3年高考2年模拟1年原创精品系列
专题24 新题型——短文改错（新课标、全国2卷、四川、重庆）
【2017年高考命题预测】
短文改错一直是高考的重点题型之一。因为英语和汉语分属于不同的语系，差别较大，所以出现差错也就在所难免。短文改错旨在检测考生通过语篇发现、判断、纠正语言错误的能力，考查学生综合运用英语知识的准确性。它要求考生具备扎实的英语语言功力和相当高的综合运用能力，包括词汇、语法、惯用法、篇章结构、行文逻辑等各方面。
该题考查的重点在于动词的时态、语态、非谓语动词、动词词义辨析，兼顾名词、介词、代词、冠词、形容词、副词、连词，还涉及句型结构、行文逻辑和固定搭配等方面的错误。
短文改错的难度近几年一直保持不变。就短文改错而言，考试大纲中是这么说的“重点检测考生对书面语篇的校验能力”。所以，文中所出现的错误仍属基础知识和基本技能范围。
2017考纲解读和近几年考点分布短文改错高考英语试题中,短文改错题是众多考生得分较低的一项.短文改错不仅要求学生要有较高的阅读理解能力,还要求学生有深厚的语法知识,善于分析英语基本句型和句子结构.它主要是考查学生辨析并改正语言知识在运用时常出现的各种错误的能力。
从近几年高考命题短文改错考查的知识点来看,短文改错主要考查:考生运用基本语法知识识别短文中不合乎内容逻辑的错误和语法结构上的各种错误,综合使用英语各项基础知识进行快速阅读理解,掌握短文的内容和内容上的前后逻辑关系,进行相应的纠错.因此短文改错与完形填空.阅读理解一样注重强调整体理解,从宏观上把握。
从2009年起采用新型，新短文改错题不再以行为单位而是要求考生在整篇文章中改错所以答题难度无疑增加了。《全国普通高等学校入学考试说明（英语)》把短文改错列为写作部分的第一节作为测试考生对语言知识和书面表达能力的一个部分,题目要求如下：第一节：共10分。本题给出一篇约100个单词的短文，文中有10处错误要求考生对每个句子进行判断如有错将其改正错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等，从这一点我们可以看出该题型的变化和难度有所增加。【考点pk】
名师考点透析
高考短文改错的错误类型概括起来主要是语法错误、逻辑错误和搭配等方面的错误。
Ⅰ.语法错误
包括动词、名词、代词、主谓一致、非谓语动词及情态动词等方面的错误。
1.名词:名词错误主要考查名词单复数错误，可数与不可数名词的混用。确定名词单复数有以下几种方法:看修饰语；看主谓语的一致性；可数名词前无单数修饰语一定要用复数；看其他限制。
2.动词:时态和语态，常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时，中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象；或是及物动词后无宾语，或是不及物动词后加了宾语；需要接 ing形式的接了to，或相反等。对于这一类错误可根据上下文语境或者句子的平行结构确定动词时态。
3.形容词、副词:常在需要形容词的地方用了副词或相反；关系副词where,when,why等的缺失或错用。根据形容词、副词的基本用法或句意确定错误。
4.介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失，错用。
5.主谓一致:主语为单数，动词用了复数；而主语为复数，动词却用了单数形式。再就是就近原则对主语的影响。
6.冠词:主要考查表示特指和泛指时冠词的使用情况。定冠词the的多余或缺失，如季节、月份、星期、球类及三餐活动、称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the，或是same等常和the一起使用的词却漏掉了the；a,an的混用等。
7.数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用，如分数的分子大于一时分母没有用复数等，基数词的复数形式如几百hundreds of，几千thousands of漏掉了s，或是当其前有具体数字或several时加了复数，如seven hundred，写作seven hundreds。
8.连词:不符合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so)，或相反等等。
9.代词:主要是代词的性、格与数的错用。这类题应根据句意或句型结构确定错误。
II.逻辑错误
主要出现在肯定与否定以及表示递进、转折、因果等关系的关联词上。判断这类错误，要从上下文、惯用法、主从复合句的句意来找到错误。若为并列句，要从上下文来判断句与句之间的关系是并列、转折、选择、递进还是其他关系，从而选择恰当的连词。 若为复合句，应首先判断属于哪一种从句，然后根据主、从句之间的逻辑关系判断连接词的使用正确与否。
III.固定搭配错误
主要有习惯用语和固定搭配中的介词、冠词、连词、副词等的错误。做这类题首先要弄清习惯用语和固定搭配的正确形式和确切含义，判断是否有多用、漏用和错用介词、 副词、冠词等现象。
三、短文改错的应试要点
1.粗看全文，不要一上来就改动;
2.一行看三行，就某一行做判断时，要顾及上下两行或整句;
3.一行想全文，单句中合理还不够，要全文合理;
.别忘了在错词下画线;
.多词处要在原文中划掉此词，在抄完此词后也用斜线划掉;
.弄清句子结构有利于判断;
.如感觉一行有两处错，应将最有把握处改正;
.复核，做完题重看全文。
【三年高考】1高考试题及其解析
201年高考试题
1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
【归纳总结】在英语中though、although、while或者as等引导的让步状语从句不和but连用；连词because不和so连用；此外，return不和back连用。
2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
4.【2016·四川】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.
