山东长岛县2017高考英语一轮短文改错选练
2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.
【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
【答案解析】
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77. her→him 前文讲述的a man，故此处用him。
78. say→said 并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。
79. toilet前加the 此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。
80.passing→passed
句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。
81. was told
tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。
82.immediate→immediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。
83.or→and。并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。
84. mile→miles 15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。
85. in→with。 在某人的帮助之下with one’s help或者with the help of sb。
2017模拟短文改错OTime seem limited for us Senior Three students.
1_________
Therefore, more and more student are studying from early
2_______
morning till lately afternoon, even during the ten-minute
3_________
break. In my opinion, Take a break between classes is
4_________
not necessary. Otherwise, we will feel tired both physically
5_________
and mentally. During the break, we should do something
6_________
to get rid of tiredness. What they need is to have a real rest,
7_________
instead getting more tired. My break is always pleasing.
8_________
Sometimes I take some simple exercise. Sometimes I had a free
9_____
chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. While the
10_____
next class begins, I feel fresh again.
【参考答案及解析】
1.
seem→seems
考查主谓一致。此处time是主语，谓语动词用单数。
.student→students
考查名词的单复数。根据后面的are可知用复数形式。
.lately→late
考查形容词、副词的用法。修饰名词afternoon应用形容词。
.Take→taking考查动名词的用法。此处动名词短语作主语，故用动名词形式。
.去掉not
考查语境的理解。根据文意应为肯定意思。
. √
经分析本句正确。
they.→we
考查代词指代一致。通篇文章都在谈论我们的事情，故用we。
8. instead of
考查固定短语。根据后面的getting可知用instead of。
.had→have
考查动词时态。根据时间副词sometimes可知用一般现在时。
.While→When考查状语从句的连接词。根据文意用when“当。。。的时候”。
短文改错P
The other day my father called me, that at first made
._______
me very glad because of he seldom calls me. I was extra
2.______
happy for that day was his birthday and I thought he
3.______
remembered the date. But to my disappoint, our talk was
4._______
so short and ended so soon. My father called only tell me
5.________
that he has put another 1,000 yuan to my account, then hung
6.________
up after I could even tell him that it was my birthday. Tears
7._______
of sadness came to my eye. Honestly, I understand that he
8._______
loves me just as true as my mom, but I’d prefer to hear
9.________
him say it out to me on my birthday．
._________
【参考答案及解析】
1.that改为 which
考查非限制性定语从句的关系词。 此处which替代前文整个句子的内容。
.去掉of
考查状语从句的连接词。根据后面的句子he seldom calls me可知用because。
. his改为my
考查代词指代一致。根据文意应是“我的生日”。
. disappoint改为disappointment 考查固定短语的用法。此处to是介词，其后用名词。
. only后加to
考查不定式作目的状语。父亲给我打电话只是告诉我。。。。
.has改为had
考查动词时态。根据文意“存钱”在“打电话”之前，故用过去完成时。
. after改为before
考查句意的理解。我还没有来得及告诉他那天是我的生日就挂掉了。此处before意为：没来得及。。。就。。。
8. eye改为eyes
考查名词的单复数。此处指双眼用eyes。
. true改为truly
考查副词的用法。修饰动词love用副词。
. 正确
经分析本句正确。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．___________
the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately.
77．___________
She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking 78．____________
on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．____________
kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．____________
burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the
81．____________
windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．____________surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I 83．____________
was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it
84．____________
was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．____________
76．as→ When
77．answer后加it 78．She→ It
79．a→ the
80． room后加was
81．opening→ opened
82．With→ To
83．√
84．去掉about
85．which→ that
J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now
76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around
77.______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After
78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,
79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond
80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying
81．________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to
82.________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It
83．________
was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to
84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.
85._______
Yours,
Mike
【参考答案】
76.after---since
77.them---us
78.for---with
79.正确
80.去掉much
81.staying---stay
82.day----days
83.fly---flew
84.trip前a
85.better----more
(2017·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)
I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.
【参考答案】：
I'm a senior student from China,
seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With
interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who
communicating with others. I
speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over
world; for another, I expect to learn
more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious
I'm really looking forward to your approval.
短文改错
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then
76.
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home
77.
at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We
78.
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,
79.
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .
80.
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool
81.
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat
82.
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any
83.
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .
84.
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories
85.
are as sweet as ever before .
【参考答案】
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then
76.
yet
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home
77.
were
at ∧early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We
78.
an
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,
79.
ourselves
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .
80.
helpless
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81.
swim
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat
82.
treated
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83.
√
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .
84.
others
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85.
since
are as sweet as ever before .
短文改错
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 76. _______
the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 77. _______
long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 78. _______
to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people
79. _______
like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words,
80. _______
they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are 81. _______
playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 82. _______
for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy.
83. _______
Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American 84. _______
big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 85. _______
【参考答案】
76. and －but
77. woman－women
78.
called前加had 79. play- playing
80． 正确
81. feel-feeling
82. how-why
83. make-makes
84.去掉the
85. sell-buy
阅读理解
Having good etiquette (礼节) at the workplace is very important to be a favorite in an office.However，it’s observed that many people aren’t aware of the workplace etiquette and this creates a very bad impression in the office.So it’s important to know some workplace etiquette tips.
Among all the workplace etiquette guidelines，the most important is to be punctual to your office.Though going late due to an emergency is okay，habitual late comers are never appreciated in any organization.By arriving at your office on time，you show that you’re aware of your responsibilities and have respect for the organization.In case you feel that you would be late，call the concerned authority and report the matter to him or her.
Also，a proper knowledge of the workplace email etiquette is a must.In the official emails，you need to mention the subject concisely，while at the same time include all the important details which are to be shared.You should use good and grammatically correct language while writing emails.
A knowledge of telephone etiquette in the workplace is very important as well.While talking on the telephone，be polite and listen to what they’re saying carefully.Only then should you say what you feel.Speak in a voice which would be heard clearly at the other end.
The workplace guidelines are important even while you’re dining or celebrating with your coworkers.If you get a call in between，receive it after you’re permitted by the others by saying “excuse me”．Don’t talk loudly while eating.Greet people well and try to make them feel comfortable while being in your company.
These guidelines will help you become the best employee of a company.All the best!
【语篇解读 在工作中要想成为办公室里受欢迎的人，有好的礼节是很重要的。本文介绍了在工作中应注意的一些礼节。
1．Why should you try to be punctual?
A．To prove you are not a habitual late comer.
B．To respect the rules of the organization.
C．To show that you are a responsible worker.
D．To win other workers’ respect.
解析 细节理解题。根据第二段第三句可知，准时上班一是表明你意识到了你的责任，二是表明你对这个团体的尊重，因此应选择C。
答案 C
2．How should you write an official email?
A．Write the subject clearly and simply.
B．Include all the details in the email.
C．Make the language as beautiful as possible.
D．Make emails as brief as possible.
解析 细节理解题。根据第三段内容可知，电子邮件应主题简洁并包含所有重要的细节，因此选择A。
答案 A
3．Which of the following is considered NOT acceptable about making phone calls in the workplace?
A．Using polite language.
B．Listening with patience and care.
C．Speaking clearly.
D．Answering a call whenever it comes in.
解析 细节理解题。根据倒数第二段第二句可知，无论什么时候来电话都接是不被接受的行为。
答案 D
4．In the writer’s opinion，workplace etiquette________.
A．is easy to master
B．is considered important by all employees
C．can be helpful in doing your work well
D．will bring you good luck and good salaries
解析 推理判断题。综合全文尤其是第一段和最后一段内容可知，工作中的礼节有助于做好工作。
答案 C