浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1）第一节： 短文改错（共10处，每处1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many years before , I stepped into a bookstore for some books I wanted them . While I was there I saw a young boy of about 12 came into the store . The boy wanted to buy a geography book . Geography books costs one dollar each , but he had only 62 cent. I decided to follow him to see that he could succeed . Four stores we entered , and four times he disappointed .Luckily , at the fifth store he got an used book for 50 cents . Having learned why he wanted the book, and the bookseller gave him some written paper and a new pencil as a gift .
第二节：写作（满分30分）
假设你叫王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。
要点： 1、简要表述李华在你心目中的形象；
2、用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述；
3、对李华表示美好的祝愿。
注意:
1、内容积极向上，语义连贯，结构完整。词数120左右。
2、不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇: recall
回忆
considerate 体贴的
Dear Li Hua,
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Yours
Wang Ping
Many years before , I stepped into a bookstore for some books I wanted them . While I was there I saw a young boy of about 12 came into the store . The boy wanted to buy a geography book . Geography books costs one dollar each , but he had only 62 cent. I decided to follow him to see that he could succeed . Four stores we entered , and four times he disappointed .Luckily , at the fifth store he got an used book for 50 cents . Having learned why he wanted the book, and the bookseller gave him some written paper and a new pencil as a gift .
76. before→ago
77. 去掉them
78. came →come 79. costs →cost
80. cent→cents
81. that →how / whether/if
82. he 后加was
83. an →a
84.去掉and
85. written→writing
One possible version:
Dear Li Hua,
It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spent together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need.
Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.
I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe!
Yours,
Wang Ping