【2016·浙江】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
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2015年高考试题
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（
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注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
2.【2015·四川】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ʌ），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
每句不超过两个错误；
每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
3.只允许修改10出，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the
problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and
after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays
now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time?wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
3.【2015·浙江】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如：
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My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
4.【2015·新课标全国II】
短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,?How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ? Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
5.【2015·新课标全国I】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .
2017年高考试题 短文改错增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
【2017·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。’t need to do so many homework.Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day .
My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends .
【2017·陕西卷】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（
），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
【2017·辽宁卷】文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(试题内容如下)
Dear Jeremy and Alice，
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle
something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to
understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking
have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to
bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5
o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a
good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
【2017·全国新课标I】短文改错（10分）
Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted
Some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we
had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are
growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste. There are so much
that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow
in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack
problems. We are growing wonderfully
tomatoes at no cost!
2017年高考试题
2017·新课标I 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing
old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me
now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard
that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself
apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even
scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
2017·新课标II短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
【2017·辽宁卷】
Mr. Johnson is a hard working teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his
work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night.Hard
work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.”
That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid a visit to Mr. Johnson. I was
Eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly
I stepped into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the pictures we had
Taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
【2017·陕西卷】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my
grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
【2017·四川卷】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均公限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her
copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was
angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would
need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she
punish me?
【2017浙江卷】
短文改错（共10小题， 每小题1分， 满分10分）
下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Diary，
Here I am in the middle of a city，350miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,”He was lucky to find other one ”. His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world . To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep.
Good night and remember, you , dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
【两年模拟】201、201名校模拟题及其答案解析
201
1.【浙江省宁波市效实中学等十校2016届高三3月联考】Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43.3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What was worse, 82.8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, whom care for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practical advice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.
In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.
2.【河南省重点中学协作体2016届高三第二次适应性考试】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In our life, we often regret what we did and which we couldn’t do. Actually, it doesn’t benefit us at all. As for most of us, we missed many chance to earn more money, to get a high position and to realize our dreams. We often regret that we don’t seize those opportunities, thus feel upset. Although we do know regretting the Past is no benefit, but we still can’t help doing it
To avoid the problem below, we need to pay more attention to what you are doing now, making us busier and having no time to recall the past. Moreover, we’d better set reasonably goals one by one. Only by doing so can we struggle for our future better.
3.【江西师大附中、鹰潭一中2016届高三下学期第一次联考】短文改错 (共10小题； 每小题1分， 满分10 分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改: 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the balloon in 1784. High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipments into the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England were very surprised see this when the balloon landed in front of them.
4.【河南省焦作市2016届高三第一次模拟】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was extreme cold last Monday morning. While I was walking in my way to school, I noticed two street cleaner sweeping the street. Seeing them are working so hard on such a cold morning, I was moved and made up my mind do something for them. After arriving at school, I discussed with some classmates that we could do. The next day, we got up early and preparing porridge at home. When we handed the cleaners the hot porridge and expressed us appreciation for their hard work, they looked a little surprising at first. And then they took the porridge and thanked us happily. Since it was very cold, we all felt warm at that moment.
