江西莲花县2016高考英语书面表达（二轮）基础品析（1）
【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是商丘某高中学生李华，请为你的澳大利亚笔友Tim写封电子邮件，介绍商丘的情况及一些旅游景点，希望Tim到商丘来旅游。主要内容包括：
1．商丘地处中原，交通便利，气候宜人。
2．重点介绍两处旅游景点，如：南湖、商丘古城遗址、应天书院遗址等。
注意：1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：商丘古城--the ancient city of Shangqiu
应天书院--Ying tian Academy
南湖--the South Lake
Dear Tim,
Welcome to my hometown, Shangqiu. ___________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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书面表达 （满分 25分）
Dear Tim,
Welcome to my hometown, Shangqiu. Shangqiu is located in Henan province and has the convenient transportation and pleasant climate.
Shangqiu is rich in tourist attractions such as the South Lake，the ancient city of Shangqiu.
The South Lake is well known for its beautiful scenery and clear water, the banks of which are lined with green trees. Another famous site is the ancient city of Shangqiu. Now it lies in the south of Shangqiu City. It is not only very beautiful but also has a long history. When you walk along the ancient wall, you can think of many stories happening in Shangqiu. I am sure you’ll have a good time in Shangqiu.
I am looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
书面表达
假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。
1．过去对成年的向往；
2．现在的感受和认识；
3．将来的目标及措施。
4．参考词汇：责任responsibility
注意：1.词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grownup”．______
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Good_morning，everyone!
The_topic_of_my_speech_today_is_“Thoughts_on_becoming_a_grownup”．During my childhood，I dreamed to become an adult like my parents.I hoped to have more freedom to do or have everything.But today's adult ceremony is a moving occasion，when I find things quite different.Now I am a grownup.I realize that growingup of a man is a process in one's life，and see the responsibility of being 18 years old.First of all，I express my thanks to my parents，and teachers who have witnessed our whole process of growing up.I definitely feel more responsible now.
I have so many great dreams.I have strong confidence in myself.From now on，I will keep trying，and keep working hard to make my dreams come true.I should have a sense of responsibility for our society.I'm determined to use all my abilities and talents to make contributions to our motherland.I believe every one of us can achieve the goals tomorrow!
Thank you for listening.
书面表达
随着高考的临近，部分高三住校生要求搬出学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子。针对这种现象，各方反应不一。请根据下面提示，一分为二地写一篇短文，说说两者各自的好处与弊端，并发表你的观点。
1．学习时间和效果；
2．安全性；
3．自由性；
4．与同学交往。
注意：1.两方面的理由至少要有两条；
2．词数：150左右。
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Nowadays，some students would not like to live in a dormitory.Instead，they rent houses outside the school.
There are advantages for both.Living in a dormitory can increase the friendship and cooperation with roommates.And，of course，it is safer.A dormitory is more like a small society，which enables students to learn to adapt to each other，and prepare for the social life later.As for renting houses to live alone，it's better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.
As a result，you can have more time to devote yourself to studying wholeheartedly.But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.
Anyhow，as a student，I prefer living in a dormitory.
书面表达（满分25分）
假如你叫李华，今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：
知心话 感恩 感谢父母的关心、鼓励
对父母的期望
1. 多加交流 2. 适时提供帮助
学习打算 考生自拟（至少写两点）
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：120左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）
作文参考范文：
Dear Mom and Dad, With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you! During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state. I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success.Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains." Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies. Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【2016高考训练】书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是高一1班学生李华，在新的学校学习已一个月有余，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友Jane写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活。
介绍你的学校和班级
你的作息时间
你的同学
你最喜欢的老师（请将你最喜欢的老师化名为Ms. Wang）
注意：100词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
I’ve been at senior high school for more than a month. I’m writing down my thoughts about my new school life.
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Yours
Li Hua
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Dear Jane,
I’ve been at Senior High School for more than a month. I’m writing down my thoughts about my new school life.
My new school is a well-known school with a long history. There are 50 classes, more than 300 teachers and over 3,500 students in my school. The classrooms are amazing. Every room has a computer with a special screen, almost as big as a cinema screen. And there are sixty students in my class, who are all hard-working. I’m getting on very well with my classmates. My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms. Wang, whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers. She has many ways to make her classes lively and interesting. I don’t think I will be bored in her class.
We usually get up at 5:30 and our class starts at 7:45. I always take part in colorful after-class activities and we go to bed at ten.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon..
Yours
Li Hua