2017届高考英语一轮循环写作周周练：第18周 图画作文（新人教版含解析）

　　第十八周　图画作文

　　[学审题谋篇]

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　　(2016·辽宁省葫芦岛市一模)如今随着智能手机和电子设备的普及，“低头族”现象兴起。人们沉溺于手机等电子设备，因而忽略了自己和他人的沟通交流，甚至在家庭聚会上也只顾玩手机不和长辈聊天，使老人感到失落万分。请根据图画写一篇英语短文。

　　内容要点如下：

　　1．描述图画内容；

　　2．对图中现象加以分析；

　　3．针对这个现象提出建议。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100左右；

　　2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

　　1．审题

　　图画作文要审清题意，看懂图画所表达的意思，紧扣主题。审题时应做到三定：①定体裁；②定人称；③定时态。

　　如本文为夹叙夹议文；在叙述时和就图画议论时主要用第三人称，表述自己观点时用第一人称；时态主要用一般现在时。

　　2．谋篇

　　图画类作文以图画形式给出信息，所以需要抓住图画所传递的信息，将图画信息转化为文字要点。

　　如本文可以从三个方面进行描述：首先叙述图画内容；然后介绍图画所反映的社会现象；最后陈述应该怎样去做。

　　[学增分亮点]

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　　①As can be seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner. ②But when they sit down to table, the young just bury themselves in playing with their cellphones, totally ignoring their parents, who feel very lonely and sad.

　　③There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative effect on our lives. ④Heavy use of cellphones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely. ⑤Worse still, addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school, which adds to the elders’ worries. ⑥As far as I’m concerned, it’s necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. ⑦And I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.

　　[满分缘由]

　　1．结构布局

　　本文可分为两段：

　　第一段：介绍图画内容，全家人正在聚餐，但年轻人却在玩手机，完全不顾父母的感受；

　　第二段：陈述“低头族”这种社会现象，并就此现象提出了自己的看法。

　　2．亮点词汇

　　bury oneself in, have an effect on, widen, add to, as far as ...concerned, face to face, harmonious

　　3．亮点句式

　　第①句包含as引导的非限制性定语从句；

　　第②句包含when引导的时间状语从句、现在分词作状语和who引导的非限制性定语从句；

　　第⑤句包含which引导的非限制性定语从句；

　　第⑦句包含it作形式宾语和which引导的非限制性定语从句。

　　[句式改写]

　　1．用名词性从句改写句①

　　What_can_be_seen_from_the_picture_is_that_a_big_family_gets_together_to_have_a_big_dinner.

　　2．用动名词作主语和现在分词作结果状语改写⑤

　　Worse_still,_being_addicted_to_cellphones_might_also_lead_to_teenagers’_poor_performance_at_school,_thus_adding_to_the_elders’_worries.

　　3．用被动语态改写句⑥

　　As_far_as_I’m_concerned,_it’s_necessary_that_the_time_we_spend_using_cellphones_should_be_limited.

　　[写满分作文]

　　————————————————————————————————————— (2016·龙岩市质检)如何衡量一个人真正的品质，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语，结合图片所提示的信息，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

　　“The measure of a man’s real character is what he would do if he knew he would never be found out.”

　　—Thomas Macaulay

　　内容要求：

　　1．你对该引语的理解；2.举例说明；3.恰当的结尾。

　　注意：

　　1．内容至少包括一幅图片的信息；

　　2．文中不得出现考生的具体信息；

　　3．词数100左右；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：self­discipline n．自律　self­disciplined adj.自律的

　　[要求]

　　请用强调句型、状语从句、宾语从句、省略、it作形式主语、倒装、动名词作主语、not only ...but (also) ...和定语从句完成作文。

　　This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that　

　　参考范文：

　　This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that it is self­discipline that reflects a man’s real character. Therefore, we should be self­disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be found out.

　　For example, when taking exams, we should be self­disciplined enough and not cheat. For another, it is essential for us to learn to control ourselves well on the Internet. We can’t be addicted to computer games or bad information, nor can we use the Internet to attack others immorally and illegally. In addition, through self­discipline we should avoid and resist different kinds of temptations, which is of great help to prevent corruptions.

　　In conclusion, being self­disciplined not only helps us improve ourselves, but (also) contributes to building up a harmonious and civilized society. As the saying goes, the day has eyes and the night has ears. We should make a reasonable choice about what to do wherever and whenever we are.