5.【广东省深圳市2016年高三第二次调研】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last month, I was told we would have our first military training. At first, I thought it will be hard to spend a whole week stayed away from school and home. The sunshine would be very strongly during these days, or we could easily get sunburnt. Later, when I was in the camp, I found it was a lot fun. The training was hard for you all. But my classmates and I were treated very kindly by all the soldier. The food in the camp look simple, but tasted good. Now you never know how happy days we had in the camp. I think the experience has been made us stronger!
6.【湖南省师大附中、长沙一中、长郡中学、雅礼中学2016届高三四校联考】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改！存错词下划一横线，并存该词下而写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A large number of students from all over the country studies in our beautiful new
school. There has a big library in our school. We can take out all the different kind of
books we like to read. I often borrowed novels from a library. There is also a beautiful
garden in their school.
I like to do most is enjoy the great view of it.
Many kinds of
flowers of different colors bloom in it, so lots of butterflies come or fly around them.
Our classroom is next to in the garden. Have classes in such a beautiful environment,
we feel very happy.
7.【】
A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because a poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions what laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.
8. 【】I always have a dream to be a fluency speaker. Therefore, I am too shy to say a word in public. What is just beyond my wildest imagination is fortune should bless me with a chance to realize my dream. One day, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and told us that I was given an opportunity to participate in an English speaking competition. Hear this, I could hardly hide my excitement. When making preparation for the competition, I write my speech heart and soul. After I finished the composition, I discussed it with my teacher and got many advice on how to improve it. Under the help of my English teacher, I made a great progress.
9.【】
Dear Mandy，
I'm not doing well in my lessons
at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true. I work really hard，often study late into the night! I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study
very hard，and he always gets excellent grades. It's not fair!
The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year. When I told my dad，all he said was，“ You mustn’ time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons! ”
I'm feeling quite puzzling as to what to do now. Would you please help me out?
Thanks a lot!
Yours sincerely， Lisa
【】
Dear John,
I am very sorry to tell you that I unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is
very kind for you to invite me to your house. I really look forward to go to your
party and sharing your happy experiences abroad. Much to my regret l would be
absent from your party because the final exam is just in the corner. What's
worst, I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not me. Anyway, we will
have much more chances to get together. I am true sorry. I hope you will forgive
me but accept my sincere apology.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours．
Li Hua
10.【黑龙江省哈尔滨师大附中、东北师大附中、辽宁省实验中学2016届三高第一次三校联合模拟】I was working as a short-order cook at two restaurants in the same neighborhood. At an Saturday night, I was finishing the dinner shirt at a first restaurant and hurrying to work at the second place, but I was delayed. Because one table kept sent back an order of pancakes, insisting they were too colder. I replaced it several times, and still the customers were dissatisfied.
As soon as I was able to leave, I race out of the restaurant. Hardly I arrived at my second job when a server immediately handed me my first order. “Make sure of that these pancakes are hot,” she said, “because the customers just left a restaurant down the street where kept serving them cold ones.”
11.【山东省实验中学2016届高三上学期第三次诊断】短文改错（共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Thomas,
I feel sorry to know your worries about getting fatter and fatter so that you have failed
the sports test. Nothing can be more disappointment than that.
As far as I am concerned, there are many reasons cause your failure in a test. Firstly, you are very lazy to have regular sports. In fact, sports can help you keep fit and energy. Secondly, you eat too much meat, that makes you gain weight easily. Finally, you sleep more than you need. There was no denying that it is all these things that have caused your problem and your worries.
As I stated above, you should first eat less meat but more fruits and vegetable. And then you should have regular sports so that you can burn the fat that builds up in your body and to become slim.
Hope my advice is some help to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
12.【湖北省武汉市武昌区2016届高三元月调研】
Dear Ms. Helen,
I am pleasing to offer you the position of after-sales manager in our company starting on 16 June, 2016. You were given the right to discuss this offer and to seek advices on the attached proposed agreement with your family, a lawyer, or someone else you trust. Unless you want some information on your employment rights, you can also contact the Employment Service Office or visiting our website.
