【金版教程】2017高考英语二轮复习训练：4-3-4 开放作文a（含解析）

　　建议用时：35分钟

　　一、按写作步骤完成下面写作任务

　　[2015·福建厦门质检]假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Franklin在孔子学院学习，他写信咨询你是否赞成“不以规矩，不成方圆”这一说法。请用英语写一封回信，阐述你的观点和看法。

　　内容要点：1.个人观点；2.分析说明；3.恰当的结尾。

　　注意：1.信件开头已写出，不计入总词数；

　　2．文中不能出现考生个人信息；

　　3．词数：120左右。

　　参考词汇：规矩rules and regulations

　　Dear Franklin，

　　I am deeply impressed by your love for learning Chinese culture. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　第一步：审题。

　　1．本文为________类作文

　　2．体裁是________

　　3．人称是________

　　4．时态是________

　　答案：1.半开放　2.应用文(书信)　3.第一人称　4.一般现在时

　　第二步：联想词汇——紧扣题目要求及内容要点。

　　1．规章制度________

　　答案：rules and regulations

　　2．行为________

　　答案：behavior

　　3．起作用________

　　答案：play a role in

　　4．发现自己被卡住________

　　答案：find oneself stuck

　　5．按某人的意愿________

　　答案：at one's owner's will

　　6．在公共区域________

　　答案：in public areas

　　7．为……奠定基础________

　　答案：lay foundation for

　　8．观察________

　　答案：observe

　　9．过上更好的生活________

　　答案：live a better life

　　第三步：连词成句——注意紧扣题目要求，列出要点。

　　(一)完成句子

　　1．________， I firmly believe that rules ________.

　　就我而言，我坚信规章制度在我们生活中起到重要作用。

　　答案：As far as I am concerned; play an important role in our life

　　2．________， rules regulate the norm of behavior in our society.

　　毫无疑问，规章制度在我们社会规范着人们的行为。

　　答案：Without doubt

　　3．We would ________ in traffic on the way to school or work.

　　我们会发现自己在去上学或上班的路上是会被堵住。

　　答案：find ourselves stuck

　　4．Cars would go ________.

　　汽车司机想怎么走就怎么走。

　　答案：at their owners' will

　　5．One would ________ even high above in the sky.

　　人们以为自己完全打开了自由的大门，甚至可以通往蓝天。

　　答案：feel free to open the safety door

　　6．This leaves others' lives ________.

　　这反而使他人的生命处于高度危险中。

　　答案：at high risk

　　7．Rules and regulations ________ a civilized society and ________.

　　规章制度为文明社会奠定了基础，也保护我们免于潜在的危险。

　　答案：lay foundation for; protect us from potential risks

　　8．Rules and regulations ________ by all the citizens.

　　规章制度应该每位公民都要遵守。

　　答案：are observed

　　9．We ________ and thus ________ of a fully civilized society.

　　我们过着有序的生活并享受全文明社会的利益。

　　答案：will live an orderly life; enjoy the benefits

　　(二)根据要求，对以上句子进行升级

　　升级一：把句2升级为同位语从句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：There is no doubt that rules regulate the norm of behavior in our society.

　　升级二：把句3、4合并为复合句。

　　_______________________________________________________

　　答案：We would find ourselves stuck in traffic on the way to school or work，as cars would go at their owners' will.

　　升级三：把句6升级为分词作句5的结果状语。

　　_______________________________________________________

　　答案：One would feel free to open the safety door even high above in the sky, leaving others' lives at high risk.

　　升级四：把句7升级为强调句型。

　　_______________________________________________________

　　答案：It is rules and regulations that lay the foundation for a civilized society and protect us from potential risks.

　　升级五：把句8、9合并为复合句并升级为倒装句：

　　_______________________________________________________

　　答案：Only when rules and regulations are observed by all the citizens will we live an orderly life and thus enjoy the benefits of a fully civilized society.

　　第四步：做好衔接，连句成篇。

　　_______________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　Dear_Franklin，

　　I_am_deeply_impressed_by_your_love_for_learning_Chinese_culture. As the old saying goes, nothing can be accomplished without rules and regulations. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that rules play an important role in our life.

　　There is no doubt that rules regulate the norm of behavior in our society. Without rules, we would find ourselves stuck in traffic on the way to school or work, as cars would go at their owners' will. Without rules, there are chances that one would grow cabbages in public parks or litter wherever they go. Without rules, one would feel free to open the safety door even high above in the sky, leaving others' lives at high risk.

　　To sum up, it is rules and regulations that lay the foundation for a civilized society and protect us from potential risks. Only when rules and regulations are well observed by all the citizens will we live an orderly life and thus enjoy the benefits of a fully civilized society.

　　Yours，

　　Li_Hua

　　二、课下练笔——仿照即时演练的步骤完成下面写作任务

　　[2015·浙江温州二模]作为一名中学生，你在成长的过程中会学到很多东西，如：如何有爱心、承担责任、学会感恩、择友等等。请选择一个话题，用英语描述一段经历，并说说你的想法。字数：100～120字左右。

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　　One possible version：

　　A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost. I've learned this from my own experience.

　　Once before a test, my friend Joy and I came into the classroom, where several chassmates gathered around, writing something excitedly. I was shocked when one of them told us secretly, “My friend in another class finished the test yesterday. I'll share you the right answers！” I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed. I refused her “generous” offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder, whispering, “We needn't follow them.”

　　To my understanding, friends, like books, if well chosen, will greatly benefit us. Never should we keep bad company.