2017届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编（第02期）：专题06 书面表达（教师版）

　　2017届高考模拟试题分类汇编（2）之书面表达

　　参考词汇：雾霾haze

　　雾霾天气hazy weather

　　Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China._______________

　　【答案】

　　Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China, which has great harm to our daily life. And it has become a growing concern throughout the country.

　　It’s obvious that hazy weather has many negative effects. First of all, people’s health is threatened and some of them even suffer from diseases such as coughing. In addition, more traffic jams and more accidents arise from it, which in turn disturbs people’s normal life.

　　Faced with this situation, we are supposed to raise the awareness of environmental protection. Not only should we stop sending out harmful gases, but more energy should be saved in our daily life. Meanwhile, importance should be attached to planting trees. Only when we take effective measures, will our environment make a difference.

　　【亮点说明】这是一篇通讯稿，采用三段式，语言简练，结构分明，布局合理，运用高级句子。Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China, which has great harm to our daily life.使用非限制性定语从句；It’s obvious that hazy weather has many negative effects.it作形式主语，真主语是后面的主语从句；Faced with this situation, we are supposed to raise the awareness of environmental protection.过去分词作状语；Not only should we stop sending out harmful gases, but more energy should be saved in our daily life.句中体现部分倒装；Only when we take effective measures, will our environment make a difference. Only加后跟状语位于句子开头，句子用部分倒装堪称经典；另外句中使用First of all, In addition, Meanwhile,

　　为文章增色添彩。

　　考点：考查话题作文

　　【贵州省铜仁市第一中学2017届高三上学期第一次月考】某英文报社举办以 “I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动， 你打算投稿。 请根据以下要点写一篇短文：

　　1．你为什么喜欢读书；

　　2．你喜欢哪一类的书（例如：历史、科学、文学literature等）？请给出至少两个理由。

　　注意：词数120左右；

　　【答案】

　　I Like Reading

　　Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as goods friends in my life. As we know , books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal from reading.

　　There are a variety of books for us choose from , like history books , literary books and so on. But what interesting me most is literary books , especially those by famous writers. For one thing , they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another , they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?

　　【亮点说明】

　　这是一篇英语短文，要点明确，语言简练，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。Reading is my favorite hobby.动名词作主语；I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as goods friends in my life.原因状语从句用在句中；As we know , books are the source of knowledge. As引导的非限制性定语从句用在句中；But what interesting me most is literary books , especially those by famous writers. What引导的主语从句堪称经典；Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?否定疑问的运用恰到好处；另外，especially those，For one thing , For another , while you are reading? 的运用为文章增色添彩。

　　考点：考查提纲式作文

　　【重庆市第一中学2017届高三上学期开学摸底考试】书面表达（满分25分）11.假定你是重庆第一中学校学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛，希望重庆大学外籍教师Brown女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。

　　注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，使结构完整

　　2. 词数120左右

　　词汇：学生会主席 president of Students’ Union

　　【答案】

　　Dear Ms. Brown，

　　I am president of Students’ Union of Chongqing No. 1 Middle School.I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at the English speech contest in our school. We firmly believe , as a famous English professor with rich experience in speech delivering , you are definitely among the most qualified judges for the contest.

　　The contest will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours on September 1th in room 606,Eight senior high students will speak on the given topic “The Olympic hero(es) in my eyes”，a meaningful topic which will not only present the Olympic spirit but also arouse young people’s love for their country. Meanwhile it will be a perfect chance for you1,

　　【解析】

　　【亮点说明】这是一篇书信，格式正确，要点明确，语言精练，文中使用高级句子。I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at the English speech contest in our school.句中使用动词不定式；as a famous English professor with rich experience in speech delivering ,with的独立主格结构作定语；“The Olympic hero(es) in my eyes”，a meaningful topic which will not only present the Olympic spirit but also arouse young pepole’s love for their country.句中使用which引导的限制性定语从句并运用高级词组not only---but also---。

　　考点：考查书信式话题作文

　　假定你是李华。你的美国朋友彼得来信，表示想来中国旅游，询问你是否有时间接待。 请给他回信，要点如下：

　　1.来信已悉，欢迎来华；

　　2.航班信息，以便接机；

　　3.住宿地点，旅行计划。

　　注意：

　　1.词数100左右；

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Peter,

　　I'm so glad to hear from you, knowing that you are visiting China.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　Dear Peter,

　　I'm so glad to hear from you, knowing that you are visiting China. I'll be free at that time and I'm eager to meet you. Please tell me your flight number and arrival time so that I can pick you up at the airport. You are welcome to stay at my house, where you can meet my family and friends. My plan goes like this: During the first week, I'll take you to Beijing to show you around some famous royal palaces as well as the Great Wall, thus helping you know more about Chinese history. Then in the following week, we'll go to Yunnan Province, because it's amazing to experience the traditional customs and beautiful sceneries there.