Also, if you disagree this offer or wish to clarify something in it, please ring myself to discuss any issue you wish to raise.
If you are happy with the proposed terms and wish to accept an offer of employment, please sign this letter and return it to me by 1 June, 2016. In case of I have not heard from you by that date, this offer will be automatical withdrawn. Li Hua
13.【广东省惠州市2016届高三上学期第三次调研】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My family was very poor when I was a child. My parents lost their jobs or lived with heavy pressure. As a result, I wanted to study hardly so as to have different future. During my high school life, I spent all my time studied those difficult subjects, which made me one of the best student in our school. After graduation, I was admitted in a key university where I meet a lot of interesting friends. Now, I am working in a big company and I am able to afford anything I wanted. What’s more, my parents also have been found new jobs. So I believe that our dream will came true if we try our best.
14.【四川省资阳市2016届高三上学期第二次诊断】请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One Monday afternoon, we were playing the basketball on the playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. Under the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best friend put me on his back and head for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my right ankle got hurt but I had to be sent to hospital.He did not leave until ambulance arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my
greatly relief, he brought textbooks with them and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure to have such a devoting friend.
15.【浙江省杭州市五校联盟2016届高三年级上学期第一次诊断】下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I went to the supermarket, buying a toy and went to see my nephew , a 8-year-old boy named Jack. She was playing with some of his friend in the yard when I arrived there. The moment he found that I came to see him with his most favorite toy, Jack jumped with joy. Every boy and girl present wanted very much to have a look the toy. However, Jack doesn’t want his friends to see it. He was about to hide the toy then I stopped him. “Let your friends to play with your toy as well, Jack — you must learn to share.” I said. Realized that he was wrong, Jack played with the toy together with his friends.
16.【安徽省“皖南八校”2016届高三第二次联考】Good morning, everyone!
I'd like to share a quote with you, which go like this: “Time is said to be money, but it is
more-it is life.” It is true that time is great value. After all, anything is more precious than
time. In our daily life, we've often been told that lose time will never return. To be honest, I
am used to spend plenty of time playing computer games, what made me fall far behind my
classmates. Have realized how much time l wasted, I've made up my minds to work hard to
catch up with them. Wasting time is just like wasting part of our lives. Such valuable is time
that if you want your dreams to come true, you should make the more of it.
17.【河南省郑州市2016年高三上学期第一次质量预测】 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank.
But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before a big audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!
18.【吉林省吉林大学附属中学2016届高三上学期第四次摸底】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn how to stop wasted water. One
of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing them. Today in the most large cities, fresh water
is used only once and then it runs in a waste system. But it is possibly to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, when the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can be reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.
19. 【河南省商丘市2015届高三第二次模拟考试】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每句错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many years before I failed the entrance exam and had to go to a ordinary college. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently to me. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere of classroom. Later, I decided to treasure for my college time. I worked hard but got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.
20.【山东省德州市2016届高三上学期期末统考】Dear Barbara，
How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have admitted to Berkely school in California．More than 3000 students took exams for it，but only a few was chosen and I was one of them．Therefore，my parents are not happy about it．They are strong against me going there．They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel homesick．They can’t imagine so young a girl like me live alone．They advise me to choose a university near my home instead．Then I would be able to continue living with them．How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up?
Yours Faithfully
Jane Blair
【答案】
短文改错 （ 共10小题 每小题 1分， 满分10分）
请你对下文内容进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is Zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.
Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
2.【陕西省西工大附中2015届高三下学期模拟考试（一）】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
每处错误及修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because the financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very serious. Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western area of China. I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not as fierce there, but graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west may be bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal development and for our country at present.
3.【全国百强校】山东省枣庄第八中学南校2015届高三11月月考】短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down．So he decided to make a best car himself, and in 1904 he produced his first new model．Charles Rolls, a car maker, was very interested in Royce' s car, but soon Rolls and Royce go into business together．One of their first model was the Silver Ghost．In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down once．After the drive, it was cost just over ￡2 to put the car back into perfectly condition．This is not surprising that the Silver Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”．
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改l0处，从第11处起不计分。
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next．trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same in terest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate．and you can also talk about your hobbies as well．Unless anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence．you can make as many friends as possibly．
短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I’m Senior Three student. I often stay up lately doing my homework. Above my desk scores of books pile in front of me. Unfinished papers and solved problems are always there, seeming to have no ending. Time are never long enough for a student of Senior Three. How I do every day is to listen to the teacher’s lectures, taking notes and do my homework, which it seems to be endless. I hope our teachers will help us getting more knowledges with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have more spare time to enjoy our lives.
