2016高考英语-短文改错集训(八)
【专项突破】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Passage 1What do you want to say to your parents?
With the college entrance examination is drawing near, my parents are getting more and more anxious about me. They have bought a lot of learning material and healthful recipes for me, hoped that I can work harder and make a greater progress in my learning. However, what they did make me stressed out. But I would like to say the following words to them:
Dear Mum and Dad, please don’t push me too hard. I know I have to work hard to admitted into my dream university. Now with only months left, I have made up your mind to make full use of every minute to improve my study. I will be faced for the challenge brave and make my dream come true.
Passage 2
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Passage 3
Recently, our school has held the meaningful discussion on whether it is reasonable for middle school students to have classes on weekends. Some of our classmates believe we should have classes on weekends because we can make fully use of free time to review the lessons we had learnt. Some others are against the opinion, saying we had better to have a good rest on weekends so that we can work effective during the weekdays. The rest agree with neither of the opinion. They have the view which keeping the balance between work and play are important for us. They suggest one day of the weekend should used to learn our lessons and during the other day we do something interested or have a rest.
Passage 4
Dear Rob,
I saw your note yesterday evening. You suggested that we went to the concert this Sunday. I'm terribly sorry, and I have to say good-bye for my uncle. He is going to England to do him PhD and he will leave off this Sunday. To be honesty, I'd like to go with you to the concert. I hear the performance will last two week. so how about go there next Saturday? Please let me know that it will be OK. Give me call.Thanks
Li Hua
Passage 5
Dear Editor,
I used to be a physician in the children’s department of a hospital. Form time to time I treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didn’t know the medicine was danger ; they just knew it tasted sweet. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China.
Some days before I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and I’m sure our Chinese factories could produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning. This is difficult for most young children to do so , though grown-up can open these bottles very easily.
I’m certainly that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor , I’d love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
Passage 6
Dear Sir,
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English better. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. So I really hope to take this chance to improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, what I’m particularly interested in. I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Passage 7
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney
last summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take
us to do a lot of sightseeing. It’s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and
delicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot about
Sydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China. I’ll act like a guide
to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
2016高考英语-短文改错集训(八)答案
Passage 11.With-As/去掉is
2.material-materials
3. hoped-hoping
4.去掉a
5. make-makes
6. But-So
7. ∧be
8.your-my
9. for - with
10.brave-bravely
Passage 2
1. 去掉for
2. the –her
3. similarly—similar
4. he—she
5. interesting—interested
6. Beside—Besides
7. such后加a
8. Whichever—whatever
9. believed—believe
10. learning--learn
Passage 3
76.the—a 77fully---full 78 had—have 79删除to
80effective—effectively
81 opinion—opinions
82which—that
83 are---is
84 should后加 be
85 interested--interesting
Passage 4
Dear Bob,
I saw your note yesterday evening. You suggested that we went to the concert this Sunday.
go
I’m terribly sorry, and I have to say good-bye for my uncle. He is going to England to do him PhD
but
to
his
and he will leave off
this Sunday. To be honesty, I’d like to go with you to the concert. I hear the
honest
performance will last two week, so how about go there next Saturday? Please let me know that it
weeks
going
if/whether
will be OK. Give me ^ call.
a
Thanks.
Li Hua
Passage 5
had 后面加been
with—for
danger—dangerous
what ---that/which/去掉what
before—ago
them—it t
to do so 去掉so
grown-up---grown-ups
certainly---certain
doing--done
Passage 6
Dear Sir,
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for
inviting
your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this
my
will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the
and
subject I’m learning at school, I like English better. I had been learning English for
subjects
best
have
eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. So I really hope to take this
poor
chance to improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in
order that I can know some customs in England, what I’m particularly interested in. I
which
believe I will have
wonderful time this summer.
a
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Passage 7
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney
last summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take us to
kind
me
do a lot of sightseeing. It’s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and delicious food
whose
gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot about Sydney. Mike, are
good
had
there
you free these days? I would like to invite you ∧visit China. I’ll act like a guide to show you
to
as
around the places of interests in my hometown.
interest
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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