　　If you have any suggestions, please write to inform me.

　　All the best.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点说明】语句通顺，结构严谨，使用高级句式。Please tell me your flight number and arrival time so that I can pick you up at the airport.祈使句和目的状语从句用于其中；You are welcome to stay at my house, where you can meet my family and friends.非限制性定语从句运用恰当；I'll take you to Beijing to show you around some famous royal palaces as well as the Great Wall, thus helping you know more about Chinese history.现在分词做结果状语，非常巧妙；Then in the following week, we'll go to Yunnan Province, because it's amazing to experience the traditional customs and beautiful sceneries there.句中使用原因状语从句；If you have any suggestions, please write to inform me.条件状语从句和祈使句完美结合。

　　考点：考查书信式话题作文

　　【湖南省衡阳市第八中学2017届高三上学期第二次月考】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假定你是李华，上周日是你的外国朋友Anne 的生日。你本来答应参加她的生日聚会，但是你当时正忙于准备月考，不小心忘了赴约。请写信向Anne表达你的歉意，说明原因，并提出补救办法。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100词左右

　　2．文章中不得出现真实学校与班级

　　3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　【答案】

　　Dear Anne,

　　I am very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party last Sunday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.

　　It was nice of you to invite me to your party. I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you, but the monthly test is around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the test that I forgot the appointment. I hope you understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the test? I do long for a pleasant chat with you.

　　It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of a happy get-together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology.

　　Yours

　　LiHua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本次作文要求根据上周日是你的外国朋友Anne 的生日，你本来答应参加她的生日聚会，但是当时正忙于准备月考，不小心忘了赴约。请写信向Anne表达你的歉意，说明原因，并提出补救办法。要点包括：表达歉意，说明原因，并提出补救办法。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

　　写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了宾语从句that I didn’t attend your birthday party last Sunday. it做形式主语 that I missed the chance of a happy get-together.强调I do long for a pleasant chat with you. 及should have come，around the corner, long for，so…that 等词汇。

　　考点：应用文写作

　　【重庆市第八中学2017届高三上学期入学考试】假设你是李华，在一所国际中学就读，你决定参加校学生会（the Students’ Union）主席的竞选。现请你用英语准备一份竞选演讲稿，内容包括：

　　1. 自我介绍（性格和爱好等）；

　　2. 当选之后的举措（至少列举两点）。

　　要求：（1）演讲稿的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）；

　　（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；

　　（3）字数100词左右。

　　Good afternoon ,everyone ! Thank you for giving me this opportunity . Now let me introduce myself .________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Thanks for your attention !

　　【答案】

　　Good afternoon ,everyone ! Thank you for giving me this opportunity . Now let me introduce myself.

　　I’m LiHua from China. I’m easy-going and warm hearted , which make it easy for me to make new friends . Energetic and responsible , I am captain of our school football team. Reading is what I reall love, both for fun and knowledge .

　　If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as chairman of the Students’ Union . I will spare no effort to live up to your expectations. More colorful after school activities will be organized, which will definitely reduce pressure and and enrich our school life. Considering we are studying in an international middle school, communication should be given priority. So an international club, where my fellow students can be exposed to diverse cultures , will be set up, thus enhancing the understanding between the students from different countries.

　　Thanks for your attention!

　　【解析】

　　【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语演讲稿，语言简练，层次分明，结构严谨，布局合理，运用高级句子。I’m LiHua from China. I’m easy-going and warm hearted , which make it easy for me to make new friends .句中使用非限制性定语从句；Reading is what I reall love,动名词作主语，并用what引导表语从句；If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as chairman of the Students’ Union . I will spare no effort to live up to your expectations.条件状语从句用与句中；Considering we are studying in an international middle school, communication should be given priority.在此句中Considering做连词引导从句堪称经典；So an international club, where my fellow students can be exposed to diverse cultures .where引导的定语从句运用巧妙。

　　考点：考查话题作文

　　假如你是英国的Mike，你的朋友李华打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：

　　1.语言是道硬门槛；

　　2. 适应能力很重要；

　　3. 兴趣爱好被看重；

　　4. 要有社会责任感。

　　注意：

　　1.词数100左右；

　　2.开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Li Hua,

　　I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Mike

　　【答案】

　　Dear Li Hua,

　　I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.

