短文改错精讲精炼01
1. 下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号【∧】，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线【﹨】划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.
短文改错
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was
decided
having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought
getting
dollars
about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick.
when
Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible,
totally
more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without
being told∧. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.
to
advice
In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.
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my
2.
Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them. One day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager’s office, the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn’t help saying, “OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought for a while and said, “I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great! I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless.
短文改错:
Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them.
but
One day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist whom can
reading
who
type 200 words a minute .” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager’s office,
excited
the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised
her head. “Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand.
his
hands
She couldn’t help saying, “OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The
manager thought for a while and said, “I will pay you 77 dollars for ∧first three
the
months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great!
answered
I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless.
later
3.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Wei Fang,
It s a long time since I heard from you in last lime．Now I' d like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career．
A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for school．He stood outside the classroom silent．I smiled to him and let him come．
After a while, he began to cry．Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened．He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her．At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness．Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named "Mother" for the students．From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them．Do you think so? I'm looking forward to your reply．
4.
I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. It was good trip at te beginning and something unexpected happened half way. One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and be couldn’t move any far. Nobody knew what to do it. One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile pone, but there was no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him rested in it. He took some medicine. Then he drink some water, and ate some food. After while, he felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.
5.
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at
makes
to
relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play
movies
the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!
the
What
However, my parents think different. They don’t want me ∧ go out. They are afraid I’ll be
differently
to
knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose
fall
my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to
kept
so
persuade them.