2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：25（含解析）

　　1．

　　来自你市的中学生小记者最近进行了一次采访活动。请根据下面表格中的内容为你校的英语园地写一篇报道。

　　时间 2007年1月15日

　　地点 经济开发区

　　采访人 40名中学小记者

　　被采访人 开发区主任王庆海

　　采访内容 过去一年的成绩

　　如何吸引投资

　　三年后开发区的前景

　　其他 1．除了笔、本，还用了数码相机、录音笔等现代设备

　　2．对一流的设计、漂亮的绿化、现代的建筑留下了深刻的印象

　　：经济开发区the Economic Development Zone；小记者teenage report；投资investment；数码digital；录音笔recording pen；

　　2．书面表达（满分2分）

　　暑假来临。你班同学讨论了假期的计划，提出了不同的看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。

　　优点 缺点

　　待在家中 花费少；方便舒适 不能亲身了解外界

　　外出旅游 增长见识；开阔眼界 花费多；旅途不便；担心安全

　　假如你叫李华，最近收到好朋友Mike的来信，得知他染上了吸烟的习惯，你很为他担心。请给他写一封信。

　　1．表明自己的看法； 2．谈谈吸烟的危害（可举例说明）； 3．提出至少两条建议。

　　注意：

　　1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

　　2、短文词数不少于100。

　　3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

　　4、书写需清晰、工整。

　　5、首句已给出，但不计入总词数。

　　Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking,

　　4．假如你是李明，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点： 

　　 焦虑症状： 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

　　 建 议：

　　1．考前制定好合适的复习计划

　　2．考试期间正常作息 

　　3．睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠

　　 其他建议：

　　(内容由考生自己拟定2点) 

　　 注意：

　　1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

　　2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；

　　3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。

　　参考词汇：头晕—dizzy(adj.)  

　　Dear editor,  

　　  I’m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some 

　　symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. __________________________________ 

　　 _______________________________________________________________________________ 

　　 _____________________________________________________________________________ 

　　Li Ming    

　　5．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Helen正在写一关各国中学生课外阅读情况的调查报告。她给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请你根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件。

　　2．原因分析；

　　3．你的看法。

　　注意： 1．根据所给提示，适当发挥, 要求内容充实，语意连贯。

　　3．邮件中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

　　Dear Helen,

　　Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. ______________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours

　　Lihua

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　Forty teenage reporters from different middle schools in our city paid a visit to the Economic Development Zone and had an interview with Wang Qinghai, head of the Zone, on January 15th, 2007.

　　At the interview, the reporters asked Mr Wang about what achievements they made last year, how they were to attract more investment and how the zone would be developing over the next three years. Mr Wang gave them satisfactory answers.

　　They used modern equipment, such as digital cameras and recording pens besides pens and note-books at the interview. They were deeply impressed by the first-class design of the zone, as well as beautiful trees and grass and modern buildings there.

　　【解析】

　　2．不唯一

　　Possible version:

　　The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.

　　Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purpose. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world.

　　However, others prefer to got out for traveling, because it can increase their knowledge. Besides, traveling can broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. Above all, no one can be sure of their safety.

　　In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，暑假来临。你班同学讨论了假期的计划，提出了不同的看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。需要的内容已经，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

　　Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking, I have been very worried.

　　You see, not only does smoking waste your money and time, but it is harmful to your health physically and mentally. As a high school student, you should study hard and stop smoking immediately. Although it is hard to get rid of smoking, I hope you will follow my advice.

　　First， choose a day when you feel relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits to remind yourself when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.

　　I hope my advice will be useful.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hu

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本文是一篇应用文，首先表明自己对这件事的看法，可从金钱、时间及其健康方面进行阐述吸烟的危害，再举例对其进行说明，写作中注意使用平时积累的“起承转合”的连词，使用万能句型造句，最后提出自己的建议。提建议时可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分开阐述，以显得层次分明。

　　4．

　　I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

　　Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

　　First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. 

　　Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

　　(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本文的属于提纲类写作，是关于考试焦虑症的相关内容，话题切合考生实际，与考生的生活非常贴近，考生有话可说，有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的，要求考生有较强的整合能力，在写作时充分利用连接词，高级句型和词汇，如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语，以使文章的层次更高。首先应该用合适的连接词把考试焦虑症的症状写清楚，在发表个人建议的时候，可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。在自己的个人建议中可以加入谚语，让文章更上一层楼。

　　【亮点说明】范文使用了很多词组：suffer from 遭受，lack of缺乏，be eager to 渴望，get rid of消除，getting along with相处， in my opinion在我看来, stay up熬夜，还使用了不少精典句式，如：Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. 这句话用了让步状语从句， it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. 这句话用了it做形式主语， there is no need to worry too much about the results.这句话用了固定句型， We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. 这句话用了省略句， (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.) 这句话用了结果状语从句，还有文章还使用了First of all, Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

　　Dear Helen,

　　Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. I’m sorry to say that most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.

　　I think the reasons behind that are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.

　　However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours

　　Lihua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考查半开放性作文写作。是关于中学生课外阅读情况在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力