浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1）10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分
Upon our arrival, we gave a warm welcome to the American students, among them a boy named Tim was to stay with my family for the weekend. I recognized Tim compared him with photo he had sent to me. Tim greeted me and expressed that how excited he felt. When school was over, we took the subway home. My parents prepared a rich family dinner that night and we had enjoyed ourselves so much, eating and chatting. The next day, I act as a guide, showing Tim along the most famous scenic spots in Beijing. Wherever he went, he had some photos take to help him memorize this unforgettable trip to China. The time to say goodbye came when we realized it, I gave Tim a kite as a souvenir.
第二节、书面表达（满分30分）
假如你是宁波市慈湖中学学生李越，你被学校挑选为接待德国学生的我校学生之一，德国学生Jack将于下月来我校访问，将入住你家。请你发一份电子邮件与Jack取得联系。邮件要点如下：
1. 自我介绍（含家庭情况）；
2. 简要介绍我校的情况（如：我校历史、学校规模、风景优美、师生关系融洽、教师教学认真负责、目前学校在大修等）；
3. 期待他的到来。
注意：1. 邮件的抬头、落款已给出（不计词数）；2. 可适当增加细节；3. 100-120词左右。
Dear Jack,
........................................................................................................
Yours faithfully
Li Yue
短文改错(每小题1分)
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