2016届广东省天河区高考英语二轮语法复习精讲精练：短文改错06

　　短文改错精讲精炼06

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　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　Dear Editor，

　　I'm writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76.________________

　　Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live77.________________

　　without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78.________________

　　without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79.________________

　　Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water.80.________________

　　To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81.________________

　　out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82.________________

　　drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83.________________

　　ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84.________________

　　water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85.________________

　　Sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　[解析]

　　Dear Editor，

　　I'm writing to tell you∧opinion about water saving.76.__my__

　　Water is important. We, as well as animal,_cannot live77.__animals__

　　without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78.__nor__

　　without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79.__seems__

　　Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water.80.__they__

　　To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81.__the/this/that__

　　out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82.__because/since/as__

　　drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83.__√__

　　ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84.__used__

　　water for[KG3mm] which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85.__for__

　　Sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　76. opinion前加my　 tell sb sth告诉某人某事，题目中直接宾语opinion是作者的看法，故在其前面加 my。

　　77. animal→animals　animal是一个单数可数名词不能单独使用，这里表示类别，用复数。

　　78. or→nor　与前面的neither呼应，构成固定搭配neither…nor…既不……也不……。

　　79. seemed→seems　全篇文章都是以一般现在时为主，再根据后面的is，可知用现在时。

　　80. we→they　 根据前面的Many countries可知用they替代这些国家。

　　81. a→the/this/that　这里的problem指缺乏水的情况，因此属于特指。

　　82. though→because/since/as　根据后面的trees will help save water是解释种树的原因，所以用because/since/as。

　　83. √

　　84. using→used　根据后面的in washing可知是洗衣服用过的水，所以用used。

　　85. 去掉for　which指代water，作主语，不需要for。

　　Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middle­age woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her.

　　However, I always can't help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears . Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual.

　　The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.

　　[解析]

　　Time and tide wait

　　no man.My mother is becoming a __middle­age woman quietly. She ha been busy running after us all the years.My father is very busy every day outside.Bu the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulde.Because my school is far from my home，I have to go to school by the　train and my mother sees me off at the station every time.I often choose a seat wher is close to the window，so I can see her.

　　However，I always can't help ru tears from my eyes.All the buildings and people outside the window disappear.I wave gentl to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears.Up to now，even if h is busy，she still does it as usual.

　　The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.

　　[2017·银川实验中学月考]

　　Last year, I was addicted with playing computer games. I found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessly. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Because I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes.

　　Fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talks with me about his problem. At last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself.

　　[解析]

　　Last year, I was addicted wit playing computer games. I found it hard to breakin away from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to 　 promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessl. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Becaus I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons givin in classes.

　　Fortunately,

　　psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talk with me about hi problem. At last, he offered his advice on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself.

　　26.

　　I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That's it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.

　　[解析]

　　I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littl aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my to. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things di 　

　　wrong, I got angry and broke i. For a while

　　parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see whic was happening. When I tea apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That's it. No more toys t you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I mus make my toys to'last. My attitude changed from then on.

　　1. little→less　考查副词的用法。根据句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处less修饰形容词。

　　2. toy→toys　考查名词的单复数形式。根据each of 可知，应该是“我”的玩具中的每一个，故用复数形式toys。

　　3. did→went或者did 后加go　考查固定短语的表达法。解题关键：掌握短语go wrong意为：出错。

　　4. it→them　考查代词指代一致。此处指前文的toys，所以后文用them。

　　5. 在parents前加my　考查代词的用法。英语中需前后一致，my parents bought me new toys.此处my和me对应。

　　6. which→what　考查名词性从句的连接词。此处what作宾语从句的主语。句意：明白所发生的一切。

　　7. tear→tore　考查动词时态。通过观察整个文章的时态以及my fifth birthday可知，此处用一般过去时。

　　8. to→for　考查介词的用法。此处意为：不再给你买玩具了。toys for sb意为：给某人的玩具。

　　9. must→could/might　考查情态动词。根据句意：拥有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。

　　10. 去掉last前的to　考查不定式作宾语补足语。解题关键：make sb/sth do，此处make作“使”解，其后接不带to的不定式作宾补。

　　27.

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

　　[答案]

　　Two years befor， I traveled to Brazil and I rented for'a car. Unfortunat， I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two wee. I called my parents, s I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they wil be worried about mysel because I was so farthe away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them intereste stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew

　　truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

　　28.

