2017届山东省长岛县高考英语一轮短文改错训练：10（含解析）

　　山东长岛县2017高考英语一轮短文改错选练

　　（2016高考模拟选编）短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计

　　I will never forget my experience during the Shanghai Expo，that has disturbed me a lot.It was a Saturday noon but many visitors were having a lunch on the grassland.I saw a foreign couple and a Chinese couple who have just finished their lunch.Without some hesitation，the Chinese couple threw their leftover food on the grass.Astonishing，the foreign couple said，“It's no good damaging the environment by littering carelessly.” The word of the foreign couple struck my mind.It is time that we strengthen

　　our

　　awareness

　　of environmental protection.The phenomenon for spitting and littering in public places should banned completely.

　　参考答案　

　　I will never forget my experience during the Shanghai Expo， has disturbed me a lot.It was a Saturday noon

　　many visitors were having

　　lunch on the grassland.I saw a foreign couple and a Chinese couple who

　　just finished their lunch.Without

　　hesitation，the Chinese couple threw their leftover food on the grass.，the foreign couple said，“It's no good damaging the environment by littering carelessly. The

　　of the foreign couple struck my mind.It is time that we

　　our

　　awareness

　　of environmental protection.The phenomenon spitting and littering in public places should

　　banned completely.

　　（2016高考模拟选编）短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I'll never forget the night when our car broken down.We were heading home after a wonderfully evening with our friends.It was well after midnight but we were still miles away from home.There was no traffics on the road，so we had to walk to home.Worse still，it started to rain，but by the time we got home，we were wet through.And it was then what we discovered that we had left our front door key in the car.We have no choice but break a window and climb in.Then an policeman came and we had to explain the situation for him.We went to bed at 3 am.

　　参考答案　

　　I'll never forget the night when our car

　　down.We were heading home after a

　　evening with our friends.It was well after midnight but we were still miles away from home.There was no

　　on the road，so we had to walk

　　home.Worse still，it started to rain， by the time we got home，we were wet through.And it was then

　　we discovered that we had left our front door key in the car.We

　　no choice but

　　break a window and climb in.Then

　　policeman came and we had to explain the situation

　　him.We went to bed at 3 am.

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。 This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　【参考答案】1.

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old

　　deeply

　　man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and

　　knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people

　　worse

　　directions/all 改any

　　around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.

　　rushed

　　knowing

　　Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧. The old man counted the

　　up

　　money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of

　　missing /lost

　　nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　our

　　that

　　短文改错。

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意:

　　每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　The way of communication in people’s life has changed a lot of in recent years. In the past, people keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or use the public telephone. But now almost everyone have a mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access the Internet, it enables them to send and accept e-mails whenever they like. With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficiently. It used to take them several days to hear from each other, and now it takes only several minutes, even if we are in two different continents.

　　【参考答案】2.

　　1. a lot of中的of去掉 2. keep—kept

　　3. use—using

　　4. have—has

　　5. access后加to 6. it—which

　　7. accept—receive

　　8. efficiently—efficient

　　9. and—but

　　10. we—they

　　短文改错

　　I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gate I happen to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years. After that, we went boating in a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write each other in the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very gladly to have a chance to practice my oral English.

　　【参考答案】3.

　　1. happen—happened

　　2. America—American

　　3. him—them

　　4. travel—travelling

　　5. with去掉 6. been去掉 7. in—on

　　8. address—addresses

　　9. wirte后加to 10. gladly—glad

　　【2015高考复习】阅读理解Walk down the drinks section at the supermarket.Look in the drink cooler in your local convenience store.A new drink is taking up more and more space on the shelves，and that drink is water.Bottled water sales in the US rose to 1.7 billion gallons in 2010 for plastic bottles alone，compared to total sales of only 700 million gallons in 1990.Whereas bottled water was once associated only with the rich and the privileged (特权阶层)，it is now regularly drunk by people at all income levels despite the fact that the price of bottled water can be between 240 and 10,000 times higher per gallon than tap water.What accounts for this surprising increase in demand?

　　Traditionally，people have drunk bottled water for health reasons.The practice of “taking the waters” originated with

　　the Romans，who believed that a person developed a healthy mind by building a healthy body.Across Europe，drinking or bathing in mineral water has been associated with the power to cure various diseases.Health spas at Evian in France and Pellegrino in Italy began bottling water so that their consumers could continue their treatments at home.The consumers in the 21st century are also concerned about health.However，in America，where the habit of drinking bottled water is relatively new，the concern is often more related to the purity or sterilization (消毒) of the water than to its mineral contents.Americans are often worried about the effects of the chemical pollution and other contaminants on the water supply.Many Americans view bottled water as a safe alternative to tap water.

　　Further reasons for drinking bottled water are its usefulness as an aid to digestion，as a complement to a good meal in a restaurant，and for taste.City tap water is often treated with chlorine (氯) to guard against harmful micro­organisms.Chlorine，as well as metals from pipes and tanks used to distribute and store tap water，can leave behind an unpleasant taste.