6.【黑龙江省哈尔滨市第三中学2015届高三第四次模拟】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? I’m going to talk with something about students’ watching TV. As we knew, TV plays important part in our daily life. It’s quick and more convenient to get information from TV than from newspapers. Providing us with lively and interesting moving pictures, TV enables us not only to see that is happening in the world but to learn many things, included foreign languages. So it was not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV. But watching TV too long is not good. Sitting in front of TV all day does harm for our eyes and wastes our times.
So we should take a correct attitude students’ watching TV.
Thank you for your listening.
7.【2015·东北三校第一次联考】
Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch.As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a
wheel chair roll himself over to a table.No one and me seemed to notice him.I got up and go over to his table and
asked if that I could get him something to drink.He smiled and said, “Thank you.You are generously.I’d like any
orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye.He
thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out.I gave him a hug and told
him he had made my day, either.
【Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch.As I was waiting ∧my order to come, I
for
noticed the old man in a
an
wheel chair roll himself over to a table.No one and me seemed to notice him.I got up and go over
but/except
went
to his table and
asked if that I could get him something to drink.He smiled and said, “Thank you.You are generously.I’d like any
generous
some
orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying
say
goodbye.He
thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out.I gave him a
day
hug and told
him he had made my day, either.
too
8.【浙江省重点中学协作体2015届高三第二次适应性测试】
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.I have been looking forward at
relaxing myself.I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie.I think I can play
the basketball with my classmates.How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!
However, my parents think different.They don’t want me go out.They are afraid I’ll be knocked
down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way.I
hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage.To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.
【答案】
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.I have been looking forward at
makes
to
relaxing myself.I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie.I think I can play
movies
the basketball with my classmates.How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!
What
However, my parents think different.They don’t want me/ go out.They are afraid I’ll be knocked
Differently
to
down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way.I
Fall
Besides
hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage.To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.
kept
9.【山东省潍坊市重点中学2015届高三12月阶段性教学质量检测.
Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.Thirty minutes past, but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
【答案】
Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited∧ a bus to come at a stop.Thirty
for
minutes past, but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner
pasted
foot
had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught
than
it.If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize
the
another
did
my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now
possibly
whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
losing
10.【山东省实验中学第三次诊断考试】
Dear schoolmates，
In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest．A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 st．Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student．The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．
Students’ Union
【答案Dear schoolmates，
In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our
attach
awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly
interesting
knowledge contest．A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 st．Remember, you can
take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school
which
student．The answer sheet must ∧cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the
deadline．
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in
them on time．
Students’ Union
11.【山西省大同一中、同煤一中2015届高三联考】
This morning , I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.
I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough.The woman standing next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil.For that very moment, a girl was walking by.She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor.After a while ,there were blood pour down her face.I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay.The doctor examined her wound carefully.To my relief, it was not serious.The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound.
【答案】
This morning , I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.
went
I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough.The woman standing next to me
when
was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil.For that very moment, a girl was
shocked
At
walking by.She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor.After a
broken
while ,there were blood pour down her face.I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest
was
pouring
hospital without the delay.The doctor examined her wound carefully.To my relief, it was not
serious.The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed ∧wound.
after
the/her
【解析
1.go-went；第一句I go to the store near my home，本文描述的是过去的事情，应用过去时，故将go-went
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney
last summer vacation.You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take
us to do a lot of sightseeing.It’s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and
delicious food gave me a better impression.I have a great time here and learned a lot about
Sydney.Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China.I’ll act like a guide
to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney
last summer vacation.You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take
kind
us to do a lot of sightseeing.It’s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and
me
whose
delicious food gave me a better impression.I have a great time here and learned a lot about
good
had
there
Sydney.Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you ∧visit China.I’ll act like a
to
as
guide
to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.
interest
Yours,
Li Hua
13.【四川省宜宾市2015届高三第一次诊】
Having a dream is of great importance.Your dreams are ordinary and realistic.I hope I will
admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university.I
hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer.I hope those whom love me and those whom I love
will be healthy and live happy every day.To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build
up my body.I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study.I must work hard at my
lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.