　　My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit

　　Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but

　　it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

　　We lived in a comfortably

　　double­room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high­speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

　　It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

　　[解析]

　　My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visi

　　Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, bu

　　it is easy to go to'anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

　　We lived in a comfortabl

　　double­room with a big bath. What I liked best wer the free high­speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared fo my friends many photos takin in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dis.

　　It is such

　　great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of m who is going to Beijing.

　　1．visit→visited　根据时间状语last month可知本句时态是一般过去时，故动词用过去式。

　　2．but→and/so　前后文是承接或因果关系，故连词用and或so。

　　3．to去掉　anywhere是指地点的副词，其前不用介词。

　　4．comfortably→comfortable　修饰名词double­room应用形容词。

　　5．were→was　what引导主语从句，其谓语动词应用单数形式，故系动词were改为was。

　　6．for→with　动词share与介词with构成搭配，意思是“和某人分享”。

　　7．taking→taken　take与所修饰词photos是逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词作后置定语。

　　8．dish→dishes　由several修饰，名词应用复数。

　　9．such后加a　such修饰的hotel是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词a。

　　10．me→mine　双重所有格的构成是“of ＋名词性物主代词或名词所有格”。

　　29.

　　Dear Mary，

　　I've received your e­mail. Don't worried about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest. I'm afraid I can't agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and it is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in the future. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardly, you will succeed. I'm looking forward to hearing a good news from you !

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　[解析]

　　Dear Mary，

　　I've received your e­mail. Don't

　　或 about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But i my surprise, you say you will give up lear English. The reason is becaus you have not done well in it recently and you have los interest. I'm afraid I can't agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, an it is widely used in the world today and it will be

　　important tool in the future. Besid， it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardl， you will succeed.I'm looking forward to hearing a good news from you !

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　Dear Wei Fang，

　　It's a long time since I heard from you in last time. Now I'd like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.

　　A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for school. He stood outside the classroom silent. I smiled to him and let him come.

　　After a while, he began to cry. Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened. He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother” for the students.

　　From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them. Do you think so? I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　[解析]

　　Dear Wei Fang，

　　It's a long time since I heard from you in 　last time.Now I’ d like to tell you

　　impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.

　　A boy, Li Ming, who father died a month ago, was late for school.He stood outside the classroom silen.I smiled to him and let him com 或.

　　After a while, he began to cry.Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what ha happened.He told me his mother was ill bu he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his wor， I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song

　　was 　 named “Mother” for the students.

　　From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and di our best to help them.Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your reply.

　　31.

　　Dear Diana，

　　Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.

　　[解析]

　　Dear Diana，

　　Thank you for the lovely day we hav with you. It was so kind fo you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunat， the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, fo a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mil. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unles the road was clear. In the car park her Gina nearly got knocked over as

　　car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. The finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to' home.

　　76. have→had。全文讲述的是过去的事情，因此用过去时。

　　77. for→of。It’s kind of sb. to do sth.为固定句式。

　　78. Unfortunate→Unfortunately。副词作状语，修饰全句。

　　79. for a result中的for→as。as a result为固定短语，意思是“因而”。

　　80. mile→miles。前面有six修饰，因此名词应该用复数形式。

　　81. unless→until/till。空后的内容是前面的时间状语。

　　82. here→there。讲述离自己远的地方用there。

　　83. as car中间加a。car是可数名词单数，因此用a。

　　84. They→We。全文用第一人称讲述发生在自己身上的事情。

　　85. 去掉home前的to。home是副词，前面没有介词。

　　32.

　　We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my classmate for example，they often feel upset because the expectations from parents，endless homework and the pressure of exams. These serious affect their physical and mental well­being. Therefore，I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains. First，that is a good idea to have heart­to­heart talks with our parents，tell them we won't disappoint them. Meanwhile，it's advisable to spare some time to take some exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energetic. As long as we were fully prepared，we are sure to achieve great success in my academic performance.

　　[解析]

　　We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my classmat for example, they often feel upset because

　　the expectations from parents, endless homework and the pressure of exams. These seriou affect their physical and mental well­being. Therefore, I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains. First, tha is a good idea to have heart­to­heart talks with our parents, tel them we won't disappoint them. Meanwhile, it's advisable to spare some time to take some exercise besid our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxin and energetic. As long as we wer fully prepared, we are sure to achieve great success in m academic performance.