浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（16）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1）第一节：短文改错 （共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot．I was in great

　　pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if

　　happened until the class was over．

　　Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even

　　refused the offer of help from my classmates．As the result, the hurt on my foot became

　　worse．Now I know I am wrong．We can tell others our need for help and accept their

　　help．Someday we can help him in return．n this way we fit in with each other

　　happily and peacefully．50个学生健康问题的调查表。请根据表格（table）内容，综述学

　　生当前存在的健康问题，并就中学生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建议。

　　问题类型 学习焦虑 逆反心理 缺乏交往 睡眠不足 缺乏锻炼 视力不佳

　　人

　　数 35 20 15 40 25 35

　　比

　　例 70% 40% 30% 80% 50% 70%

　　要求：字数100-120

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　　温馨提示：写作时，先把中文要点（信息）写成英文词组，然后把词组扩成句子，再把句子串

　　成篇章。全文分两段表达。

　　改错（10分）

　　while 改为when； hurted 改为 hurt；something 改为 nothing；

　　walk 改为walking；I still 前面去掉but； As the result 改为As a result；

　　on my foot 改为 in my foot；

　　I am wrong 改为

　　I was wrong；

　　help him in return 改为help them in return；

　　Only in this way 后面加上can / will / shall

　　书面表达（30分）

　　As is apparently shown in the table above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep．Coming next is the lack of physical exercise．40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers．Still fewer claimed not to have enough communication with others．

　　So far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies．Just as a saying goes: “All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body one cannot achieve anything; however, too much attention has been paid only to studies．Therefore, I

　　we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems．Only in this way can we lead a healthy life．