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So I had to move apart.Mr.Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park.His new apartment is much big than before.The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area.Therefore，Mr.Yang doesn't seem to worry about the long distance.He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
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my former neighbor，Mr.Yang.He and I used to livinglive
next to each other for many years.About half a year ago，an order came whichthat
the old building，along with many other similar ones，werewas
going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.
So Iwe
had to move apart.Mr.Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park.His new apartment is much bigbigger
than before.The only problem is that it tooktakes
quite a long time to get to the downtown area.ThereforeHowever ，Mr.Yang doesn't seem to worry about the long distance.He says that ∧a new subway line is to be built in a few yearyears
and he is sure life will be better in the future.
Yesterday I went to the park.I happened to see a touched event.At that time，some people were boating of the lake.A happy family was taking photos when suddenly the girl falls off the boat into the water.The girl could swim and was struggling，so her parents cried out，“Help! Help！” It was obviously that they could not swime were saved!
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event.At that time，some people were boating ofon
the lake.A happy family was taking photos when suddenly the girl fallsfell
off the boat into the water.The girl could ∧not couldcouldn't
swim and was struggling，so her parents cried out，“Help! Help！” It was
that they could not swim，either.Hearing the cry，thea
young man immediately rushed to the lake.Without taking awayoff
his clothes，he jumped into the water and swam towards the girl，thatwho
was already tired out.At last he
carried her to the bank.She werewas
saved!
My friendship with Yang Qing began when we meet in our school's photo club.From then on we became good friend.We had common interest in basketball and often shared their experience about photographing.On weekends we rode to play the basketball together.Now in Senior 3，we seldom play together，or still keep in touch and encourage each other.With the entrance exam comes near，I'm worried about what my life will like as we may go to different universities.But now what doesn't worry me any more.Because I know just as the old saying goes: truly friendship will always live on no matter where far apart we are.
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in our school's photo club.From then on we became good friendfriends .We had common interest in basketball and often shared theirour
experience about photographing.On weekends we rode to play ﹨ basketball together.Now in Senior 3，we seldom play together，orbut
still keep in touch and encourage each other.With the entrance exam comescoming
near，I'm worried about what my life will ∧be like as we may go to different universities.But now whatit
doesn't worry me any more.Because I know just as the old saying goes: trulytrue
friendship will always live on no matter wherehow
far apart we are.
My neighbor's children love playing hide－and－seek as other children dogined the game they played themselves last week would be reported in the local newspaper.One
afternoon，they are playing at the street corner.Paul，only five year old，hid and locked himself in a mailbox in accident.His sister，Nancy，heard his cries and realized what had
happened，so she immediately asked a mailman open the metal door.Paul was free，but he had such heavy a scare that he could not stop cry.The mailman told him that next time he wanted to hide in a mailbox，he should remember to put the stamp on himself.When he heard that，Paul burst into laughing.
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My neighbor's children love playing hide－and－seek as other children do had imagined the game they played ﹨ last week would be reported in the local newspaper.One
afternoon，they arewere
playing at the street corner.Paul，only five yearyears
old，hid and locked himself in a mailbox inby
accident.His sister，Nancy，heard his cries and realized what had
happened，so she immediately asked a mailman ∧to open the metal door.Paul was free，but he had suchso
heavy a scare that he could not stop crycrying .The mailman told him that next time he wanted to hide in a mailbox，he should remember to put thea
stamp on himself.When he heard that，Paul burst intoout
.
In order to make best of learning materials，the Students' Union of our school is planning an activity.The school－leavers are called on to give away our used books－carbon lifestylend supported by the teachers and students alike.The activity will be hold on the first floor of the school library and
so it will last eleven days，from June 10 to 20.As a student，I am strong for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.I hope that this kind of activity would continue every year for the future.
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－leavers are called on to give away ou used books，newspapers or magazines to the studentstudents
in the lower grades.The idea，thatwhich
is intended to promote friendship and encourage a low－carbon lifestyle highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike.The activity will be holdheld
on the first floor of the school library and ﹨ it will last eleven days，from June 10 to 20.As a student，I am strongstrongly
for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.I hope that this kind of activity wouldwill
continue every year forin
the future.
Last evening，I went to a teahouse with my best friends Susan.Before the tea was serving，we talked to each other happily.When the waiter came to us with the tea，we didn't see him.Unfortunately，Susan raises her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table.Her hand hit on the cup，and the tea was spattered(溅洒) on her trousers.In my surprisestead complaining，Susan smiled，“So lucky that it's not on my white shirt，and I can't even clean it.” His words were very inspired.We couldn't foresee what would happen，but looking at it in a positive way could make we always happy.
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ning，I went to a teahouse with my best friendsfriend
Susan.Before the tea was servingserved ，we talked to each other happily.When the waiter came to us with the tea，we didn't see him.Unfortunately，Susan raisesraised
her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table.Her hand hit ﹨ the cup，and the tea was spattered(溅洒) on her trousers.ITo
my surprise，instead∧of complaining，Susan smiled，“So lucky that it's not on my white shirt，andor
I can't even clean it.” HisHer
words were very inspiredinspiring .We couldn't foresee what would happen，but looking at it in a positive way could make weus
always happy.
I am sad to hear of Mr Tian will lose his job for ever.He had taught me three years before I was took out of the mountains.I still remember him carry us on his back across the river.And he has been an only teacher in the school ever since I could remember.Yet，the government wants he to go home now.That's to say，they don't allow him to be a teacher any longer.Why? That's unfair of all the teachers like Mr Tian.
Cities have many good teachers，and few wants to work in a remote mountain school.The government has once sent some teachers
there，but nobody of them stayed.What will happen to the little friends there once Mr Tian away?
