山东长岛县2017高考英语一轮短文改错选练
短文改错----记叙文
2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三上学期期初联考
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分1 0分）
下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。
It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.
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【】1. It→As
正如我们看见的，现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。这里是非限制性定语从句，用As引导。
2. millions→million 到2002年底，有2千万的手机用户。数词后面加million
3.a→the到2005年，这个数字到了3千万。这里是特指“手机用户的数量”，a→the
4.convenience→convenient人们发现手机很方便，使用find +宾语+形容词：convenience→convenient
5. to ---with
get in touch with sb ,与某人取得联系。
6. meeting→meet有不同的功能满足不同的需求。这里是不定式做目的状语
7. surf→surfing such as后面接动名词： surf→surfing
8.去掉an For example“例如”：去掉an
9.our前加to手机的辐射会对我们的健康造成伤害。Do harm to“对…造成伤害”，our前加to
10.are→is 拥有手机的人的数量还在稳定上升。主语是the number of…，谓语是单数：are→is
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin．Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music"．After I
graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store． There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed．He became my the first guitar teacher．It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.
【参考答案】短文改错
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learning
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understand “real music”. After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we
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started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day
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guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such
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models
most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.
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2017模拟短文改错LMother’s Day was around the corner. My good friend
1. _____
Alice, Jenny and I get together, discussing what we should do to
2. ______
our respect for. Alice was planning to buy some flowers with
3. ______
his pocket money in honor of her mother. Jenny was going to buy
4. ______
vegetables to cook delicious dinner for her family on that day, because
5. _____
she wanted to experience how many her mother does for her family 6. ______
every day. As for me, I’d like to make a greeting card, said
7. ______
“Happy Mother’s Day”, in which I would also tell my mother
8. ______
to pay attention to health or promise her to study harder.
9. ______
We are looking forward to Mother’s Day. 10. ______
【参考答案及解析】
1．friend --- friends
考查名词的单复数。根据后为可知应是两人，故用复数形式。
．get --- got
考查动词时态。根据上文可知事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
．去掉for
考查介词的用法。此处what作do的宾语，for是多余的。
．his --- her
考查代词指代一致。根据文意Alice是女名，故用her。
cook 后加 a
考查冠词的用法。此处dinner是可数名词，其前应加a。
．many --- much
考查词义的区别。此处do much for为。。。做得多。
．said --- saying
考查现在分词作定语。此处相当于定语从句which says “Happy Mother’s Day”
8．in --- on考查介词的用法。此处on which相当于on the card。
．or --- and
考查句意理解。此处and表并列。
．V经分析本句正确。
There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That
76.________
was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I
77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except
78.________
one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted.
79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had
80.________
her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked
81.________
us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for
82.________
an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for
83.________
school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well
84.________
because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on.
85.________
【参考答案】76. 去掉her
77.
whenever → when
78. to
→
with
79. well ∧ as
80. of → for
81.
√
82. 去掉第二个 to
83. them → us
84. until → before
85.
can →
could
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about
77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources
82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85.____________
【参考答案】
I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about
77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources
82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85. them
【短文改错】
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University
1.______
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it
2______
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school
3____
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.
4___ ___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you
5___
are particular interested in human rights.So I will
6____
see that there is anything on their website
7____
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport
8____
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he
9___
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look
10___
forward to seeing you again.
【参考答案】
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__
are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__
see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_
forward to seeing you again.
【2015高考复习】阅读理解 “One City One Book” is a generic name (通称) for a community reading program that attempts to get everyone in a city to read and discuss the same book.Popular book picks have been Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird，Ernest Gaines’s A Lesson Before Dying，and Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451.
“One City One Book” programs take the idea of a localized book discussion club and expand it to cover a whole city.The first such program was “If All of Seattle Read the Same Book” in 1998，started by Nancy Pearl at Seattle Public Library’s Washington Center for the Book.The book chosen for the program was The Sweet Hereafter by Russell Banks，written in 1991.Other cities copied the idea，and the Library of Congress listed 404 programs occurring in 2007.
Each city’s program has its own goals；these typically include building a sense of community and promoting literacy.Nancy Pearl warns against expecting too much from a program：“Keep in mind that this is a library program，it’s not an exercise in civics，and that it’s not intended to have literature cure the racial divide.This is about a work of literature.”
Programs typically involve more than having everyone read the same book.Some other activities that have been included are：book discussion sessions，scholarly lectures on the book or related topics，a visit by the author，exhibits，related arts programming (especially showing a movie of the book if there is one)，and integration into school curricula.In Boston the “One City One Story” program used shorter stories and distributed tens of thousands of free copies of the story over the course of a month.
American Library Association puts out a detailed stepbystep guide on how to organize a local program，including the critical step of picking the one book.The Center for the Book at the Library of Congress tracks all known programs and the books they have used.
【语篇解读 本文是说明文，介绍了美国开展的“一个城市，一本书”的读书活动。
4．“One City One Book” programs________.
A．ask everyone in a city to donate one book
B．can rid a city of racial divide through reading
C．choose short stories for people to read
D．encourage everyone in a city to read and discuss the same book
解析 细节理解题。从文章第一段第一句可知，这个活动旨在让同一个城市的人们读同一本书并共同评论这本书。
答案 D
5．We know from the second paragraph that “One City One Book” programs________.
A．became popular very quickly
B．have been held more than 400 times in Seattle
C．were sponsored by the Library of Congress
D．reached its peak in 2007
解析 推理判断题。从文章第二段可知，当西雅图在1998年首先推出这个活动以后，其他城市也纷纷效仿，到2007年这个活动已经在400多个城市推出，可见这个活动流行得非常迅速。
答案 A
6．We can infer from the third paragraph that Nancy Pearl________.
A．expects much from the programs
B．didn’t expect that the programs would run so well
C．has a practical attitude towards the programs
D．believes the programs will push forward community building
解析 推理判断题。从文章第三段中Nancy Pearl的话可知，她警告人们不要对这个活动期望太多，说明她对这个活动持有十分务实的态度。
答案 C
7．What kind of role does American Library Association play in the programs?
A．It picks out the city which runs the programs well.
B．It gives free books to the host city.
C．It gives a practical guide to the programs.
D．It keeps a record of all known programs.
解析 细节理解题。从文章最后一段可知，美国图书馆协会负责具体指导活动的开展。
答案 C