2017届高三英语百强名校试题解析金卷（一）：湖南省湖南师范大学附属中学2017届高三上学期入学摸底考试（解析版）

　　时量：120分钟　满分：150分

　　第Ⅰ卷

　　第一部分　听力(共两节，满分30分)

　　做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。

　　第一节(共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分)

　　听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。

　　例：　How much is the shirt?

　　A. ￡19.15.

　　B. ￡9.18.

　　C. ￡9.15.

　　答案是　C。

　　1．When should the woman check in at the airport at the latest?

　　A. At 9：25.

　　B. At 9：30.

　　C. At 9：55.

　　2．What is Tom's job now?

　　A. A delivery man.

　　B. A salesperson.

　　C. A cook.

　　3．Which seat does the woman want?

　　A. The seat by the window.

　　B. The seat near to the exit.

　　C. The front seat.

　　4．Where does the conversation probably take place?

　　A. In a supermarket.

　　B. In a restaurant.

　　C. In a kitchen.

　　5．What does the woman think about her interview?

　　A. She did well in the interview.

　　B. It is very difficult.

　　C. She needs more luck.

　　第二节(共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分)

　　听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。

　　听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。

　　6．Why does Mike return home early today?

　　A. Because of the bad weather.

　　B. Because it is too noisy in the school.

　　C. Because he needs to attend the graduation ceremony.

　　7．What is the probable relationship between Mike and Alexandra?

　　A. Mum and son.

　　B. Colleagues.

　　C. Classmates.

　　听第7段材料，回答第8、9题。

　　8．What does the man think about spending their weekend in this way?

　　A. It's a great idea.

　　B. It's like being a teenager again.

　　C. It's calming.

　　9．What do the two speakers plan to do next?

　　A. Take a journey in the woods.

　　B. Set up their tents and make a fire.

　　C. Get their table and benches ready.

　　听第8段材料，回答第10至12题。

　　10．What size does the woman wear?

　　A. Size ten.

　　B. Size eight.

　　C. Size twelve.

　　11．Why does the woman want to buy the pink sweater for her sister?

　　A. Because her sister likes to wear sweater.

　　B. Because her sister's birthday is coming.

　　C. Because her sister will return home soon.

　　12．How much will the woman pay for the sweaters in the end?

　　A. $120.

　　B. $108.

　　C. $96.

　　听第9段材料，回答第13至16题。

　　13．When will the man go to Indonesia?

　　A. In July.

　　B. In June.

　　C. In August.

　　14．Why doesn't the man's mother want to go to Indonesia?

　　A. Because the food there is too different.

　　B. Because the weather there is too hot.

　　C. Because she has been there before.

　　15．What does the woman think about Indonesia?

　　A. It has many beautiful islands.

　　B. Its food is very spicy.

　　C. Its culture is full of conflicts.

　　16．Who will take care of the man's cat when he is away?

　　A. The woman.

　　B. The man's mother.

　　C. The man's wife.

　　听第10段材料，回答第17至20题。

　　17．According to the speaker, why has tourism become one of the fastest growing industries in most countries?

　　A. Because people are very fond of travelling.

　　B. Because more people can afford travelling around nowadays.

　　C. Because most countries are developing tourism very fast.

　　18．How many reasons does the speaker mention why travelling is so popular?

　　A. Three.

　　B. Four.

　　C. Five.

　　19．Why do some people think that travelling is not good?

　　A. Because it requires a lot of preparations.

　　B. Because they think travelling is tiring.

　　C. Because they always want to work.

　　20．What is TRUE about travelling?

　　A. Studies show that travelling is very tiring.

　　B. Studies show that travelling is good for work efficiency.

　　C. Travelling is very expensive.

　　第二部分　阅读理解(共两节，满分40分)

　　第一节(共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分)

　　阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

　　A

　　When you are travelling in Thailand, which means of transport is the best choice?

　　You can rent a variety of motorbikes or bikes in Thailand. It seems to be very popular in most of the beaches and islands along the places in the north. The most popular bikes are the little 125 cc Honda Dream which you can get for about 150 baht (铢) a day or as little as 3，000 baht per month, making it the cheapest way to tour Thailand for the people from other countries.

　　Sometimes you will have to go somewhere by taxi. When you are in cities in Thailand, especially in Bangkok, always remember to get a taxi that is traveling on the roads. Some drivers outside hotels refuse to use the meter(计程表). They will ask a price which is several times the price when they use the meter!

