2017届山东省长岛县高考英语一轮短文改错训练：5（含解析）

　　山东长岛县2017高考英语一轮短文改错选练

　　2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试

　　Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.

　　【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文

　　【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。

　　【答案解析】

　　7

　　77. her→him 前文讲述的a man，故此处用him。

　　78. say→said 并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。

　　79. toilet前加the 此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。

　　80.passing→passed

　　句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。

　　81. was told

　　tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。

　　82.immediate→immediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。

　　83.or→and。并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。

　　84. mile→miles 15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。

　　85. in→with。 在某人的帮助之下with one’s help或者with the help of sb。

　　2017模拟短文改错OTime seem limited for us Senior Three students.

　　1_________

　　Therefore, more and more student are studying from early

　　2_______

　　morning till lately afternoon, even during the ten-minute

　　3_________

　　break. In my opinion, Take a break between classes is

　　4_________

　　not necessary. Otherwise, we will feel tired both physically

　　5_________

　　and mentally. During the break, we should do something

　　6_________

　　to get rid of tiredness. What they need is to have a real rest,

　　7_________

　　instead getting more tired. My break is always pleasing.

　　8_________

　　Sometimes I take some simple exercise. Sometimes I had a free

　　9_____

　　chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. While the

　　10_____

　　next class begins, I feel fresh again.

　　【参考答案及解析】

　　1.

　　seem→seems

　　考查主谓一致。此处time是主语，谓语动词用单数。

　　.student→students

　　考查名词的单复数。根据后面的are可知用复数形式。

　　.lately→late

　　考查形容词、副词的用法。修饰名词afternoon应用形容词。

　　.Take→taking考查动名词的用法。此处动名词短语作主语，故用动名词形式。

　　.去掉not

　　考查语境的理解。根据文意应为肯定意思。

　　. √

　　经分析本句正确。

　　they.→we

　　考查代词指代一致。通篇文章都在谈论我们的事情，故用we。

　　8. instead of

　　考查固定短语。根据后面的getting可知用instead of。

　　.had→have

　　考查动词时态。根据时间副词sometimes可知用一般现在时。

　　.While→When考查状语从句的连接词。根据文意用when“当。。。的时候”。

　　短文改错P

　　The other day my father called me, that at first made

　　._______

　　me very glad because of he seldom calls me. I was extra

　　2.______

　　happy for that day was his birthday and I thought he

　　3.______

　　remembered the date. But to my disappoint, our talk was

　　4._______

　　so short and ended so soon. My father called only tell me

　　5.________

　　that he has put another 1,000 yuan to my account, then hung

　　6.________

　　up after I could even tell him that it was my birthday. Tears

　　7._______

　　of sadness came to my eye. Honestly, I understand that he

　　8._______

　　loves me just as true as my mom, but I’d prefer to hear

　　9.________

　　him say it out to me on my birthday．

　　._________

　　【参考答案及解析】

　　1.that改为 which

　　考查非限制性定语从句的关系词。 此处which替代前文整个句子的内容。

　　.去掉of

　　考查状语从句的连接词。根据后面的句子he seldom calls me可知用because。

　　. his改为my

　　考查代词指代一致。根据文意应是“我的生日”。

　　. disappoint改为disappointment 考查固定短语的用法。此处to是介词，其后用名词。

　　. only后加to

　　考查不定式作目的状语。父亲给我打电话只是告诉我。。。。

　　.has改为had

　　考查动词时态。根据文意“存钱”在“打电话”之前，故用过去完成时。

　　. after改为before

　　考查句意的理解。我还没有来得及告诉他那天是我的生日就挂掉了。此处before意为：没来得及。。。就。。。

　　8. eye改为eyes

　　考查名词的单复数。此处指双眼用eyes。

　　. true改为truly

　　考查副词的用法。修饰动词love用副词。

　　. 正确

　　经分析本句正确。

　　One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．___________

　　the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately.

　　77．___________

　　She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking 78．____________

　　on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．____________

　　kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．____________

　　burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the

　　81．____________

　　windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．____________surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I 83．____________

　　was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it

　　84．____________

　　was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．____________

　　76．as→ When

　　77．answer后加it 78．She→ It

　　79．a→ the

　　80． room后加was

　　81．opening→ opened

　　82．With→ To

　　83．√

　　84．去掉about

　　85．which→ that

　　J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　George,

　　It's been a week after we left your family and we are now

　　76._______

　　back home. Thank you very much for showing them around

　　77.______

　　your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After

　　78._______

　　we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,

　　79._______

　　where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond

　　80._______

　　of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying

　　81．________

　　another couple of day. However, my father had to return to

　　82.________

　　work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It

　　83．________

　　was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to

　　84._______

　　our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.

