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英语 第14讲
如何写话题类记叙文 ——巧记妙叙，难以忘记
一、魔法导航 话题类记叙文要注意以下几点: 第一,掌握记叙文的“六要素”。一般按照事件发展的时间顺序来讲述,先交 代事件发生的时间、地点以及事件所涉及的人物,然后叙述事件发生的原 因、发展经过,最后交代结果。但有时也采取插叙和倒叙的手法。 第二,首先确定时间立足点,并以此确定时态。报道、日记或故事类记叙文通 常是记录过去发生的事情,因此经常采用一般过去时;叙述当前的事情或自 然、社会现象则用一般现在时。 第三,从谋篇布局角度讲,该类文章可分为三段:第一段引出话题;第二段讲述过 程;第三段说明结果或发表感慨。 二、常用句式 (1)One morning/day.../Last week/Saturday.../On a winter day.../This morning.../It was June 20,2010.../On May 4,2010... (2)...was doing sth....when suddenly.../As soon as...+主句/When...+主句/Before I could...+主句 (3)As/Because/Since+从句+主句 (4)After some time.../After a while.../A few minutes later.../A moment later.../ Then... (5)Some were doing...some were doing...and/while others were doing... (6)...just then.../At that moment.../Hardly had...when... (7)And.../So.../Therefore.../As a result.../For that... 三、典题示例 真题在线 (2017课标全国Ⅱ) 一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你 的畅想完成短文。 1.家庭; 2.工作; 3.业余生活。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
文章体裁 记叙文 中心人称 第一人称 主体时态 一般将来时 要点 布局 1.引题句:我经常想象未来的生活(已给出)。 2.主题句:统领下文,提炼主题,如十年后我的生活将和现在大不相同。 3.要点或扩展句: 4. 结尾句:总结全文,紧扣主题,如我的生活将丰富多彩。 审题谋篇 考场作文: I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.In ten years, I will have my own family, ①lead a happy life. As for my job, I will build up my own business. Not only will it ②helps me make a living, but it will also contribute to the development of the society. When I have free time, I will take ③regularly exercise and become a volunteer to help the elderly people. It is of great use to my life quality. In brief, I will spare no effort to make my future life meaning- ful.
文章提升: 1.修改错误: 1)lead如果作谓语动词前面应加连词and,故应 将①lead改为 。 2)在not only引导的倒装句型中助动词will提 前,主语后动词需用动词原形,故应将②helps 改为 。 3)修饰名词需用形容词,故将③regularly改为 。 2.提升建议: 将画线部分改为非谓语动词作状语的形式: 。 阅卷现场 参考范文: I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different from what it is today in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely baby. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my spare time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. During my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be richer and more colorful.
答案 1.修改错误:1)leading 2)help 3)regular
2.提升建议:When having free time
四、高分秀场 (2015山东临沂高三一模) 假定你的名字叫鲁沂,你打算2015年高考结束后在暑假期间打工。现在请你 用英文写一篇短文介绍自己。内容要点如下: ★年龄、性别 ★性格、爱好 ★打工理由 注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 [我来试写]
In the summer vacation,I am longing to take a part-time job.The first reason is that I can earn some pocket money to satisfy my daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Besides,I can build up new friendship and improve social skills so that I can develop my ability to adapt to the society. 答案 One possible version: I'm Lu Yi,an outgoing boy aged 18. I take an active part in sports and outdoor ac- tivities,which is of great benefit to my health. I also attach great importance to reading and poems are my favorite.Besides,I'm easy to get along with and I like to make friends.