2016届高考英语写作分类掌握复习课件：23 观点对比类（新人教版）

　　* * 主题： 说说人们对幸福的理解

　　[引出不同观点] Opinions are divided on the feeling of happiness.

　　[观点一] Some people believe that if they have much money or many things, they will be happy. With great wealth, they will be able to do everything they want, with which they will be happy.

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　　[观点二] On the other hand, some people regard their intelligence, or their health as their great happiness. [观点三] Still others maintain that happiness is closely tied to their family, for they believe that they feel happy when all members of their family are happy and healthy. 一、句式模板 (1) Different people have different opinions on...Some people think ... because...However, others think ...for the reason that ...

　　(2) Opinions are various for this. Some believe that ... while others argue that ... Still others maintain that...

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　　(3) There are different opinions on how to...Many people take...seriously,

　　while few treat ... as ...

　　(4) Opinions vary from person to person. The majority of the people are in favour of...The rest of them are against ...

　　(5) When it comes to...some people think that... On the other hand, others argue that... 1. 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影, 有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题, 按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：

　　(1)看电影: 省时、有趣、易懂 (2)读原著: 细节更多、语言优美 (3)我的看法及理由 参考词汇: 原著original work

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　　Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.

　　Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.

　　Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.

　　Meanwhile, the language in the book

　　is possibly more lively and beautiful.

　　Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, I am able to better understand the author’s ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. 2.读写任务 阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　When you ask people what it means to relax, most will answer that relaxing is something you play to do later — you do it on vacation, when you retire, or when you get everything done. This means, of course, that most other time (95% of your life) should be spent nervous, restless, rushed, and mad.

　　Could this explain why so many of us operate as if life were one great big emergency? Most of us put off relaxation until our “in-basket” is empty. Of course, it never is.

　　It is useful to think of relaxation as a quality of heart that you can own on a regular basis rather than something reserved for some later time. You can relax now. It’s helpful to remember that relaxed people can still be super achievers and, in fact, that relaxation and creativity go hand in hand.

　　When I’m feeling tired, for example, I don’t even try to write. But when I feel relaxed, my writing flows quickly and easily.

　　Being more relaxed includes training yourself to react differently to the drama of life. It comes, in part, from reminding yourself over and over again (with loving kindness and patience) that you have a choice in how you respond to life. You can learn to relate to your thinking as well as your situation in new ways. [写作内容] 1. 以约30个词概括短文的主要内容； 2. 然后以约120个词就“中学生的周末该不该放松休息”的主题发表看法, 内容包括：

　　(1) 同学们对周末补课的不同看法； (2) 老师和家长对你校周末上课情况的看法； (3) 你持什么态度。 [写作要求] 你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

　　[评分标准] 概括准确, 语言规范, 内容合适, 篇章连贯。

　　From the passage, I’ve learnt that relaxation plays an important part in our daily life. People who feel relaxed, are more willing to do their job and do better in work or study, compared with the tired people. But for most of us, only when we have got everything done do we realize we should take a rest.

　　In my school, students are required to go to school on Saturdays, especially students of Senior Grade Three.

　　So they have their own different opinions on it. Some students think that taking classes at weekends makes them much tired and bored, leaving them little time to do their own things. However, others hold the opposite opinion that as students of Senior Three, they should make full use of every minute to take in more to prepare for the entrance examination.

　　And most of the teachers and parents are for the idea that students should have classes on Saturdays.

　　They hope that the students can learn more by having classes at weekends. Some of the parents are worried that if their children don’t need to have classes at weekends, they will spend most of their time playing computer games or doing things which are not good for them.

　　As far as I’m concerned, no matter how busy we are, we should have suitable relaxation.

　　For example, we can study in the evening and at night while playing or taking some exercise in the afternoon or at weekends. In this way, we will neither lose the time to study nor have no time to relax ourselves. What’ s more， having suitable relaxation can help us prepare better for the following week’s work. In a word, in order to face the hard work, I think students should have suitable relaxation at weekends.