　　The quality of the roads in Thailand is generally pretty good, so renting cars is another way to get around. The big car rental companies may offer you slightly older cars at a very reasonable(合理的) price. It is a little surprising considering that the cost of buying a car in Thailand is more than that in the West. Petrol is also reasonably priced in Thailand, more expensive than American prices, but much cheaper than what is paid in Europe. In the past, Bangkok could be a difficult place to drive in—signs were generally in Thai only, making it a hard job to find exactly where you were by looking around. But now, the situation is improved. In a lot of places, even the farthest corners of the country, street signs are in both Thai and English.

　　21．To a foreigner, the most economical way to get around Thailand is renting a________．

　　A. motorbike

　　B. car

　　C. taxi

　　D. bike

　　22．What is the writer's advice about taking a taxi in Thailand?

　　A. To make sure there is a meter in it.

　　B. To take a taxi parked outside hotels.

　　C. To take a taxi going on the road.

　　D. To bargain with the driver over the price.

　　23．It was difficult to drive in Bangkok in the past because ________．

　　A. there were too many traffic jams on the roads

　　B. the signs were written only in their own language

　　C. there were no signs at the farthest corners

　　D. the quality of the roads was not good

　　【答案】

　　21.D

　　22.C

　　23.B

　　考点：考查风土人情类阅读

　　B

　　It was in the Victorian Era(维多利亚时期) that the novel became the leading form of literature in English. Most writers were more concerned to meet the tastes of the middle class. The best known works of the period included the works of Charles Dickens and the Bronté sisters and others.

　　Charles Dickens came on the literary scene in the 1830s. Dickens wrote vividly about London life and the struggles of the poor. Most of his works were written in a very humorous style, which was popular with readers of all classes.

　　The Bronté sisters were English writers of the 1840s and 1850s. They began to write from early childhood. In 1846 they published the first book at their own expense as poets; however, their book attracted little attention, selling only two copies. Then the sisters turned to writing novels, each producing a novel in the following year.

　　An interest in rural matters and the changing social and economic situation of the countryside may be seen in the novels of Thomas Hardy and a number of others.

　　Literature for children developed as a single style. Some works became well－known, such as those of Lewis Carroll and Edward Lear. Adventure novels were written for adults but are now generally grouped in the list for children. Helen Beatrix Potter was an English author at the end of the Victorian Era, best known for her children's books, which featured animal characters. In her thirties, Potter published the highly successful children's book The Tale of Peter Rabbit in 1902.

　　24．What can we know about Charles Dickens from the text?

　　A. He described the struggles of the poor in London.

　　B. He showed an interest in rural matters in his writing.

　　C. He focused on changing social and economic situation of the countryside.

　　D. He published the highly successful children's book.

　　25．Which is TRUE about the Bronté sisters?

　　A. They were English writers of the 1830s.

　　B. They paid to have their first book published.

　　C. They began their writing from adulthood.

　　D. Their first book was successful.

　　26．The author states in the last paragraph that________．

　　A. society changed rapidly in the Victorian Era

　　B. Thomas Hardy was not as famous as Lewis Carroll

　　C. Edward Lear was famous for writing about animals

　　D. adventure novels were not written for children at first

　　27．This text is mainly about ________.

　　A. literature in the Victorian Era

　　B. writing styles in the Victorian Era

　　C. famous works in the Victorian Era

　　D. the importance of literature in the Victorian Era

　　【答案】

　　24.A

　　25.B

　　26.D

　　27.A

　　【名师点睛】这篇文章讲的是维多利亚时期的文学。例举了代表性的作家和他们的代表作。集中考查了推理题，要求考生在仔细阅读文章的基础之上，认真的推敲全文，准确的定位，合理的判断。关键是找出原文的根据，认真核查题支和原文的异同，常犯错误有：绝对化语言，范围扩大或缩小，以偏概全，张冠李戴等。带着问题，再读全文，找出答题所需要的依据，完成阅读。

　　考点：考查教育类阅读

　　C

　　Music is magic! Music speaks louder than words and it is a “language” that the whole world can understand. A piece of music can produce a response in the heart and mind. Like feeling an electrical current or receiving a personal radio signal, music has a spiritual effect on a person. Different kinds of music influence people in different ways.

　　I have listened to music all my life. When I was twelve years old, the Beatles came to America and my whole world opened up. Maybe young people today cannot understand the influence of the Beatles when they exploded across America. Their influence changed the way we dressed, looked, acted and spoke... even our culture. The Beatles arrived in America from the UK just under three months after the assassination(暗杀) of President John Kennedy, which had put America into a great depression. And the freshness and lively spirit of the Beatles was exactly what the country needed to refresh itself.