　　语篇解读　本文从两个方面分析了瓶装水销量提高的原因。

　　1．Which of the following statements is true?

　　A．Bottled water was once drunk both by the rich and the poor.

　　B．Bottled water sales have risen，for it’s cheaper than tap water.

　　C．Europeans believed in the power of treatment of mineral water.

　　D．Americans have had the habit of drinking bottled water for long.

　　解析　正误判断题。由文章第二段的第三句可知，在整个欧洲，饮用或用矿泉水洗澡已经与治愈各种疾病的能力联系起来。

　　答案　C

　　2．People prefer bottled water because________.

　　A．it does good to their health

　　B．it has chlorine to make it taste good

　　C．it contains no mineral pollution at all

　　D．it’s a practice originated with the Romans

　　解析　细节理解题。由文章第二段的第一句“Traditionally，people have drunk bottled water for health reasons.”可知答案。

　　答案　A

　　3．The underlined word “contaminants” most probably means________.

　　A．pollutants

　　B．micro­organisms

　　C．chemicals D．minerals

　　解析　词义猜测题。由“the chemical pollution and other”可知画线词与pollutants同义。

　　答案　A

　　4．Which of the following could be the best title for the passage?

　　A．How Bottled Water Originated

　　B．“Taking the Waters” Has Been Practiced for Long

　　C．What’s the Safe Alternative to Tap Water

　　D．Why Bottled Water Sales Increase

　　解析　主旨大意题。文章第一段的最后一句“What accounts for this surprising increase in demand？”是一个承上启下的句子，下面两段都在讲瓶装水销量上涨的原因。

　　答案　D

　　阅读理解For anyone who is determined to be a fashion designer，it is not enough to have succeeded in college.The real test is whether they can survive，and become established during their early 20s，making a name for themselves in the real world where business skills can be as important as talent and creativity.

　　Fashion is a hard business.There is a continuous amount of stress because work is at a constant and extremely fast speed to prepare for the next season’s collections.It is extremely competitive and there is the constant need to make attractive advertisements of the latest fashion in newspapers and magazines.It also requires continual freshness because the appetite for new ideas is hard to satisfy.“We try to warn people before they come to us about how tough it is.” says Lydia Kemeny，Head of Fashion at St.Martin’s School of Art in London.“And we point out that drive and determination are absolutely necessary.”

　　This may seem far removed from the popular opinions of fashionable young people spending their time designing pretty dresses.That may well be what they do in their first year of study but a good college won’t be slow in introducing students to commercial realities，“We don’t walk our foot on the blossoming flower of creativity but in the second year we start introducing the restrictions

　　of price，producing

　　ability，marketing and so on.”

　　Almost all fashion design is done to a brief.It is not a form of self­expression as such，although there is certainly room for imagination and creativity.Most young designers are going to end up as employees of a producer or a fashion house and they still need to be able to work within the characteristic style of their employer.Even those students who are most modern in their own taste of clothes may need to adapt to produce designs which are right for the mainstream of the market.They also have to be able to work at both the expensive and the cheap end of the market and the challenge to produce good design inexpensively may well be demanding.

　　【语篇解读　成为时尚设计师并不是件容易的事。仅仅在大学校园里获取学业的成功是不够的，时尚在不断变化，商业技巧和天赋、创造性同样重要。 5．Which of the following is mainly discussed in the passage?

　　A．Talent in fashion.

　　B．Good marks at college.

　　C．Ability to create new designs.

　　D．Business skills in fashion industry.

　　解析　主旨大意题。第一段是文章的主题段，通读全文可知整篇文章介绍的是在时尚业应该掌握怎样的商业技巧才能立足。

　　答案　D

　　6．What can we learn from the second paragraph?

　　A．Fashion designers are highly motivated and really detemined.

　　B．Good preparations for the next season can reduce stress.

　　C．Consumers’ appetite for new ideas keeps changing.

　　D．Advertisement business is very competitive.

　　解析　细节理解题。从第二段中的“It also requires continual freshness because the appetite for new ideas is hard to satisfy.”可知消费者对时尚的追求是不断变化的。

　　答案　C

　　7．What does the underlined word “This” in Paragraph 3 refer to?

　　A．Lydia Kemeny’s opinion.

　　B．The competitive business world.

　　C．The warning to the young designers.

　　D．The real situation in fashion industry.

　　解析　代词指代题。通过阅读第二、三段可知，This指代的是第二段讲到的内容，即时尚界的真实情况。

　　答案　D

　　8．Which of the following is TRUE according to the passage?

　　A．St.Martin’s School of Art encourages the new students to design dresses they like.

　　B．St.Martin’s School of Art requires students to develop their creativity in their designing.

　　C．St.Martin’s School of Art demands students to make pretty dresses for companies.

　　D．St.Martin’s School of Art focuses

　　on teaching students commercial realities.

　　解析　正误判断题。根据第三段的第二句和第三句可知该校重视教学生有关商业方面的知识。

　　答案　D