The first attempt of even the most talented artists,musicians,and writers is seldom a masterpiece.If you consider your drafts as (彩排),or tryouts,revising will seem a natural part of the writing__1__.
?The answer is adding,deleting,replacing,reordering,—__2__,underwent such a process.When Lloyd Webber began writing in 1984,he had in mind a funny,exciting production.However,when ,the audience saw a moving psychological love story set to music.The musical had__3__several revisions due,in part,to problems with costuming and makeup(戏服和化妆).For instance,Lloyd Webber__4__some of the music because the
When you revise,you change aspects of your work in__5__ to your evolving purpose,or to include__6__ideas or newly discovered information.
__7__,it is a major stage of the writing process,and writers revise every step of the way.Even your decision to__8__topics while prewriting is a type of revising.However,don't make the mistake of skipping the revision stage that follows__9__.Always make time to become your own__10__and view your dress rehearsal,so to speak.Reviewing your work in this way can give you__11new ideas.
Revising involves__12__the effectiveness and appropriateness of all aspects of your writing,making your purpose more clearly,and refocusing or developing the facts and ideas you present.When you revise,ask yourself the following questions,keeping in mind the audience for whom you are writing:Is my main idea or purpose__13__throughout my draft?Do I ever lose sight of my purpose?Have I given my readers all of the__14__—that is,facts,opinions,inferences—that they need in order to understand my main idea?Finally,have I included too many__15__details that may confuse readers?
1.A.technique
B.style
2.A.in particular
B.as a result
C.for example
D.in other words
3.A.undergone
B.skipped
C.rejected
D.replaced
5.A.addition
B.response
C.opposition
D.contrast
6.A.fixed
`B.ambitiousC.familiar
D.fresh
8.A.discuss
B.switchC.exhaust
D.cover
C.performing
D.training
10.A.director
B.master
C.audience
D.visitor
11.A.personal
B.valuable
C.basic
D.delicate
12.A.mixing
B.weakening
C.maintaining
D.assessing
14.A.angles
B.evidence
C.information
D.hints
15.A.unnecessary
B.uninteresting
C.concrete
D.final
【语篇解读】 修改是作品写作过程中非常重要且必须的步骤。本文讲述了作品修改的目的和途径。
2.答案 B [考查介词短语辨析。前面adding,deleting,replacing,reordering都是revising的某一方面,即revising和这些名词同义;in other words表示“换句话说”,符合句意。而in particular(尤其、特别,表强调)、as a result(因此,表结果)、for example(例如,表举例说明)都不符合题意。难度适中。]
4.A
答案 B [考查介词短语辨析。in addition to表示“而且;除……之外还有”,in opposition to表示“与……意见相反”,in contrast to表示“与……形成对比”,都与句意不符。in response to(作为对……的反应)在本句中表示“你修改作品是对你想改进作品目的的一种回应”。难度大。]
7.C 8.B 9.A 10.C 11.B 12.D 13.D 14.C
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