【答案】
Having a dream is of great importance.Your dreams are ordinary and realistic.I hope I will ∧
My
be
admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university.I
hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer.I hope those whom love me and those whom I love
hope
who/that
will be healthy and live happy every day.To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build
happily
exercise
up my body.I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study.I must work hard at my
on
lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.
and
prepared
14.【辽宁省锦州市2015届高三上学期期末考试英语】
Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day.Last Saturday,as usual, she went to several class.In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively.On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break.Soon they came up a good idea.We decided to go cycling in the countryside.Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air.On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.
【答案】
Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day.Last Saturday,as
devotes
usual, she went to several class.In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She
classes
deep
was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively.On the Sunday morning, she was about
so
to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break.Soon they came up∧ a
when
with
good idea.We decided to go cycling in the countryside.Mary enjoyed herself, competing and
They
chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air.On Monday, Mary was energetic but
relaxed
and
active in class.
15.【2015·宁夏回族自治区银川一中高三第一次模拟】
With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.
However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.
As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.
【答案】
With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us
conditions
think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s ∧convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation.
a
Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made
makes
relative businesses and industries develop faster.
However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment
off
around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack
many
lacking
parking lots is another big problem.
As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.
carefully
Even
them
16.【辽宁省丹东五校协作体2015届高三期末考试】
Dear Andy,
I’m glad to hear from you.You ask about my health in your last email.So I’m going to tell
you about diet.I’m a very health person.That’s why we live near the sea and we often have fish.I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables.And of course there will also be some rices.If you come to visit me in China on one day, you won’t eat many sweets.So I hope you don’t have sweet tooth.
I’m going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them
to you.I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.
【答案】
Dear Andy,
I’m glad to hear from you.You ask about my health in your last email.So I’m going to tell
asked
you about ∧diet.I’m a very health person.That’s why we live near the sea and we often have
my
healthy
because
fish.
I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and
But
probably
vegetables.And of course there will also be some rices.If you come to visit me in China on one
rice
day, you won’t eat many sweets.So I hope you don’t have∧ sweet tooth.
a
I’m going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them
of
to you.I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.
17.【2015·黑龙江省绥化市重点中学高三下学期联考】
Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often looked into our school bags or read our diary. I fully understand that why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. You have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around—they are bound to read it.
【答案】
Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often looked into our school bags or read our diary. I fully
look
diaries
understand that why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking
sad
our bags or diaries ∧make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. You have probably heard some horrible stories
to
They
about other kids and thought we might do ∧same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all
the
but
wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think
much
you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around—they are bound to read it.
lying
18.【黑龙江省双鸭山市第一中学2015届高三上学期期末】
One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down.It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night.I decided to walk around a little after accepting that I’d have to spend the night in the car.Maybe I can find a telephone.Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully.He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.
One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down.It was
complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night.I decided
completely
on
to walk around a little after accepting that I’d have to spend the night in the car.Maybe I can
before
could
find a telephone.Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing
a
in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.I knocked∧ the door and was delighted when a
shining
at/on
pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully.He said he had no
and
telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go
there
to repair my car.
【一年原创】
原创试题及其解析短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’d like tell you something about my voluntary work in the city library.
I got to the library earlier every day. When new books arrived, I helped the librarians move it in, and put them onto different catalogues. After that, each of the books were numbered and put in the right place on the bookshelf.
Although it was hard work and sometimes boring, I had learned a lot. For an example, I have got the idea of how the whole library runs but how to find out the books I need in the shortest time. However, by offering this service in the library, I have made some new friends, that is a very valuable experience for me.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。During this summer vacation, Li Lei went to teach in a small but less-developed village with others volunteers .When he arrived, he found the people here lived a tough life and all the children were crowded in a poorly-furnished room. Greatly to his delight, the children are lovely and friendly. Though he only had something simply to eat, he adapted himself to the hard life soon. During breaks, he often played games with his students. At night, he was busy with preparing lessons or checking his student’s homework. Realized the importance of education, he has made up his mind to become a teacher after he graduate from the university.