　　Music links the heart of the hearer with that of the composer. This means that it mixes the spirit of the composer with your spirit when you listen to it. And the music can take your spirit out of your body and transport you into another world. Music has a great way of touching people. Music can make you laugh, cry or shout. It's also a great source of inspiration.

　　Try this one day and notice what happens: make yourself a cup of tea, sit on your sofa and play one of your favorite songs. Close your eyes, and soon you'll find yourself creating vivid mental images—matching the music that you are listening to.

　　28．Music has magical power because it ________.

　　A. is a kind of language

　　B. can be played much louder than words

　　C. receives a personal radio signal

　　D. can influence a person's spirit

　　29．One can learn from the second paragraph that the Beatles ________．

　　A. were the biggest band in American history

　　B. are not accepted by modern American people

　　C. appeared at a special time in American politics

　　D. represented the roots of American culture

　　30．One will do all of the following while listening to music EXCEPT ________．

　　A. feeling very refreshed

　　B. having emotional changes

　　C. painting some vivid pictures

　　D. feeling inspired by the composer

　　31．It can be inferred from the passage that the author ________．

　　A. has been influenced by the Beatles

　　B. enjoys drinking tea in his spare time

　　C. admires President John Kennedy very much

　　D. likes to match his own feeling with that of the composer

　　【答案】

　　28.D

　　29.C

　　30.C

　　31.A

　　【学法指导】

　　推理判断题要求在理解原文表面文字信息的基础上，做出一定的推理判断，从而得到文章的隐含意义和深层意义。推理判断题所涉及的内容可能是文中的某一句话，也可能是某几句话，所以，推理题的答案只能是根据原文表面文字信息一步推出的答案：即对原文某一句话或某几句话所作的同义改写或综合。推理判断题的题干中通常含infer,suggest,imply,conclude  indicate等标志性词语。 这种题型主要包括细节判断题、态度观点推断题、写作意图推断题、文章出处判断题和猜测想象推断题。比如第31小题，A推理判断题。根据第二段第一、二句I have listened to music all my life. When I was twelve years old, the Beatles came to America and my whole world opened up.我一生都在听音乐。当我12岁的时候，the Beatles来到美国，我的整个世界打开了。所以作者也被影响。故选A。

　　考点：考查人生感悟类阅读

　　D

　　People are being lured(引诱) onto Facebook with the promise of a fun, free service without realizing they're paying for it by giving up large amounts of personal information. Facebook then attempts to make money by selling their data to advertisers that want to send targeted messages.

　　Most Facebook users don't realize this is happening. Even if they know what the company is up to, they still have no idea what they're paying for Facebook because people don't really know what their personal data is worth.

　　The biggest problem, however, is that the company keeps changing the rules. Early on, you keep everything private. That was the great thing about Facebook—you could create your own little private network. Last year, the company changed its privacy rules so that many things—your city, your photo, your friends' names—were set, by default(默认) to be shared with everyone on the Internet.

　　According to Facebook's vice－president Elliot Schrage, the company is simply making changes to improve its service, and if people don't share information, they have a “less satisfying experience”．

　　Some critics think this is more about Facebook looking to make more money. Its original business model, which involved selling ads and putting them at the side of the page, totally failed. Who wants to look at ads when they're online connecting with their friends?

　　The privacy issue has already landed Facebook in hot water in Washington. In April, Senator(议员) Charles Schumer called on Facebook to change its privacy policy. He also urged the Federal Trade Commission to set principles for social－networking sites. “I think the senator rightly communicated that we had not been clear about what the new products were and how people could choose to use them or not to use them，” Schrage admits.

　　I suspect that whatever Facebook has done so far to invade our privacy is only the beginning, which is why I'm considering deactivating(撤销) my account. Facebook is a handy site, but I'm upset by the idea that my information is in the hands of people I don't know. That's too high a price to pay.

　　32．What do we learn about Facebook from the first paragraph?

　　A. It is a website that sends messages to targeted users.

　　B. It makes money by putting on advertisements.

　　C. It profits by selling its users' personal data.

　　D. It provides loads of information to its users.

　　33．Why does Facebook make changes to its rules according to Elliot Schrage?

