江西莲花县2016高考英语书面表达（二轮）基础品析（2）
【2016高考训练题】书面表达：（满分25分）
假定你是李华，对中国传统医药很感兴趣。你获悉中国药学家屠哟哟因发现了青篙素被授予2015年诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。请给你的美国朋友David发一封邮件分享此消息。信件须包括以下内容：
心情：骄傲和激动。
评价：她找到了治疗疟疾的方法，数千万人从中受益。
志向：立志考入屠哟坳的母校北大，造福人民。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇：
1．药学家：pharmacologist
2.青篙素：artemisinin
3. 2015年诺贝尔生理学或医学奖：The 2015 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
4.疟疾：malaria
Dear David,
【参考范文】One possible version
Dear David,
I would like to share a piece of exciting news with you.
Tu Youyou, a great pharmacologist of my country, was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for her discovery of artemisinin. Hearing the news, I felt proud as well as excited. She pioneered a new approach to malaria treatment. Her discovery has benefited hundreds of millions of people and promises to benefit many more.
I have been interested in Chinese traditional medicine. I will work hard to be admitted to Beijing University, from which Tu Youyou graduated. I will follow her example, devoted to benefiting as many people as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
书面表达
某英文报近期举办以“感恩与我同行”为主题的英语征文大赛。请你根据右图及提示的内容写一篇感恩老师的英文短文参赛。
主要内容如下：
(1)感谢老师的关心鼓励；
(2)感谢老师的辛勤劳动；
(3)感谢老师的谆谆教诲；
(4)词数150左右。
注意：短文须围绕“感恩与我同行”的主题。
Thanks to You，My Teacher
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【参考范文】
Thanks_to_You，My_Teacher
I would like to thank you for all the help you have given me.You are very friendly to everyone in our class.You always get on very well with us students.
What impresses me most is that you are not only our teacher but also our friend.You are always so patient whenever we ask you questions.We are all moved when you listen carefully and explain everything so thoroughly.You show us different ways to learn English.We feel so encouraged and become more comfortable in your class.You make your class so lively and interesting that every one of us is always eager to participate and practice.Our English has improved so much.
You teach us not only how to learn English well but also how to be good citizens.We owe much to you，my teacher.
书面表达
现在全社会都在倡导低碳生活，呵护地球家园。而每年的元宵节，你所在的城市都要举行一场20分钟的焰火晚会。据报道：一场这样的焰火晚会耗资大约150万元。市民为此议论纷纷。请你以“Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks？”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对此的看法。
要求：1.不要逐字翻译所给素材；
2．为了使行文流畅，可适当发挥；
3．词数120左右。
Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks?
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【参考范文】
Is_it_Wise_to_Celebrate_the_Lantern_Festival_with_Fireworks?
In China，it's a custom to celebrate the Lantern Festival by setting off fireworks.Is it wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival with fireworks?
In my city，there is an annual firework show sponsored by the government.It is true that setting off fireworks does offer relaxation and excitement to the citizens.However，I don't think it is wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival in this way.My reasons are as follows.
Firstly，it is really a waste of money.The fireworks last only 30 minutes，but it costs about 1.5 million yuan，which can be used for the city construction.Secondly，while fireworks are wonderful to look at，they cause air pollution.Besides，some unexpected fires might break out，causing heavy damage and loss.
In conclusion，celebrating the Lantern Festival with fireworks isn't necessary.
【2017黄浦区】Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
联系高三学习生活，详细描述一件令你印象最深刻的事。
（文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名。）
【参考范文】Sample 1
Away flows time. There are so many unforgettable things in my school life which are worth mentioning. The most wonderful one, which I’ll remember for good is taking part in the English speech contest.
I used to be a shy boy who lacked confidence. At the beginning of the senior three year my best friend encouraged me to participate in the speech contest. Afraid of delivering an address on the stage, I declined. I, in the end, agreed as he insisted. He helped me practice my speech skills as well as gestures and standing position. My skills were improved, modestly but steadily.
Then came the day of the contest. Nervous as I was, I walked onto the stage, smile on face. With so many people seated in the hall, I felt anxious and my speech was not fluent at first. When I saw my friend listening attentively, I remembered the nights we spent together practicing speech. I was inspired and the speech flowed on successfully. The audience applauded with appreciation at the end of the speech while I happily found I was no longer the shy boy. It was the support from my friend that enabled me to gain confidence.
While life in senior three is occupied, wonderful things take place every day, the precious friendliness has left such a deep impression on my mind that I will never forget it. (231 words)
(9+9+4=23)
【参考范文】Sample 2
The thing that impressed most in grade 12 took place on a Sunday morning. That was when I took part in an English contest, in the final stage.
The contest was so difficult that I thought the only thing I could do was to wish myself good luck. The listening comprehension was unlike what I’d prepared for, so I just tried my best. But when I moved to the reading part, the situation got better. What I’d thought to be greek turned out to be just the combination of words I knew the meaning of. I felt a little bit happier. As to the writing, I had wanted to give it up and let my creation fly, but I surprisingly found that I had a lot to say about the topics. I even used the stories of a scientist I’d read about to support my idea! Then it was an oral exam. Although it was a contest, I still told the teachers exact what I had in mind. I didn’t have anything fancy to say, but the thoughts were genuine.
The result came and I won the third prize! At first I thought it was sheer luck, but then I realized that what I had learned helped a lot. I didn’t mean to prepare for it, but what I had done brought me what I deserved. Even though I’m no faced with the college entrance exam, I still know that what really matters is the process of learning. Do your job and the result won’t fail you! (257 words)
(8+8+4=20)
【参考范文】Sample 3
Do you have the fear of acting on the stage? Well, I do, at least before I was asked to perform at the school’s Arts Festival.
As the Arts Festival drew near, the teachers asked me to read an English poem, which made my heart jump. This would be a perfect chance to show my English talents, but not in front of the whole school! I was a shy boy that even freaked out when speaking in front of my class. As I strongly opposed to this kind offer, the teacher told me, “You’ll never know how things go unless you give it a try.”
Encouraged as I was, I repeated the poem in front of the mirror for countless times, being more confident every time. The day finally came and I was on the stage, sharing the beauty of English with the whole school. I managed to read the poem in an idiomatic accent without a single mistake and I wasn’t really that nervous as I thought I would be. I was filled with pride as the sound of applause rose in every corner of the auditorium.
Just as my teacher said, taking the first step toward the unknown is the greatest achievement, I will pump myself up for all the coming challenges in life and I will never forget my first step on the stage. (227 words)
(6+8+3=17)
【参考范文】Sample 4
The life of Senior 3 is like a chocolate having lots of tastes. My most impressive taste is the experiences of participating in the Physics Olympics.
The days that I spent preparing for the contest are full of depression and happiness. I enjoyed the moment when I worked out a difficult problem. My pals and I often argued about a ambiguous problem for a long time. However, the taste was terrible sometimes. I read the reference books till midnight and did a lot of exercises. I believed that my dream would come true if I worked hard enough.
To my disappointment, I failed to get the award. But I think the tears and experiences will become my most valuable wealth in the future.
(123 words)
（7+7+2=16）