译林卷区版
英语 第13讲 过渡在写作中的应用 一、魔法导航 (一)使用合适的连词增加句子之间的连贯性。 连词是增加句子之间连贯性的重要手段,它主要包括并列连词和从属连词。 1.并列连词:用来连接并列的词与词、分句与分句、句子与句子,常用的并列 连词有:and、or、but、yet、for、so、while、neither...nor、not only...but al- so、not...but。如: (1)I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. (2015浙江) (2)It not only affects our everyday life, but also threatens people's lives.(2015江 苏) ——上贯下联,浑然一体 2.从属连词:用来引导各种状语从句,在高考书面表达参考范文中被广泛应 用。如: (1)If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning. (2015课标全国Ⅱ) (2)I am more than happy when I learn about the project organized by Bookcross- ing.com. (2015重庆) (二)恰当地使用过渡语。过渡语可增强句子之间的连贯性,它主要包括起连接 作用的副词和起过渡作用的插入语。 (1)On the one hand, it can strengthen the health awareness. On the other hand, it is likely to bring about anxiety.
(2)Seeing your ad in the newspaper, I show great interest in it and I want to learn more information about your courses. First of all, would you please tell me the exact start date and class size? By the way, how many school hours are there each week? What's more, I'd like to know how much I shall pay for the course and what type of accommodation you will provide for me. (2017课标全国Ⅰ)
同学们要熟记下表中在写作中常用的过渡语: 表时间 at first、then、afterwards、before、after、in the end、later、in the future、immediately 表顺序 first、second、then、lastly、finally、last but not least 表并列或递进 besides、what's more、in addition、also、moreover、furthermore、worse still 表个人观点 in my opinion/view、from my point of view、as far as I'm concerned 表总结 in a word、in general、to sum up、all in all、in summary、in conclusion、generally speak-ing、in brief 表转折或对比 however、on the contrary、yet、by compari-son、by contrast、on the other hand 表因果 therefore、thus、as a result、so (三)正确使用段落主题句和总结句。段落主题句和总结句可以使文章首尾呼 应,在意义上形成一个整体从而在宏观层次上达到增强句子连贯性的目的。
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning,we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival,we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering them.After getting the work done,we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Be- fore leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees,we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it's our duty to protect and beau- tify our environment. 【评析】 在段落的开头作者用一个句子点出了段落中心思想,在文章的结 尾再次用一个句子表达了自己参加“绿色行动”的感受,从而升华了主题。 另外,在中间部分作者通过合理运用in the morning、upon arrival、after getting the work done、before leaving和seeing the lines of trees等过渡语使活动的整 个过程以时间为序有机融为一体,很好地体现了文章的连贯性,值得大家学习 和模仿。 二、学以致用 1.完美文章
在横线上填上合适的过渡语或过渡句使上下句连贯。 (1)In order to study well,we need to play sports we can keep fit. (2)Many people suggest that the parents should listen more to their children, they will understand them better. (3)I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. .First,it is important to take a Chinese course, you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. (4) .One is to work individually. , people can decide by themselves when to start work and how to do it. ,they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.People may choose to work in a team, they can learn from each other and help each other. ,they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion. 答案 (1)so that或in order that (2)so (3)Here are a few suggestions;as
(4)There are basically two ways to get work done;In this way;What's more;also; where;Besides/In addition
2.话题写作 [本期话题] 地点介绍 [写作要求] 注意文章的连贯性。 请根据下面的提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。 1.我们的祖国位于亚洲的东部,面积约960万平方千米,人口约13亿; 2.历史悠久,文化丰富,自然资源丰富; 3.有很多世界闻名的旅游资源,如长城、九寨沟等; 4.在过去的三十年发生了巨大变化。
答案 One possible version: Located in the east of Asia, our homeland is a great country with a long history and rich culture. It covers an area of about 9,600,000 square kilometers with a population of about 1.3 billion. In addition, there are a lot of world-famous tourist sites in China, such as the Great Wall, Jiuzhaigou Valley and so on, which attract a good many visitors from all over the world every year. Much to our pride, great changes have taken place in our country in the past 30 years.
三、美文赏读 (2015四川) 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高 普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她 写一封电子邮件。 1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿; 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由; 3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议; 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意: 1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 [我来试写] Hi,Sharon, This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.
Li Xia
答案
One possible version: Hi,Sharon, This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am more than willing to lend a helping hand to you. I am convinced I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I have such a good command of Mandarin that not only was I elected the broadcaster of the radio sta- tion of our school,but I also won second prize in the Mandarin Contest held in our city last year. When it comes to improving Mandarin,my advice is that you should listen to Mandarin every day and practice speaking it whenever possible.Just as the saying goes,practice makes perfect. By the way,I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability,espe- cially the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar. Looking forward to your reply. Li Xia 【写作点评】 本文作者利用过渡语、过渡句等手段连接上下文,使文章表达清楚、连贯、 自然,浑然一体,出色地完成了写作任务。