2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：23（含解析）

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　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　当前不少文学作品被改成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。

　　1．看电影：省时、有趣、易懂。

　　2．读原著：细节更多，语言优美；

　　3．我的看法及理由。

　　词数100—120，文章题目和开头已经给出（不计总词数）。

　　原著 original work/ book in the original

　　Film or book , which Do you Prefer?

　　Some of us think it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.

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　　第二节

　　读写任务(共l小题，满分25分)

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Almost every family buys at least one copy of a newspaper every day. Some people subscribe to as many as two or three different newspapers. But why do people read newspapers?

　　Five hundred years ago, news of important happenings — battles lost and won, kings or rulers overthrown or killed — took months and even years to travel from one country to another. The news passed by word of mouth and was never accurate. Today we can read in our newspapers of important events that occur in faraway countries on the same day they happen.

　　Apart from supplying news from all over the world, newspapers give us a lot of other useful information. There are weather reports, radio, television and film guides, book reviews, stories, and of course, advertisements. There are all sorts of advertisements. The bigger ones are put in by large companies to bring attention to their products. They pay the newspapers thousands of dollars for the advertising space, but it is worth the money for news of their products goes into almost every home in the country. For those who produce newspapers, advertisements are also very important. Money earned from advertisements makes it possible for them to sell their newspapers at a low price and still make a profit.

　　Newspapers often have information on gardening, cookery and fashion, as well as a small but very popular section on jokes and cartoons.

　　[写作内容]

　　1、以约30个词概括短文的要点。

　　2、然后就下面要点写一篇约120个词的短文：

　　（1）报纸是我们重要的信息来源；

　　（2）人们对报纸具有选择性；

　　（3）结合你个人情况谈谈报纸在你生活中的作用。

　　3、你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用阅读材料中的句子。

　　[写作要求]

　　1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　3．学校即将举行以"Music and My Life"为主题的英语作文比赛,请按下列要求写一篇词数100-120左右的作文。内容需包括:

　　◆我喜欢的音乐类型

　　◆最喜欢在什么时候听音乐

　　◆音乐带给了我什么

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　　4．随着年龄的增长，我们总想挣脱父母的怀抱，渐渐和父母产生分歧。假设你是李华，某中学英语杂志社正在开展题为 “How to get along well with your parents” 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇征文稿。

　　1. 事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的建议；

　　2. 跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；

　　3. 多花时间跟父母在一起，跟他们一块郊游等。

　　注意：1. 词数：120左右；

　　2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　How to get along well with your paren

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　　5．最近的一项研究表明，大约50％的青少年有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文。

　　原因 晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会儿；

　　女孩子为保持苗条身材不吃早餐。

　　结果 课堂睡觉，注意力下降；

　　学业不理想。

　　专家意见 早餐不可少：1) 提供全天所需要的能量的30％；

　　2) 有助于创造思维, 作出更好的判断。

　　参考词汇：creative mind 创造思维）

　　A recent study shows that 50% of the school kids do not have breakfast.____________________________________________________________

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　　参考答案

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　　Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer?

　　Some of us think it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.

　　Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.

　　Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, I am able to understand the author’s ideas better. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.

　　【解析】

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　　Newspapers, an accurate and convenient way of spreading information, are now welcomed by many people because of the various kinds of information and latest news they provide.

　　Newspapers provide us with fresh information about events beyond our own small world, keeping us well informed of important events and broaden our knowledge of the world outside.

　　Whatever our age or jobs are, there is a newspaper to suit us. There are newspapers for people of different ages and with different interests. English lovers may choose some English newspapers to help improve their skills; for those interested in current affairs, newspapers like People’s Daily will be their best choice.

　　As for myself, reading newspapers has become my routine work every day. By reading newspapers I know what is going on around the world. Besides, from some English newspapers like China Daily, I gain a lot of knowledge about English learning and improve my writing skills. I can say for sure that newspapers have become an essential part of my life. (167 words)

　　【解析】

　　3．不唯一

　　I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. While most of people nowadays like modern music such as rock and pop music, I like listening to classical music. For many people, they find classical music boring to listen. However, I think classical music is serious and can make people inspired. Unlike modern music, most of the classical music can last long. Every time I feel tired or anxious, classical music helps me calm down. Music plays an important part in my life. Music makes my life more colorful and gives me a lot of entertainment. More importantly, it makes me refreshed. If there were no music in the world, it would really be a boring and dull place!

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：写作时认真审题，确定体裁。应注意以下几个方面。(1)时态错误：文章中忽视了动作发生的时间。(2)人称代词错误：单复数、形容词性物主代词与名词性物主代词错误。(3)名词单复数、动词单复数、主谓语不一致。(4)用词错误：对同义词的区别、使用场合、习惯用法不熟悉，或者忘记了单词。(5)内容不连贯：不会用关联词，语序混乱。没有统筹安排，写到哪里，就停在哪里。(6)大小写、标点符号错误，缺少冠词。()书写混乱，卷面潦草。

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　　As you are growing, you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions. However, your parents will disagree with you. Your relationship with your parents may be in trouble right now. Here are some tips for you to avoid quarrels with your parents.

　　Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute. This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans.

　　Try to remain calm when your parents say no to something. You’d better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them.

　　Spend time with your family. Communicate with each other at home. Suggest activities that your whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike, a bike ride, or going to the beach.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，该书面表达题要求考生就“如何处理好与父母之间的关系”提出建议。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，答题时要注意：使用一般现在时；以祈使句为主；不要遗漏要点。注意文章的连贯性和整体性。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。

　　【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组：如in trouble ahead of time free from your parents, feel ready to, say yes or no to, listen to what they have to say, 等等。句型上也是多变： As you are growing, you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions. 这句话用了状语从句， This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans. 和You’d better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them. 这两句话用了宾语从句，如果文章最后加上下面的句子，则可与首段呼应，显得整体性更好：Follow these tips, and you will enjoy a good relationship with your parents.

　　考点：考查提纲类书面表达

　　A recent study shows that 50% of the school kids do not have breakfast.

　　Some students who stay up late into night studying choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. Besides, some schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories, and that is why they can not perform well in their study. According to the experts, breakfast plays an important part because it can provide 30 percent of the whole day’s energy. In order to get creative minds and better judgments, school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。