　　A. To improve its users' connectivity.

　　B. To follow the Federal guidelines.

　　C. To offer better service to its users.

　　D. To expand its scope of business.

　　34．What does Senator Charles Schumer advocate?

　　A. Working out regulations for social－networking sites.

　　B. Banning the sharing of users' personal information.

　　C. Removing ads from all social－networking sites.

　　D. Setting guidelines for advertising on websites.

　　35．Why does the author plan to cancel his Facebook account?

　　A. He is dissatisfied with its current service.

　　B. He doesn't want his personal data abused.

　　C. He finds many of its senior executives untrustworthy.

　　D. He is annoyed with its frequent rule changes.

　　【答案】

　　32.C

　　33.C

　　34.A

　　35.B

　　【名师点睛】

　　事实询问题，这类试题通常以疑问词what/who/when/where/why/how引起的特殊问句，就文章中某一词语、某一句子、某一段落或某一具体细节和事实进行提问。解答此类试题首先要弄清题目和每一个选项的含义，然后按题目要求寻找与之相关的细节，正确估计答案来源。同时要注意题目和文章中的暗示作用，特别注意辨别各种信息，确认各种信息。比如第33小题，C 细节理解题： According to Facebook's vice-president Elliot Schrage, the company is simply making changes to improve its service, 根据脸书的副总裁Elliot Schrage,这家公司只是在做一些改进服务的变动。

　　考点：考查社会现象类阅读

　　第二节(共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分)

　　根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

　　How to Build Healthy Interpersonal Relationship

　　Human beings are social creatures and thrive(茁壮成长) in relationships with others. A healthy part to be a well－rounded, happy individual is engaging in healthy relationships with others.These friendships can provide safe environments in which individuals can thrive and help promote general well－being. __36__

　　1．Know your worth.

　　One of the first steps in building healthy interpersonal relationships is understanding one's value. When an individual is aware of and treasures what he or she has, the building of relationships can be founded on that knowledge. __37__ Everyone has talents. When this worth is discovered, a person can then make use of these skills in approaching interpersonal relationships. If someone is a good listener, showing how to develop this skill can attract relationships with individuals who have a need for this talent.

　　2．Recognize the value of others.

　　__38__ In a healthy interpersonal relationships, both parties should be respected and feel as if they are valued in the friendship. When contributions to the relationship become one－sided, the relationship will move from healthy to unhealthy.

　　3．__39__

　　Another way to build healthy relationships is to make friends with someone who shares the same value systems and lifestyles.Knowing that a friend will not request something from an individual will help to foster trust in the relationship. __40__The relationship can grow on this familiarity. Trust can also develop from these similarities and go a long way in fostering a healthy friendship.

　　A. Everyone has worth.

　　B. Be true to yourself.

　　C. Seek out individuals with similar value systems.

　　D. A healthy interpersonal relationship cannot be built on dishonesty.

　　E. Also, having the same lifestyle can provide a link of familiarity.

　　F. Here are some tips to build healthy interpersonal relationships.

　　G. Along with understanding one's worth is recognizing and understanding the worth of others.

　　【答案】

　　36.F

　　37.A

　　38.G

　　39.C

　　40.E

　　【名师点拨】

　　七选五阅读题，有部分题出现在每一段的开始位置，若问题在段首 1.通常是段落主题句。认真阅读该段落，根据段落一致性原则，查找相关词或者同义词，从而推测出主题句，找到答案。 2.与后文是并列、转折、因果关系等。着重阅读后文第一两句，锁定线索信号词，然后在选项中查找 相关特征词。一般来说正确答案与它后面的一句话的在意思上是衔接的，所以通常情况下，这两句话中会 有某种的衔接手段。3.段落间

　　的过渡句。这时要前瞻后望找到启示，即阅读上一段结尾部分，通常正确答案与上一段结尾有机地衔接起来，并结合下一段内容，看所选的答案是否将两段内容连贯起来。比如第38小题，G根据下句：在健康的人际关系中，互相尊重，认为对方都是有价值的。可知上句的意思是：认识和理解别人的价值也就是个人的价值。可知G项符合题意。

　　考点：考查信息匹配

　　第三部分　英语知识运用(共两节，满分45分)

　　第一节　完形填空(共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分)

　　阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

　　On that particular day after I finished giving my training course, I took a flight home. Upon__41__the plane, I noticed a boy who was around eight years old, sitting in the window seat__42__mine. Trying my best to be__43__， I said “hello” and introduced myself, and he told me his name was Bradley. We started a__44__and within minutes, he took me into his confidence, saying, “This is the first time I have ever been on a plane. I’m a little bit__45__．” I managed to__46__him.