　　85._______

　　Yours,

　　Mike

　　【参考答案】

　　76.after---since

　　77.them---us

　　78.for---with

　　79.正确

　　80.去掉much

　　81.staying---stay

　　82.day----days

　　83.fly---flew

　　84.trip前a

　　85.better----more

　　(2017·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)

　　I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.

　　【参考答案】：

　　I'm a senior student from China,

　　seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With

　　interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who

　　communicating with others. I

　　speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over

　　world; for another, I expect to learn

　　more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious

　　I'm really looking forward to your approval.

　　短文改错

　　I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then

　　76.

　　in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home

　　77.

　　at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We

　　78.

　　had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,

　　79.

　　we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .

　　80.

　　At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool

　　81.

　　or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat

　　82.

　　each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any

　　83.

　　difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .

　　84.

　　It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories

　　85.

　　are as sweet as ever before .

　　【参考答案】

　　I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then

　　76.

　　yet

　　in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home

　　77.

　　were

　　at ∧early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We

　　78.

　　an

　　had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,

　　79.

　　ourselves

　　we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .

　　80.

　　helpless

　　At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81.

　　swim

　　or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat

　　82.

　　treated

　　each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83.

　　√

　　difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .

　　84.

　　others

　　It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85.

　　since

　　are as sweet as ever before .

　　短文改错

　　Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 76. _______

　　the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 77. _______

　　long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 78. _______

　　to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people

　　79. _______

　　like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words,

　　80. _______

　　they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are 81. _______

　　playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 82. _______

　　for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy.

　　83. _______

　　Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American 84. _______

　　big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 85. _______

　　【参考答案】

　　76. and －but

　　77. woman－women

　　78.

　　called前加had 79. play- playing

　　80． 正确

　　81. feel-feeling

　　82. how-why

　　83. make-makes

　　84.去掉the

　　85. sell-buy

　　阅读理解

　　Having good etiquette (礼节) at the workplace is very important to be a favorite in an office.However，it’s observed that many people aren’t aware of the workplace etiquette and this creates a very bad impression in the office.So it’s important to know some workplace etiquette tips.

　　Among all the workplace etiquette guidelines，the most important is to be punctual to your office.Though going late due to an emergency is okay，habitual late comers are never appreciated in any organization.By arriving at your office on time，you show that you’re aware of your responsibilities and have respect for the organization.In case you feel that you would be late，call the concerned authority and report the matter to him or her.

　　Also，a proper knowledge of the workplace email etiquette is a must.In the official emails，you need to mention the subject concisely，while at the same time include all the important details which are to be shared.You should use good and grammatically correct language while writing emails.

　　A knowledge of telephone etiquette in the workplace is very important as well.While talking on the telephone，be polite and listen to what they’re saying carefully.Only then should you say what you feel.Speak in a voice which would be heard clearly at the other end.

　　The workplace guidelines are important even while you’re dining or celebrating with your co­workers.If you get a call in between，receive it after you’re permitted by the others by saying “excuse me”．Don’t talk loudly while eating.Greet people well and try to make them feel comfortable while being in your company.

　　These guidelines will help you become the best employee of a company.All the best!

　　【语篇解读　在工作中要想成为办公室里受欢迎的人，有好的礼节是很重要的。本文介绍了在工作中应注意的一些礼节。

　　1．Why should you try to be punctual?

　　A．To prove you are not a habitual late comer.

　　B．To respect the rules of the organization.

　　C．To show that you are a responsible worker.

　　D．To win other workers’ respect.

　　解析　细节理解题。根据第二段第三句可知，准时上班一是表明你意识到了你的责任，二是表明你对这个团体的尊重，因此应选择C。

　　答案　C

　　2．How should you write an official email?

　　A．Write the subject clearly and simply.

　　B．Include all the details in the email.

　　C．Make the language as beautiful as possible.

　　D．Make emails as brief as possible.

　　解析　细节理解题。根据第三段内容可知，电子邮件应主题简洁并包含所有重要的细节，因此选择A。

　　答案　A

　　3．Which of the following is considered NOT acceptable about making phone calls in the workplace?

　　A．Using polite language.

　　B．Listening with patience and care.

　　C．Speaking clearly.

　　D．Answering a call whenever it comes in.

　　解析　细节理解题。根据倒数第二段第二句可知，无论什么时候来电话都接是不被接受的行为。

　　答案　D

　　4．In the writer’s opinion，workplace etiquette________.

　　A．is easy to master

　　B．is considered important by all employees

　　C．can be helpful in doing your work well

　　D．will bring you good luck and good salaries

　　解析　推理判断题。综合全文尤其是第一段和最后一段内容可知，工作中的礼节有助于做好工作。

　　答案　C