答案：
During this summer vacation, Li Lei went to teach in a small but less-developed village with
and
others volunteers .When he arrived, he found the people here lived a tough life and ∧all the
other
there
that
children were crowded in a poorly-furnished room. Greatly to his delight, the children are
were
lovely and friendly. Though he only had something simply to eat, he adapted himself to the hard
simple
life soon. During breaks, he often played games with his students. At night, he was busy with
preparing lessons or checking his student’s homework. Realized the importance of education ,
students’
Realizing
he has made up his mind to become a teacher after he graduate from the university.
graduates
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
I’m writing to you to expressing my sincere appreciation for all the help you had offered to me these years. Your friendship means a lot to me, but your timely help touches me a lot. I always feel lucky to have a friend as you.
I also want to express my sincere sorrow and regret for possible misunderstanding and hurt I gave you them before. I remember once I didn’t attend your birthday party, that made you very unhappy. Actually I had big quarrel with my parents and I was really in low spirit then. I hope you could forgive me.
Good luck and best wishes for you! I hope you can be happier every day and successful in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Wang Lin is a child who has grown up in the SOS Children’s Village. It was in 1992 he was sent there.At that time she was only four years old. Fortunately, he met many kind and warm-hearted worker. They took good care of him and he lived a happily life. Two years ago, he was admitted to an university. Upon heard the news, all the people in the village feel very glad. ＂He is an intelligent but hard-working boy. He set a good example for the children here, and we are all proud for him,＂ one worker said. Wang Lin loves the village and the people there, so he is often returns to see them whenever he is free.
答案：
Wang Lin is a child who has grown up in the SOS Children’s Village. It was in 1992 ∧ he was sent
that
there. At that time she was only four years old. Fortunately, he met many kind and warm-hearted worker. They
he
workers
took good care of him and he lived a happily life. Two years ago, he was admitted to an university. Upon heard
happy
a
hearing
the news, all the people in the village feel very glad. ＂＂the people there, so he is often returns to see them whenever he is free.
5.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Aunt,
I’m very glad to receive you letter.
Great changes have already been taken place after your departure. Our life is getting better and better. Villagers had moved into big and comfortable houses. But almost all houses have been equipped with telephones. They have bought not only colored TV sets, but also fridges, and so on. Widely roads have been built to connect villages and towns. Some family have got their own trucks and even cars. However, children can now enjoy a very good education.
I hope that you and Uncle Li will come back and have visit to the new village.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In recent years, ads are playing important part in our daily life.No matter where we go, you can find them. Some ads told us about new products, and some ads deal with widespread social concerns, such as, “Yes to life, no to drugs” and “Knowledge change life.” All of these ads are of greatly help to us, and we can learn a lot by follow the advice they give us. Unfortunately, some ads are not true, they either spread false information or cheat consumer in one way or another. However, in spite of the fact that ads can help with us, we should also watch out for them from time to time.
答案：
In recent years, ads are playing ∧important part in our daily life.No matter where we go, you
an
we
can find them. Some ads told us about new products, and some ads deal with widespread
tell
social concerns, such as, “Yes to life, no to drugs” and “Knowledge change life.” All of these
changes
ads are of greatly help to us, and we can learn a lot by follow the advice they give us.
great
following
Unfortunately, some ads are not true, they either spread false information or cheat consumer in
which
consumers
one way or another. However, in spite of the fact that ads can help with us, we should also watch out
Therefore
for them from time to time .
7.短文改错
Last term while I got the message that two of my classmates will not attend our final discussion, I cried. Undoubtedly, I am an extreme anxious person. I feel nervous if anything on my schedule is not going to carried out. My personality has always bothered me a lot. One thing I would like to changing about myself is my character. I attended the speech a couple of week ago. The lecturer said a sentence that left an impression on me. “I feel strongly which I can make it.” From then on, I have regarded it for my motto. I encourage myself to become a positive person who will not to be beaten by difficult situations.
