2017届高考英语一轮复习书面表达专项通关：提分秘籍

　　提分秘籍

　　十句作文法是有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高写作水平。其基本模式为：

　　第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。两者关系也可倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句点明主题。

　　第二段为正文，共七句。第三句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。第四至八句为扩展句（支撑句），说明和支持本段的主题。第九句为照应句，用来回扣第二段的开头。句与句之间要注意好过渡，以使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。

　　第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句， 它将前面的内容总结为一个结果，表明自己的论点。

　　注意

　　要提高语言表达的档次，在句式运用上就不能一味地使用简单句和陈述句，而应该根据实际情况灵活运用所学的各种句式。丰富的句式有助于考生在高考中出类拔萃，赢得高分。另外，十句和三段式书面表达方法只是一种简单实用的形式，可以有很多的变通。例如：每一段的句子完全可以根据情况和需要进行调整，最后一段的句子完全没必要只有一句话，当然，又臭又长的结尾和云里雾里的开头都是让人讨厌和出力不讨好的事情。

　　过渡词

　　要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有：

　　递进型：also, besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters/things worse, not only …but also等

　　解释型：that is (to say), in other words, or, in fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等

　　转折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary, on the other hand等

　　列举型：firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another (thing)等

　　举例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等

　　因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so… that,

　　so that等

　　让步型：though, although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if等

　　顺序型：first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally等

　　并列型：and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as等

　　时间型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ , hardly…when, no sooner…than, be about to do something when… be on the point of doing something when…等

　　总结型：in a/one word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion, every coins has two sides

　　见解型：as for me，in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，I’m sure等

　　条件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless等

　　开头句

　　论述的展开提出观点：

　　No one would deny that…

　　Now it is widely believed that…

　　When it comes to…, some think…

　　There is a public debate today that...

　　A is a common way of…, but is it a wise one?

　　Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+同位语从句

　　Different people hold different opinions.

　　Opinions are divided.

　　People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards…

　　With the rapid improvement in…/growing awareness of…, more and more…(e.g. With the rapid improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people‘s minds at ease.)

　　Recently, sth./the problem of…has been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern…（eg. Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions.）

　　In the past few years，there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…（eg. In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species.）

　　Nowadaysmore/most important/dangerous for our society is…（eg. Nowadays, most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles.）

　　Now there is a growing awareness that+同位语从句...

　　It is time we explore the truth of ...

　　进一步提出观点：

　　…of them hold the opinion that ….（不同观点）

　　…of them are in favor of the idea that…（不同观点）

　　People who are for/against the idea think …（不同观点）

　　However, each coin has two sides.（不同观点）

　　Different from those…., …people think ….（不同观点）

　　On the other hand, … people object that（有些人反对道…）.（不同观点）

　　A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...

　　Besides, other reasons are...

　　提出假想例子的方式：

　　Suppose that...

　　Just imagine what would be like if...

　　It is reasonable to expect...

　　It is not surprising that...

　　举普通例子：

　　For example(instance),...

　　... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)

　　We can take something for example.

　　A particular example for this is...

　　引用：

　　One of the greatest early writers said ...

　　"Knowledge is power", such is the remark of ...

　　As somebody once put it, “…”

　　"...". How often we hear such words like these.

　　提出原因：

　　There are many reasons for ...

　　Why .... ? For one thing,... ; for another thing,…

　　The answer to this problem involves many factors.

　　Most people would agree that...

　　Some people may neglect that in fact...

　　Others suggest that...

　　Part of the explanation is...

　　进行对比：

　　The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...

　　Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...

　　Indeed , A has more advantages than B when sth is concerned.

　　A maybe ... , but it has the disadvantage that...

　　承上启下：

　　To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...

　　A study of ... will make this point clear

　　让步：

　　Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...

　　I do not deny that A has its own merits.

　　结尾：

　　From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

　　In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do something

　　In short...

　　注（图表型）

　　According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that...

　　As can be seen from the table/graph/figure, there is an obvious and rapid increase /decrease/decline/favorable (an unfavorable) change in...

　　As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great changes have taken place in... over the period of time from...（年份）to（年份）

　　The table/graph shows that there is an) declining/increasing trend of ...from...（年份）to（年份）

　　Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that

　　方法一使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档

　　方法二巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力

　　方法三尝试多样化表达方式，包括无灵主语

　　1感叹句

　　1) How happy I was when I received your letter.

　　2What a kind boy he is!

　　3) How disappointed he was!

　　2. 强调句

　　It was this young boy that helped the old granny.

　　3倒装句

　　1) Only in this way can you solve this problem.

　　2) There comes the police car.

　　3) Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.

　　4省略句

　　They read while walking or riding on a bus.

　　5with短语

　　I saw a young lady walking slowly in the streetwith a handbag in her hand.

　　6. 定语从句，特别是高级定语从句，以及非限制性定语从句。

　　In my opinion, Internet bars should be places where we can find much useful information.

　　7各种名词性从句，包括主语从句，宾语从句，表语从句，同位语从句。

　　That’s what I should do.

　　8各种状语从句

　　On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wife…

　　No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were …

　　Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were …