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18.
After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and asked him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my head teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well to improving composition writing. That was really good idea! What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.
【参考答案】
After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and
watching
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asked him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned
After/When
to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu,
were
my head teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my
I
progress
Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read
should或删除must
more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading
keep
newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing. That was really∧
good
∧a
good idea! What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.
19.
Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu.One Monday morning, when she entered in the classroom, we found that she was young and beautiful lady.Then she introduced herself and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu.Late, she let us go the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn.When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class.She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid.I believe you can do it well.” At last, I went to the blackboard.She praised me for that I had done.
参考答案
Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu.One Monday morning, when
given
she entered in the classroom, we found that she was∧ young and beautiful lady.Then she
去掉in
a
introduced herself and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu.Late, she let us go to
she
Later
去掉to
the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn.When it was my turn, I felt
say
too shy that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class.She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t
so
kindly
be afraid.I believe you can do it well.” At last, I went to the blackboard.She praised me for that
what
I had done.
After shopping, mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch.I notice mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple.They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well.As we left, mother stopped on their table.“Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman.“You remind me so many of my mother.May I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it.After we left, I said, “ That was very nice of you, mother.So I didn’t think she looked like grandma.” “Neither did me.” said mother cheerfully.
参考【答案】
After shopping, mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch.
I notice mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an
noticed
occupied
elderly woman and/a young couple.They ate silently, and it
was clearly that things were not going well.As we left,
clear
mother stopped on their table.“Excuse me,” she said, put
at或by
putting
her arm around the unhappy old woman.“You remind me so many
much
of my mother.May I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as
she accepted to it.After we left, I said, “ That was very
nice of you, mother.So I didn’t think she looked like
But
grandma.” “Neither did me.” said mother cheerfully.
I
21.
We senior school students do have some growing pains.Take some of my classmate for example,they often feel upset because the expectations from parents,endless homework and the pressure of exams.These serious affect their physical and mental well-being.Therefore,I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains.First,that is a good idea to have heart-to-heart talks with our parents,tell them we won’t disappoint them.Meanwhile,it's advisable to spare sonic time to take some exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energetic.As long as we were fully prepared,we are sure to achieve great success in my academic performance.
改错【10×1=10】:
We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my classmate for example,
classmates
they often feel upset because∧ the expectations from parents, endless homework and the pressure of exams.
of
These serious affect their physical and mental well-being. Therefore, I think about it quite necessary to
seriously
take measures to relieve the pains. First, that is a good idea to have heart-to-heart talks with our
it
parents, tell them we won’t disappoint them. Meanwhile, it’s advisable to spare some time to take some
telling
exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energetic.
besides
relaxed
As long as we were fully prepared, we are sure to achieve great success in my academic performance.
are
our
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