8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday I happened to meet a young America student in the Palace Museum. This was the first time that I has met a foreigner, so I went up and greeted him with English.He told me that he was a college student travel in China and he liked China very much. I volunteered to show him around the museum.He was deep impressed with the Chinese buildings and busy with taking photos all the time. He said never before had he seen so beautiful buildings. After that, we went boating on a lake but had a good time. I was very glad to have such a good chance to practice my speaking English.
答案
Yesterday I happened to meet a young America student in the Palace Museum. This was the first
American
time that I has met a foreigner, so I went up and greeted him with English. He told me that he
had
in
was a college student travel in China and ∧he liked China very much. I volunteered to show
traveling/travelling
that
him around the museum.He was deep impressed with the Chinese buildings and busy with taking
deeply
photos all the time. He said never before had he seen so beautiful buildings. After that, we went
such
boating on a lake but had a good time. I was very glad to have such a good chance to practice
and
my speaking English.
spoken
9.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one between middle school students．Maybe the following
advices can help you．First
all, believe in you．Your greatest problem is that you
lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do is smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile show that you are friendly to ．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided make the best of it. I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, and which greatly increased my confidence and got him motivated.
My experience tell me that it is not what you are given but how you make use for it that determines who you are.
11. 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
第一节
短文改错：
seriously today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution.And when trees cut down,some animals disappear.There was more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been greatly affecting by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a more better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.
Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish somewhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, which saves money and reduces pollution.Use things so long as possible.Don’t use plastic bags.Too,we must plant more trees and stop people cut them. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful .
12. 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下而写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（人第11处起）不计分。
Dear John,
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very
kind for you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to going to your party and share
your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to
the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around corner, for which I am now really busy preparing.
What’s more, I have caught a bad cold lately and I was really not myself.
Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam?
I am true sorry. I hope you will forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I look forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
13. 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is universally known that opportunity is important, and you could not seize one without being equipped with competitive forces,
which you could approach success.
One year ago, I studied in the high school and whenever I failed an exam, I felt frustrated and thought it was a bad luck which contributed to my failure. At that time, when my father asked me whether
I prepared for the exam and mastered the basic knowledge or not, I felt ashaming and couldn’t say a single word. From then on, I grasped every chance to learn how to make good use of my study resource. With the improving on basic reading and calculating skills, I succeeded the College Entrance Exam.
Only then did I realize how important it was to make a fully preparation.
14. 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下而写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（人第11处起）不计分。
China ha launched a national campaign "Eat up All on the Plates" for the leftovers in restaurant across the country are almost enough feed 200 million people annually, according to reports.
It is a tradition for most people in China to entertain their quests with more than enough food, believe that they have not satisfied their guests if there's no food left on table, where they think is a good way to show their hospitality. They think we will be looked down upon if they don't do that.
The "Eat Up All on the Plates" campaign is intended to reduce the waste and rise people's awareness. As middle school students, we should do our bit to say "No" to food waste, and try to develop the habit of never ordering and cooking more than what we need so as to save our limited food resources, with which we depend for a better life.
15. 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意；1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied on busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replace by other subjects.
Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our aware of cooperation and spirit of competition. However, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it is replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports beside dull field and track practice or ball games, which everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping and ball games appealing.
I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasures in it.
17. 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：l.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第1l处起）不计分。
People are so busy these days that they hardly have a time to prepare a meal at home. Thus, a nearby restaurant usually become their dining place. Therefore, home-cooked meals are better for many reasons.
First, home-cooked me per fresh food at the supermarket than in a restaurant. Second, you can buy exact the food what you like. Restaurants sometimes serve meals for vegetables that are not wanted. Finally, home is a more pleasant place to eat. Family members can learn much about other quietly at home than in a busy restaurant.
In the word, eating at home is better than eat out.
18. 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。At the very beginning of this term, I did poorly in my English so I didn’t give up because I was always encouraged both the people around me and myself. I kept practice speaking, listening, reading and writing. When I was bored, I usually amused me by reading some interesting English story and jokes or seeing English films. What’s more, playing word games and singing English songs was also great ways, what at the same time were helpful in my remembering words and pronunciation. By these means, I always made myself cheer and optimistic, being full of great enthusiasm for English study. Gradually, I make progress in my English.