　　As we ascended(上升), he looked out of the window and started describing excitedly everything he was__47__. Then he told me he needed to go to the bathroom, __48__I stood up to let him out into the aisle. It was then that I noticed the brace (支柱) on his legs. Bradley, __49__made his way down to the bathroom and back. Sitting back down, he__50__， “I have muscular dystrophy(肌肉萎缩症), and so does my sister, who’s in a__51__now.”

　　As we descended(下降), he looked over, smiled, and spoke in a low, almost__52__voice, “You know, I was really__53__about who would sit beside me on the plane. I was afraid it would be someone who didn’t want to__54__with me. I’m so__55__I sat beside you.”

　　__56__the whole experience later that night, I was reminded of the__57__of being open to the moment. Now when__58__get(s) rough, I look out of the window, try to see what images the clouds are painting in the sky, __59__remember Bradley, the beautiful child who taught me that__60__．

　　41．A. boarding

　　B. leaving

　　C. approaching

　　D. seeing

　　42．A. across from

　　B. in front of

　　C. next to

　　D. behind of

　　43．A. quiet

　　B. helpful

　　C. famous

　　D. friendly

　　44．A. discussion

　　B. conversation

　　C. interview

　　D. game

　　45．A. happy

　　B. nervous

　　C. shy

　　D. sad

　　46．A. encourage

　　B. persuade

　　C. blame

　　D. comfort

　　47．A. planning

　　B. experiencing

　　C. covering

　　D. showing

　　48．A. so

　　B. because

　　C. or

　　D. but

　　49．A. continuously

　　B. gladly

　　C. slowly

　　D. peacefully

　　50．A. imagined

　　B. pretended

　　C. complained

　　D. explained

　　51．A. school

　　B. wheelchair

　　C. company

　　D. village

　　52． A. embarrassed

　　B. surprised

　　C. frightened

　　D. confused

　　53．A. careful

　　B. concerned

　　C. doubtful

　　D. excited

　　54．A. play

　　B. meet

　　C. agree

　　D. talk

　　55．A. amazed

　　B. glad

　　C. sorry

　　D. angry

　　56．A. Hearing of

　　B. Running into

　　C. Thinking about

　　D. Talking in

　　57．A. value

　　B. hope

　　C. secret

　　D. way

　　58．A. people

　　B. weather

　　C. images

　　D. times

　　59．A. and B. while

　　C. however

　　D. since

　　60．A. skill

　　B. story

　　C. lesson

　　D. trick

　　【答案】

　　41．A

　　42．C

　　43．D

　　44．B

　　45．B

　　46．D

　　47．B

　　48．A

　　49．C

　　50．D

　　51．B

　　52． A

　　53．B

　　54．D

　　55．B

　　56．C

　　57．A

　　58．D

　　59．A

　　60．C

　　58．D考查名词。A. people 人们； B. weather天气；

　　C. images 图像； D. times 时代。当时代变得艰苦时，我向窗外看，尽力地去看云彩在空中正在绘着什么样的图像。故选D。

　　59．A考查连词。A. and和；

　　B. while当---时候； C. however然而； D. since既然。尽力地去看云彩在空中正在绘着什么样的图像并记起Bradley。此处表示并列关系，故选A。

　　60．C考查名词。A. skill技能；

　　B. story 故事； C. lesson教训，课；

　　D. trick诡计。尽力地去看云彩在空中正在绘着什么样的图像并记起Bradley，一个给我启迪教训的美丽孩子。故选C。

　　【名师点拨】

　　在做完形填空时一定要注意and/but/so/besides/however/furthermore/moreover/in addition/what’s more等词汇、固定结构的运用。它们连接了上下文，起着承上起下的作用。像but（但是）、however（然而），表示转折，这说明前后的内容相反或相对。把握住这一点，做起题来就会得心应手。比如第48小题，A考查连词。A. so 所以； B. because因为；

　　C. or 或者； D. but 但是。他告诉我他需要去洗手间，所以我站起来让他进入通道。故选A。比如第59小题，A考查连词。A. and和；

　　B. while当---时候； C. however然而； D. since既然。尽力地去看云彩在空中正在绘着什么样的图像并记起Bradley。此处表示并列关系，故选A。

　　考点：考查故事类阅读

　　第Ⅱ卷

　　第三部分　英语知识运用(共两节，满分45分)

　　第二节(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)

　　阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

　　I was on a plane that was about to take off when my phone rang. It was my neighbor saying I needed to get to the hospital, for my wife Mary __61__(take) to hospital, and when I arrived doctors were trying to make__62__(she)come back to consciousness, but it was no good.

