2016届高考英语二轮复习阶段滚动补偿练：10

　　阶段滚动补偿练 十

　　限时40分钟/组

　　第一组

　　Ⅰ.短文改错

　　(2015·浙大附中模拟)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)画掉。

　　修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in the play, that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl, I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so. Now I have changed great. In class, I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pains, no gains. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses.

　　答案:

　　I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play

　　called

　　the leading role in the play，that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl，I used to be which

　　quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage

　　encouraged

　　me to do so. Now I have changed great. In class，I am often the first one to stand up greatly

　　and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pains，no gains. Now I make

　　am always brave enough ∧overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in

　　to

　　into

　　a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but

　　and

　　only in this way can we make progresses.

　　progress

　　Ⅱ. 书面表达

　　学校计划举行英语作文竞赛, 主题为“We Need Advice from Older Generations”。请根据以下要求写一篇100-120个词的作文。

　　你遇到了困难或问题, 不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈, 后来问题得到了解决。要求写清楚下面三点:

　　1. 当时面临的困难或问题是什么?

　　2. 你获得的指教是什么?

　　3. 结果如何?

　　注意: 在作文中不能出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名。

　　【参考范文】

　　One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to learning English. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination. I felt very disappointed.

　　So I asked my grandpa for advice when I went home. Hearing what I told him, he said the score was not everything. We can’t judge our improvement only by one examination. He encouraged me to stick to working hard for a long time to check my results.

　　I took my grandpa’s advice and have been working hard since then. Now my English is much better than before. From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generations.

　　第二组

　　Ⅰ. 短文改错

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)画掉。

　　修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Nowadays million of people of all ages take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun. Every year more and more people started a stamp collection of your own. In addition, they discover an interest which can even last a lifetime. Stamps are everywhere, as result, starting a collection of stamps are easy. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives but letters from friends can all provide people for stamps from all over the world. But once a person has started collecting serious, he will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club which exists to add more stamps to his collection.

　　答案:

　　Nowadays million of people of all ages take pleasure in a hobby which is both

　　millions

　　interested and fun. Every year more and more people started a stamp collection of

　　interesting

　　start

　　your own. In addition, they discover an interest which can even last a lifetime.

　　their

　　Stamps are everywhere, as∧result, starting a collection of stamps are easy. Holiday

　　a

　　is

　　and birthday postcards from relatives but letters from friends can all provide people

　　and

　　for stamps from all over the world. But once a person has started collecting serious ,

　　with

　　seriously

　　he will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club which exists to add more stamps to his collection.

　　1. 【解析】第一句中的million→millions。当hundred, thousand或million前没有基数词修饰时, 其后要加上s和介词of。

　　2. 【解析】第一句中的interested→interesting。根据句意可知先行词为a hobby, 定语从句中which替代先行词作主语, 其后的表语形容词要用v. -ing形式。

　　3. 【解析】第二句中的started→start。根据时间状语every year可知本句需要用一般现在时。

　　4. 【解析】第二句中的your→their。主语为people, 句中的代词应该和主语保持人称上的一致, 故改为their。

　　5. 【解析】第四句中的as后加a。as a result为固定短语, 意为“结果”。

　　6. 【解析】第四句中的第二个are→is。动名词作主语时谓语动词用单数形式, 故改为is。

　　7. 【解析】第五句中的but→and。根据句意“来自亲戚的假日卡片和生日卡片以及来自朋友的信件都可以给人们提供一些邮票”可知两个主语之间为并列关系, 故用and。

　　8. 【解析】第五句中的for→with。provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物, 为动词的固定用法。

　　9. 【解析】第六句中的serious→seriously。修饰谓语动词要用副词, 故改为副词seriously。

　　10. 【解析】去掉第六句中的in。join表示加入某组织时为及物动词, 不需要介词。

　　Ⅱ. 书面表达

　　(2015·海盐模拟)

　　右面这幅图片描绘了城市交通堵塞及交通压力问题。请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:

　　1. 描述图中所表达的相关信息;

　　2. 分析此现象的原因;

　　3. 提出你的建议(至少两条)。

　　注意:

　　1. 可参照下面文章开头所给提示, 有必要地发挥想象。

　　2. 词数100-120。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。

　　Nowadays, it is hard to imagine how often you are a victim of a traffic jam.

　　【参考范文】

　　Nowadays, it is hard to imagine how often you are a victim of a traffic jam. As is shown in the picture, the road is crowded with lots of cars and buses. The cars break the traffic rules and do not line up. As a result, the cars behind can’t drive along the road. Many drivers are suffering from the traffic jam.

　　There are many reasons for the traffic jam. First of all, the number of cars has been increasing, as the economy is developing. Then, drivers lack the strong sense of obeying traffic rules. Also, the road is not wide enough for many cars.

　　It is high time that we took action to deal with the traffic jam. As far as I am concerned, the government should improve the traffic system. It is necessary to set traffic lights to guide the cars to drive more smoothly. In addition, drivers can choose the roads which are not crowded. Avoiding the rush hour is also a good way. Last but not least, obeying traffic rules will make you drive more smoothly.