2016届高考英语二轮复习专题综合能力训练：22 短文改错（含解析）

　　专题能力训练二十二　短文改错

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　　A

　　Sometime in February,my teacher told us about the city speech contest,its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic.Then I carefully prepared for contest.A couple of weeks later,after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists!The final was held soon.I was the sixth to presenting the speech.How a relief when I finished it!After the last person finished,the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize.The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering!I was extremely happy.It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

　　答案:

　　Sometime in February,my teacher told us about the city speech contest,its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.I thought of

　　my grandma would be my perfect topic.Then I carefully prepared for

　　contest.A couple of weeks later,after the first round I was

　　to be one of the seven finalists!The final was held soon.I was the sixth to presenting the speech.How a relief when I finished it!After the last person finished,the judge made their final decisions and announced that I

　　won first prize.The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering!I was extremely happy.It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

　　B

　　Mr Liu Jin,aging 39,is working in a factory in Shanghai as an chemical engineer.After he graduated from Nanjing University in 1978,he sent to Tokyo University to study chemical engineering.Through her hard work for 4 years,he achieved remarkably results in scientific research.But he received a doctor’s degree in 1982.A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promise to give him a good salary but he didn’t receive it.In 1983,he returned back to China without a moment’s hesitation.He has made up his minds to devote all his life to our country.

　　答案:

　　Mr Liu Jin,aging 39,is working in a factory in Shanghai as an chemical engineer.After he graduated from Nanjing University in 1978,he

　　sent to Tokyo University to study chemical engineering.Through her hard work for 4 years,he achieved remarkably results in scientific research.But he received a doctor’s degree in 1982.A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promise to give him a good salary but he didn’t receive it.In 1983,he returned back

　　to China without a moment’s hesitation.He has made up his

　　to devote all his life to our country.

　　C

　　With the national college entrance examination approach,many students are too worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness.It’s a fair common phenomenon among us student.Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.

　　First of all,you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test.Secondly,it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions.I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least,you ought to believe yourselves and keep a good state of mind.Follow my tips,but you’ll overcome your exam anxiety.

　　答案:

　　With the national college entrance examination ,many students are too worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness.It’s a fair common phenomenon among us .Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.

　　First of all,you should spend a

　　plenty of time preparing for the test.Secondly,it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions.I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least,you ought to believe

　　yourselves and keep a good state of mind.Follow my tips,but you’ll overcome your exam anxiety.

　　D

　　Li Ming and Wang Ying are student of Senior Three.They all work hard but they have different learning method.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher.As a result,he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework.But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep.However,Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning.She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class.Because this,she spends less time doing her homework,which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.

　　答案:

　　Li Ming and Wang Ying are student of Senior Three.They all work hard but they have different learning method.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher.As a result,he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework.But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep.However,Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning.She listens

　　and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class.Because

　　this,she spends less time doing her homework,which makes it is

　　possible for her to go to bed early.

　　E

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance,which carry them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped with death.

　　As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　答案:

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my

　　ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance,which carry them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped with death.

　　As some illegal businessmen

　　only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile,I do hope

　　whole society can realize the

　　of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　F

　　Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home.I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash.Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away.I went up and found the two drivers bad injured,bleeding and trap in the taxis.Luckily,they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance.As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast.It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.

　　答案:

　　Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home.I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went

　　loud crash.Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far

　　away.I went up and found the two drivers bad injured,bleeding and trap in the taxis.Luckily,they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance.As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast.It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and .

　　G

　　Dear Jin Jing,

　　Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next,trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly.

　　Yours,

　　Lily

　　答案:

　　Dear Jin Jing,

　　Your problem is

　　common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next,trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly.

　　Yours,

　　Lily

　　H

　　I’m writing to invite you to visit China and spending the summer vacation with me.I have made wonderful plan for it.First,we can go to Qingdao,there it is cool and mild,and have funs at the seaside.Then we were to participate in a taiji camp in the Wudang Mountains.You are curious about Chinese kung fu,but I believe this is a good chance to learn it.Last of all,I have also been longed to take you to the countryside.We can stay there for a few days and visit some relatives of me.I hope this plan suits you good and I am look forward to your coming.

　　答案:

　　I’m writing to invite you to visit China and spending the summer vacation with me.I have made

　　wonderful plan for it.First,we can go to Qingdao,there it is cool and mild,and have funs at the seaside.Then we were to participate in a taiji camp in the Wudang Mountains.You are curious about Chinese kung fu,but I believe this is a good chance to learn it.Last of all,I have also been longed to take you to the countryside.We can stay there for a few days and visit some relatives of me.I hope this plan suits you good and I am look forward to your coming.

　　I

　　Last Sunday I saw a worst storm this year.It came sudden and went on for over three hours.After lunch,I went into my room to have a rest.The air was hot,but all was quiet.Then a strong wind started to blow into my room.Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window.As I ran out to catch it,big drop of rain began to fall.When I come back into the house,it was raining more harder and harder.Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house.When I ran out to find out that had happened,a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.

　　答案:

　　Last Sunday I saw a worst storm this year.It came

　　and went on for over three hours.After lunch,I went into my room to have a rest.The air was hot,but all was quiet.Then a strong wind started to blow into my room.Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out

　　the open window.As I ran out to catch it,big drop of rain began to fall.When I come back into the house,it was raining more harder and harder.Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house.When I ran out to find out that had happened,a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.

　　J

　　There are many people think that wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore,in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to get worse and he led a miserably life.Although the best doctors called for him,he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health,you will not be able to do what you want to do.So I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself and trying to make money.Instead,take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.

　　答案:

　　There are many people thinkthat wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore,in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to get worse and he led a miserablylife.Although the best doctors

　　called for him,he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health,you will not be able to do what you want to do.So I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself and trying to make money.Instead,take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.

　　K

　　Three years ago,I became a student in a ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I find the teachers patient and considerate.Besides,I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best use for it.I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties,they are always helpful.Soon,I became one of the top student in my class,what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are.

　　答案:

　　Three years ago,I became a student in a ordinary school. as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I find the teachers patient and considerate.Besides,I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best use for it.I worked hardly and got along well

　　my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties,they are always helpful.Soon,I became one of the top

　　in my class, greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that

　　how you use it that determines who you are.

　　L

　　Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother.He has been died for a year.When I was a teenager,he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn.We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning,stayed in local restaurant for breakfast,and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations.Just after dawn,he would find the right spot in the woods.He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement.Though I never hunted an animal successfully,but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.

　　答案:

　　Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother.He has been died for a year.When I was a teenager,he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn.We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning,stayed in

　　local restaurant for breakfast,and then

　　on to one of his hunting destinations.Just after dawn,he would find the right spot in the woods.He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement.Though I never hunted an animal successfully,but

　　I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.

　　M

　　(2017·成都七中二诊模拟)

　　I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides,we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.

　　So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of the our time.In addition,pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.

　　答案:

　　I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides,we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.

　　So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of the

　　our time.In addition,pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves

　　tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.We should think seriously about this issue and make

　　best use of our time.

　　N

　　(2017·陕西五校第一次模拟)

　　Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested.It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future.However,those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development.They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs.In my opinion,a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university.But if we couldn’t obtain both,the first thing to consider is a good major,because no matter where we study,they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.

　　答案:

　　Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by

　　the college entrance examination.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested .It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future.However,those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development.They also believe that students

　　from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs.In my opinion,abest choice is to choose a good major at a good university.But if we couldn’t obtain both,the first thing to consider is a good major,because no matter where we study,they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.