　　As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What's more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.

　　This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.

　　Yours，

　　Mike

　　【亮点说明】这是一篇书信，采用三段式，语言简练，层次分明，结构严谨，要点明确，布局合理，运用高级句子。I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.使用宾语从句；As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. As far as I know引导的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句完美结合；What's more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success.for(因为)引导的并列句很是巧妙；those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.定语从句和被动语态在句中同时出现；May you succeed!运用巧妙；另外，Besides, What's more, Last but not least,的运用为文章增光。

　　考点：考查书信式话题作文

　　【河北省衡水中学2017届高三上学期小二调考试】在学习、生活和工作中，学会与人合作是非常重要的。请根据下表中提供的信息，写一篇主题为 “Being a good partner”的英文发言稿。

　　为何合作 有利于互相学习，增进友谊，节省时间与精力。

　　与谁合作 与喜欢的人合作 心情愉快，同甘共苦。

　　与不喜欢的人合作 学会容忍，发现优点。

　　怎样合作 你的观点……(至少2条)

　　注意：1. 对所给要点进行陈述，适当发挥，不要逐字翻译。

　　2. 词数110左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：合作cooperation

　　n.

　　cooperate

　　v.

　　Good afternoon, everyone!

　　The topic of my speech today is “Being a good partner.”

　　Wish my views would be helpful. Thank you for your listening!

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　Good afternoon, everyone!

　　The topic of my speech today is "Being a good partner". Cooperation is a good way for us to learn from each other as well as to improve our friendship. Successful cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy.

　　We will be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with, which will make us feel very happy and long to continue the cooperation. However, it can be difficult to team up with someone we dislike. In this case, we'd learn to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.

　　How can we become a good partner? As for me, first of all, we should try to listen to others' opinions. If he makes mistakes, we'd better try to point them out in a polite way. Besides, never force our own ideas on others.

　　Wish my views would be helpful. Thank you for your listening!

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：

　　本文要求写一篇与合作有关主题为“Being a good partner”的英文发言稿。文章给出了提纲，要介绍为何合作，与谁合作以及怎样合作。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

　　【亮点说明】

　　1.使用高级句型：含有定语从句的句子（包括限制性定语从句 someone we like to cooperate with以及非限制性定语从句which will make us feel very happy）We will be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with, which will make us feel very happy…找到我们想和他合作的人我们会很幸运，这会让我们感到很开心；条件状语从句If he makes mistakes, we'd better try to point them out in a polite way.如果他犯错了，我们最好礼貌的指出；祈使句.Wish my views would be helpful希望我的观点对你有用。2.使用了过渡词语：However ,first of all，Besides等。. 3.使用了重要短语：learn from向…学习；In this case在这种情况下；put up with忍受；as for至于；make mistakes犯错。.

　　【考点】考查提纲作文

　　【广东省佛山市第一中学2017届高三上学期第一次月考】假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center) 的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：      1. 本人简介；     

　　2. 求助内容；      3. 约定时间；     

　　4. 你的联系方式 （Email: lihua@1236. com; Phone: 12345678）。

　　注意：    

　　1. 词数100左右；     

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；      3. 结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　___________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________

　　I am looking forward to your reply. 

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.

　　Everything is going well. I enjoy all the courses here but one offered by Professor Martin Bygate. I have difficulty understanding him in class. He has a very strong accent, which makes it hard for me to follow him in class. I feel worried about this. I was told that I can go to the Learning Center for help. I’m wondering if I could come on Wednesday and Friday afternoon. I have no classes at both times and can manage to come for help and suggestions. Please let me know which time is OK with you either via lihua@126.com or 12345678.

　　I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，语言简洁，条理清晰，结构严谨，布局合理，采用惯用的三段式，句中使用高级句子。I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. 现在分词作后置定语；He has a very strong accent, which makes it hard for me to follow him in class.非限制性定语从句用于句中；I was told that I can go to the Learning Center for help.被动语态和宾语从句的结合；Please let me know which time is OK with you either via lihua@126.com or 12345678.祈使句和宾语从句在同句出现。

　　考点：考查书信式话题作文

　　英语演讲比

　　主题：我心目中的奥运英

　　时间：9月10日下午2：00-5:00

　　地点：606教

　　参赛选手：8名高中学

　　联系人：李

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