　　I explained to my__63__(child) that Mummy had died. Within hours they were running around the garden, __64__(chat) with their grandad while I was in a deep sorrow. I went through the motions of being a dad—cooking, cleaning, washing—but inside I felt hollow. One of the hardest things __65__(cope) with was that the boys had lost their mother. Mary and I were everyone’s favorite couple. The physical loss of not having her around was __66__(extreme) painful. For a year, I was in the __67__(deep) of misery. Then I decided that we had to get through this. I began to date Emma, __68__ had been a childhood friend, and Mickey couldn’t wait for us to get married so he could call her Mum. It wasn’t long before George warmed to her, too—she is wonderful with them. Two years later we got married and life started to look rosy. Emma and I have had two boys to add __69__our family.

　　We all have the concept that our lives are following __70__particular path, but sometimes it turns out it’s not going that way.

　　【答案】

　　61.was taken/had been taken　

　　62.her

　　63.children

　　64.chatting

　　65.to cope

　　66.extremely

　　67.depth/depths

　　78.who

　　69.to

　　70.a

　　【知识归纳】

　　以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

　　possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly

　　immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively；extreme--- extremely。

　　考点：考查语法填空

　　第四部分　写作(共两节，满分35分)

　　第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Yesterday, as I was queuing at the checkout at a store, there was an old lady in the front of me in line. She seemed very confusing when the cashier asked her pay US$38. She had about US$5 in her wallet. The cashier told her that she could not buy the items because she didn't have enough money. So, I told the cashier I would pay for that she bought. Afterwards, I paid for all the items. When I got outside, the lady was standing there. While I was talking about her, her daughter appeared. She told me that her mother had Alzheimer's disease. Then she noticed that her mother had three bag of groceries and wondered how she managed to pay for them with enough money. I told her that I had paid for it. The daughter wanted to pay me back, so I refused. I believe make others feel good makes me feel good.

　　【答案】

　　1.去掉in

　　front of中的the

　　2.confusing---confused

　　3.her和pay之间加to

　　4.that---what

　　5.about---to/with

　　6.bag---bags

　　7.with---without

　　8. it---them

　　9.so---but

　　10.make---making

　　【知识拓展】

　　1.动名词做主语后面的谓语动词用单数形式。Watching TV too much is bad for your eyes.看电视太多对你的眼睛不好。

　　2. 表示情感的现在分词和过去分词

　　surprising令人惊讶的，surprised感到惊讶；frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕； moving令人感动的， moved 感动；exciting 令人兴奋的，excited 感到兴奋；boring令人厌烦的， bored感到厌烦；annoying令人烦恼的---annoyed感到烦恼的；confusing令人疑惑的---confused感到困惑的。现在分词的主语通常指事物；过去分词的主语通常指人。

　　考点：考查短文改错

　　第二节　书面表达(满分25分)

　　假定你是李华，高考(National Matriculation Test)后想去澳大利亚旅行15天，主要想更多地了解当地文化和大学。给你的澳洲朋友Joe写信，请他根据你的时间和旅行目的对你附件中的行程(itinerary)进行一些修改。

　　注意：1. 词数100左右；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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　　【答案】

　　Dear Joe，

　　My high school is over at last! I am planning to travel around Australia for 15 days after the NMT, hoping to learn more about the local culture and universities. Since I have never been there before and only got some information from the Internet, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. Considering my travelling time and purposes, I wonder if you can make some changes to my itinerary in the attachment so that my trip can turn out more fruitful and practical. After all, you know what suites me best. I am looking forward to your reply and seeing you soon in Australia.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点说明】

　　文章虽然不长，但构思巧妙，结构严谨，并在文中运用高级词组和高级句式。My high school is over at last! I am planning to travel around Australia for 15 days after the NMT, hoping to learn more about the local culture and universities.现在分词做伴随状语；Since I have never been there before and only got some information from the Internet, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.句中巧妙运用原因状语从句；Considering my travelling time and purposes, I wonder if you can make some changes to my itinerary in the attachment so that my trip can turn out more fruitful and practical.宾语从句和目的状语从句完美结合；you know what suites me best. what引导的宾语从句尽显风采。

　　考点：考查话题作文