌握的。《普通高中英语课程标准(实验)》对记叙文的写作作了明确要求,所以,记叙文的写作,应引起同学们的重视。

  记叙文的写作,一般应考虑六个要素:时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果。遇到以图表的形式提供的材料时,注意要点应齐全。

  写记叙文时,由于多是叙述过去发生的动作,所以,叙述中常用过去时态,当然有时也会出现一般现在时或其他时态,尤其是在直接引语里。

  写人、记事、描述地点或刻画场景,最常用的文体可能就是记叙文了。因而,平时遇到一些好句子,就应当多记。例如:

  Joan is a pretty gentle lady in her early twenties.

  My sister is a boyish girl.She has short and straight hair like a boy’s.

  He is a handsome young man with bright eyes and broad shoulders.

  以上例句都是用于描述人的好句子,应首先学会灵活套用。长此以往,潜移默化,同学们的表达自会在不知不觉中达到“即便信手拈来,却也恰到好处”的境界。

  写人的记叙文当然离不开记事,但两者的侧重点有所不同。记人者,以人为主导,所写的事都是为衬托人物服务的,所以,记述时,外貌的描写、性格的刻画等等,都要服务于人物,不可喧宾夺主、本末倒置。

  【写作示例】

  请根据下面所提供的资料,写一篇介绍潘玮柏(Will Pan)的英语短文。

  潘玮柏,当今著名歌手,英俊潇洒,身高1.74米,

  1980年8月6日在上海出生。会汉语和英语两种语言。他喜欢篮球,最喜欢的音乐是Hip Hop、R&B和华语流行音乐(Chinese Pop Music)。他为人随和、活泼好动、笑容灿烂。他的愿望就是能够成为“super idol”(超级偶像)。

  注意:1.可根据内容要点适当增加细节以使行文连贯;

  2.词数:120左右。

  【写作要领】

  一.审题要点

  1.体裁:记叙文;

  2.时态:一般现在时;

  3.人称:第三人称。

  二.内容要点

  1.潘玮柏的概况描述;

  2.他的业余爱好及性情;

  3.他的愿望。

  【金点模板】

  一、开头

  参考句式:

  1.Will Pan, who was born on...,is a...

  2.Will Pan, one of the...,was born...

  3.Born on...,Will Pan is a...

  4.Will Pan was born...and he is one of the...

  二、主体

  参考句式:

  1.He can speak...as well as...

  2.He can not only...but also...

  3.He likes...most and dislikes...

  4.He is fond of...and...

  5.Everyone likes him very much.

  6.He is very popular among young men.

  为使各项内容衔接自然,可以适当添加过渡词。如:

  as well as;not only...but also... ;though;although... ;however;but...

  三、结尾

  参考句式:

  1.Wish he will succeed!

  2.Wish his dream come true!

  3.Good luck to him!

  4.Wish him a fantastic future!

  【范文点评】

  Will Pan

  ①Will Pan, one of the most famous pop stars now in China, was born on August 6, 1980 in Shanghai.He is about 1.74 meters tall and is a handsome young man.

  ②Will Pan can speak English as well as Chinese.His most favorite songs are Hip Hop, R & B, and the Chinese Pop Music and he

  himself sings many good songs of this kind. During his free time, he is fond of taking part in sports, and his favorite sport is basketball. ③Though he is famous, he is easy to get along with.He is lovely and actively.④He always wears a big smile on his face, so more and more young men and women become his fans.

  Pan has many wishes.⑤ To become a super idol becomes the biggest one of them.

  ①one of the most...作Will Pan的同位语使句子灵活。

  ②as well as用得好,也可用not only...but also...。

  ③转折词使用得当。

  ④wear a big smile表示带着微笑,使句子增色很多。

  ⑤用动词不定式作主语避免了文章句式的单调。

  ⑥加上祝愿语使得文章活泼生动。

  【类题尝试】

  请用英语写一篇120词左右的短文,介绍一下该人物,要求根据所给信息作适当发挥,且须包括以下三部分内容:

  1.对该人物的简单介绍;

  2.喜欢该人物的理由;

  3.从该人物身上得到的启示。

  ______________________________________________________________________

  ___________________________________

  One possible version:

  Thomas Edison

  Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating.In fact, he was a man full of imagination.

  I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world.He had more than 1,000 inventions.In his life time, he was always

  eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park”.He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.

  What impresses me most is his famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety­nine percent perspiration.” Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner.From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life

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