I love Mr Tian.Best wishes to him!
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ofthat
Mr Tian will lose his job for ever.He had taught me three years before I was tooktaken
out of the mountains.I still remember him carrycarrying
us on his back across the river.And he has been anthe
only teacher in the school ever since I could remember.Yet，the government wants hehim
to go home now.That's to say，they don't allow him to be a teacher any longer.Why? That's unfair offor
all the teachers like Mr Tian.
Cities have many good teachers，andbut
few wants to work in a remote mountain school.The government hashad
once sent some teachers
there，but nobodynone
of them stayed.What will happen to the little friends there once Mr Tian ∧is
away?
I love Mr Tian.Best wishes to him!
When we were in primary school，we were required to read English every morning.Now we are college students，and keep reading English every morning is still very much important.For one thing，it is well－known that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day.Otherwisesh，correct our pronunciations and foster our sense of language.For another，reading English in the morning is a good start for a new day.If we read English in the morning，we have high enthusiasm to do other things.In short，it is still important to read English every morning as though we are in universities，especially for those who are English major.
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When we were in primary schoolg
reading English every morning is still very ﹨ important.For one thing，it is well－known that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day.Otherwis learned.In addition，keeping reading English every morning is a good way to practice yourour
oral English，correct our pronunciationspronunciation
and foster our sense of language.For another，reading English in the morning is a good start forof
a new day.If we read English in the morning，we ∧will have high enthusiasm to do other things.In short，it is still important to read English every morning aseven
though we are in universities，especially for those who are English majormajors .
Nowadays，there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering.It's well－known that volunteering jobs are making contribution to society with something in return.It's as the Leifeng Spirit.Howevere World Cup.Moreover，we can often see many students go to visit the old to bring warmth to them.Even though some people's career is a volunteer.They are ready to helping others.Although the volunteers are much more common，we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society.
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Nowadays increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering.It's well－known that volunteering jobs are making contributiocontributions
to society with somethingnothing
in return.It's aslike
the Leifeng Spirit.However，knowing this，there are still many people ∧who/that
would like to devote themselves in this trend.For instance，the 2017 World Cup has suchso
many volunteers.They makemade
lots of contributions to the success of the World Cup.Moreover，we can often see many students go to visit the old to bring warmth to them.Even ﹨ some people's career is a volunteer.They are ready to helpinghelp
others.Although the volunteers are much more common，we still need to thank theythem
for devoting themselves to society.
Recently the issue of students' study has brought to public attention.Students are anxious about what to improve their scores.Some work very hard.They spend all their time in study.They do nothing except to study.As far as I'm concerned，it is not a good way to study.Alternating work with rest was the best way to study well.Students should try their best to learn knowledges as Francis Bacon said，“Knowledge is power”．Therefore，students should have other recreational activities to relax themselves，because people can do things more efficient after relaxing themselves.What's more，people can obtain knowledge from many sources besides books，that is beneficial for study.Thus，combining exertion and rest are the best to study.
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s are anxious about whathow
to improve their scores.Some work very hard.They spend all their time inon
study.They do nothing except ﹨ study.As far as I'm concerned，it is not a good way to study.Alternating work with rest wasis
the best way to study well.Students should try their best to learn knowledgesknowledge
as Francis Bacon said，“Knowledge is power”． after relaxing themselves.What's more，people can obtain knowledge from many sources besides books，thatwhich
is beneficial for study.Thus，combining exertion and rest areis
the best to study.
What is your favorite kind of music? Do you like jazz，popular music，classical music，folk songs，blues，and so on? In high school I took one course calling music appreciation which I great enjoyed.This was not only to learn how to play a specific instrument but learn how to read and listen to music as an art form.We read the stories about the life of many composers and the history of the music instruments themselves.Sometimes we listen to tapes in the language laboratory or concerts.Music is sometimes called an universal language.A composer whom cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride，excitement and despair，peace and mystery along his music.
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Do you like jazz，popular music，classical music，folk songs，blues，and so on? In high school I took one course callingcalled
music appreciation which I greatgreatly
enjoyed.This was not ﹨ to learn how to play a specific instrument but ∧to
learn how to read and listen to music as an art form.We read the stories about the lifelives
of many composers and the history of the musicmusical
instruments themselves.Sometimes we listenlistened
to tapes in the language laboratory or concerts.Music is sometimes called ana
universal language.A composer whomwho
cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride，excitement and despair，peace and mystery along his music.
Hangzhou is one of the most famous tourist city in China，not famous for its natural beauty，but also famous for its history.There are so much tourist attractions in this city like the West Lake，the Temple of General Yuefei and Lingyin Temple.You can't go to Hangzhou without visit these places.Hangzhou is also famous for its silk or tea products.You can go to the Hangzhou Silk City to buy silk articles.And you can either go to the National Tea Museum to have some Chinese tea.The best season to visit Hangzhou is spring，because of it's warm and sunny during that time.The trees are coming up and the flowers are blooming.Every spring，many people went to Hangzhou to go boating on the West Lake.What I wish to visit that beautiful city.
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in China，not ∧only
famous for its natural beauty，but also famous for its history.There are so muchmany
tourist attractions in this city like the West Lake，the Temple of General Yuefei and Lingyin Temple.You can't go to Hangzhou without visit these places.Hangzhou is also famous for its silk orand
tea products.You can go to the Hangzhou Silk City to buy silk articles.And you can eitheralso
go to the National Tea Museum to have some Chinese tea.The best season to visit Hangzhou is spring，because ﹨it's warm and sunny during that time.The trees are coming upout
and the flowers are blooming.Every spring，many people wentgo
to Hangzhou to go boating on the West Lake.WhatHow
I wish to visit that beautiful city.