2016高考英语-短文改错集训（四）
【专项突破】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate playing table tennis.
Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our techniques. Then I kept practicing while I became confidently enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players of my class.
I really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our
potential and achieve to our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”
Passage 2
How can a person recover from emotional problems? A popular opinion suggests that he watches humorous films. And a recent study proves this to be wrong. The study also shows that watching at sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job. Emotional experiences is important to people’s well-being. People are less likely to share their feelings with these who have had similar experiences. Similar, people prefer movies that reflect their mood. That’s the reason ^a sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.
Passage 3
I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed. I have started to think about other people after I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming
the different person.
I think my change started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just want to get my
degree and be left alone. I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked
to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely. That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun. So I tried an experiment. I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help. That was real a big step for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today.
Passage 4
My friend Davis kept birds. He asked me to feed them for him in one day because he would be away for a week. He said that he have left the key in his mailbox. Unfortunately, I forgot all about birds until the night before Davis were to return. What was worse, it was already dark when I arrived at his house. I soon found the key left by Davis can’t unlock either the front door nor the back door. I was getting worrying. I was just about to give up while I noticed that one bedroom window was slightly open. I climbed up and opened the window. Just then a policeman and one of Davis’ neighbor arrived. I felt like a completely fool at that time.
Passage 5
I often go to a weekend school. So did many of my classmates. This seems popular among students. Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies. Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.
So every coin has two sides. Our school work is already a heavy burden. Extra lesson often take up too much of our time. In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects. We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.. We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.
Passage 6
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Many students are trying his best to go abroad. There are many Ladies and gentlemen,
It is special pleasure to welcome our new staff member, Mr Tony White, who has come here to America.
Mr White has recently graduated from the University of Chicago where he has majored in English Literature and minored in Teaching English as the Second Language. He will working with us here for at least two years.
One of the goals of our school are to promote understanding and cooperation between the young people of our two countries. By have Mr White, who is willing to sacrifice the comfort of his friends and family to come to a strange country, we feel we are very lucky and our goals will be easily realized.
On behalf of the whole school, I’d like to extend to you, Mr White, your sincerest welcome. We are indeed happy to have you here, and we wish you all the better during your stay in China.
Thank you.
Passage 7
Dear Sir，
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English best. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. So I really hope to take this chance improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, that I’m particularly interested in. I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
2016高考英语-短文改错集训（四）答案
Today I can still remember how I became (加a) good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate (classmates) playing table tennis.
Amazing (Amazed) at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our (their) techniques. Then I kept practicing while (until) I became confidently (confident) enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players of (in) my class.
I really take proud (pride) in this experience, because it helped (helps) me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to(去掉to) our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”
Passage 2
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Passage 3
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I think my change started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just want to get my
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degree and be left alone. I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked
to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely. That
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Passage 4
1. in one day—one day;
2. have—had;
3. about birds—about the birds;
4. were—was;
5. can’t—couldn’t;
6. nor—or;
7. worrying—worried;
8. while—when;
9. neighbor—neighbors;
10. completely---complete
Passage 5
I often go to a weekend school. So did many of my classmates. This
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Passage 6
Ladies and gentlemen,
It is Λ special pleasure to welcome our new staff member, Mr Tony White, who has
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On behalf of the school staff, I’d like to extend to you, Mr White, your sincerest welcome.
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Thank you.
Passage 7
Dear Sir，
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your
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me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I’m
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subjects learning at school, I like English best. I had been learning English for 6 years but my
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spoken English remains poorly. So I hope to take this chance ∧improve it. If possible, I’d
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like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in
England, that I’m particularly interested in. I believe I will have ∧ wonderful time this
which
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summer.
Yours truly,
Li Hua