2016届高考英语写作分类掌握复习课件：27 举例说明（新人教版）

　　* * 主题：和谐的师生关系对你的影响(2011天河一模)

　　[提出观点] Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school.

　　[举例说明] Take me for example. [例子] My teacher is my good friend.

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　　When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps me to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy, she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate.

　　[重申主题] But for the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress.

　　举例说明就是通过举例子来证明某种观点, 阐明某种道理。例子不必长篇大论, 但一定要与主题相吻合。写例子之前可用一句话过渡, 写完例子后用一两句话重申主题。

　　灵活运用超级模仿 一、句式模板 (1) However, there are other ways to make students work hard. For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job.

　　(2) A good parent should possess some good qualities, especially when facing her children. Take my mother, a model parent, as an example.

　　(3) There is no denying that confidence plays an important role in our life. A convincing example that jumps into my mind is about speaking English. (4) From what is mentioned above, we can safely draw the conclusion that confidence really makes a difference. Therefore it’s wise for us to stay confident all the time.

　　(5) Such examples can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is ...

　　这样的例子在生活中很容易见到, 一个很好的例子就是…… 二、超级仿写 1.举例说明只要不放弃就能成功。

　　In fact, many famous persons in the world lived through a hard time and got their achievements. We can find lots of examples in our daily life. Thomas Edison, a great inventor, achieved his success after hundreds of failures.

　　Helen Keller, a girl who couldn’t hear or see anything, made her great efforts to overcome all the difficulties she met within her lifetime, and became a famous educator and writer. From these facts, we can learn that never giving up will bring you great success, which John and Washington taught us. 2.读写任务

　　阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　When a lion was asleep, a little mouse began running up and down beside him and made some noise. This soon wake the lion. Losing his temper, he caught the mouse in his paws and was about to kill it. The mouse, terrified, pleaded to the lion to spare its life.

　　“Please let me go,” it cried, “and one day I will repay you for your kindness.” The idea of so small a creature ever being able to do anything for him amused the lion so much that he laughed aloud. He thought, “How could this little mouse help me?” However, he lifted his paws and let it go.

　　But the mouse’s chance came after all. A few days later, when the lion was wandering in the forest, he was caught in a trap. The hunters wanted to take him alive to the king, so he tied him to a tree, and went away to look for a wagon.

　　Just then the little mouse passed by, and saw the sad lion. It went up to him and soon gnawed away(啃断) the ropes. “Was I right?” asked the little mouse. This lion nodded his head and thanked the little mouse. [写作要求] 1.以约30词概括短文的内容要点； 2.以约120个词就“勿以善小而不为”的主题发表看法, 至少包含以下内容要点：

　　(1)该故事给你什么启示？ (2)你认为生活中的小善举能带来大作用吗？ (3)请举例说明。 [写作要求] 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 [评分标准] 概括准确, 语言规范, 内容合适, 语篇连贯。

　　A mouse begged an lion, who was woken up by the mouse, to spare his life. Later, the mouse helped the lion by gnawing the ropes.

　　After reading this story, I came to realize that people should never ignore the deed of small kindness. Small good deeds sometimes may get big returns or make a great difference!

　　[要证明的观点] I fully agree that trivial things play an important part in our life. [引出例子] Such examples can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is, as we can see, a word of encouragement from a sincere teacher often changes a downhearted student’s idea and behavior.

　　Another example is that a warm smile to someone who loses courage and wants to commit suicide may comfort him, cheer him up and help him through the darkest night in his life.

　　[重申主题]In a word, it is the trivial things in daily life that count. Just as the famous saying goes, do not think any virtue trivial, and so neglect it; do not think any vice trivial, and so practice it.