短文改错系列11
1．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：⒈ 原行没有错的不要改；
⒉ 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving.
Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live
without water and neither agriculture or industry can go
without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.
Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water.
To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all
out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no
drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find
ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath
water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
【小题1】opinion前加my
【小题2】animal---animals
【小题3】or—nor
【小题4】seemed—seems
【小题5】we—they
【小题6】a-- the/this/that
【小题7】though-- because/since/as
【小题8】正确
【小题9】using—used
【小题10】去掉for
【解析】
【小题1】根据句意前后的代词指代要一致，前文主语是I，所以后半句表达的意见就应该是我的意见。
【考点定位】考查缺词的填补。
【小题2】我们还有动物们没有水就无法活。根据句意用复数形式。
【考点定位】考查名词的单复数错误。
【小题3】根据前文的neither可知将or改为nor。
【考点定位】考查固定句型neither . . . nor . . .的用法。
【小题4】文章整体讲得是节约用水方面的话题，通篇用得是一般现在时。所以将seemed改为seems。
【考点定位】考查时态错误。
【小题5】根据文意：这里的许多国家指的是外国，不是我们，所以用they。
【考点定位】考查代词指代一致。
【小题6】本句的问题指的是上文提到的问题，所以表特指用the/this/that。
【考点定位】考查冠词及特指的用法。
【小题7】根据文意：我们应该植树因为树帮助节水。
【考点定位】考查状语从句的连接词。
【小题8】经检查本行没有错误。
【考点定位】考查正确行。
【小题9】这里指“清洗用过的水”。所以用过去分词。
【考点定位】考查分词的用法。
【小题10】此处for找不到其相应的充分，故删去。
【考点定位】考查多词错误。
2．下面短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I think that travelling is a good way to learning about the world. And I like very much. There are many kinds of transport to choose of when travelling. We may neither take a plane, a train, a bus, a car, a bike, a ship or even take a trip on feet. As for me, I prefer to ride a bike. There are a good many advantages of travelling by a bike. I suppose it is not only cheaply, but also help us take exercise. Compare with other forms of transport, riding a bike causes little pollution, and is better for the environment.
【答案】
【小题1】to改为 of 或把learning改为learn
【小题2】在like后加it
【小题3】把choose of改为choose from
【小题4】把neither改为either
【小题5】把feet改为foot
【小题6】by a bike去掉a
【小题7】把cheaply改为cheap
【小题8】help改为helps
【小题9】Compare改为Compared
【小题10】little改为less
【解析】
【小题1】way to do sth/ way of doing sth
【小题2】缺少宾语
【小题3】choose from从……中挑选出
【小题4】此处意为或者……或者……
【小题5】on foot 固定短语 步行
【小题6】by bike固定短语 骑车
【小题7】修饰名词要用形容词
【小题8】主语是it，要是第三人称单数形式
【小题9】作状语，被动
【小题10】根据compare可知，此处表对比
3．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（
），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I'd done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
【答案】
【小题1】cousin (改为cousin's)
(改为richer)
(改为in)
添加it)
(去掉to)
(改为face)
(改为Later)
(改为slowly
【小题9】knows (改为knew)
(改为never)
【小题1】后面的名词house.应该使用所有格。
【小题2】后面有than说明前面应该使用比较级。
【小题3】固定词组in particular尤其，特别；
【小题4】It指代前面的我特别喜欢的那个玩具
【小题5】固定词组enjoy doing sth
【小题6】face与enjoy形成并列关系。
【小题7】固定词组later on后来；
【小题8】修饰动词短语pull out用副词。
【小题9】整个文章是过去时；
【小题10】根据句意可知是否定。
4．下列文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加出加一个漏字（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In recently years，dust storms take place more and more often in the north of Chinese. They have brought a great deal of trouble to people’s lives．The strong wind blows up the dust，made the air very dirty. It also stops many of people from going out. In past, people raised a large number of sheep. The sheep eat up a great deal grass and the land became sandy. Now the government have begun to pay attention to the problem. Each year, a lot of money spent on the improvement of the environment．
【小题1】recently-recent
修饰名词应该使用形容词。
【小题2】Chinese-china
这里是名词中国。Chinese是形容词。
【小题3】lives-life
给人们的生活带来了很多麻烦。
【小题4】made-making
表示意料之中的结果使用现在分词。
【小题5】air前面加the
the表示特指。
【小题6】去掉of
many直接修饰people
【小题7】eat-ate
这两句讲述的是过去的情况。
【小题8】deal后面加of
grass是不可数名词，用a great deal of修饰。
【小题9】have-has
由句意可知政府已经开始注意到这个问题。
【小题10】money后面加is
本题是被动语态。
【解析】
【小题1】修饰名词应该使用形容词。
【小题2】这里是名词中国。Chinese是形容词。
【小题3】给人们的生活带来了很多麻烦。
【小题4】表示意料之中的结果使用现在分词。
【小题5】the表示特指。
【小题6】many直接修饰people
【小题7】这两句讲述的是过去的情况。
【小题8】grass是不可数名词，用a great deal of修饰。
【小题9】由句意可知政府已经开始注意到这个问题。
【小题10】本题是被动语态。
5．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
【答案】
【小题1】woman-women
【小题2】去掉the
【小题3】becomes- became
【小题4】of前面加a
【小题5】great-greatly
【小题6】intelligences- intelligence
【小题7】his-her
【小题8】Late- Later
【小题9】help-helping
【小题10】but-and
【解析】
【小题1】one of应该是复数名词。
【小题2】在某个月份不要定冠词。
【小题3】通篇文章使用过去时。
【小题4】根据上下文可知因为一种严重的疾病。
【小题5】修饰形容词worried，应该使用副词。
【小题6】不可数名词intelligence没有复数形式。
【小题7】Helen Keller是女性。
【小题8】副词later表示以后。
【小题9】to是介词，后面接动名词。
【小题10】上下文是顺接关系。
6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
D
I’m very thankful to you for invite me to stay with you in London in the coming vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in mine English learning. And I’m afraid I can’t go to your place in this summer. Because I have promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend the summer with her. She misses me too much that I find that difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy now preparing for several examinations. I plan to visit you in winter if it convenient to you.
Best wishes.
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m very thankful to you for invite me to stay with you in London in the coming
inviting（for 是介词）
vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in
dreaming（完成进行时）
mine English learning. And I’m afraid I can’t go to yo＼ur place in this summer. Because I
my（后面有N）
But(转折）
have promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend the summer with her.
who（定语从句）
She misses me too much that I find that difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy now
so（非常想念我）
it（形式宾语）
preparing for several examination. I plan to visit you in winter if it∧convenient to you.
examinations （可数名词）
is（缺少谓语）
Best wishes.
Li Ming
【解析】
7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday morning, it was already 7:30 that I got up. Thinking I would be late,
I got dressing quickly and left without breakfast. There were such many people
at the bus stop that it was hard to catch a bus. So I rush towards my school.
Suddenly, I ran across an old woman and she fell down. Without make an apology,
I left him and went on. Later, I heard the old woman was bad injured in the leg and
she was sent to hospital. I felt it very sorry. And the following day I paid her visit.
【答案】
Yesterday morning, it was already 7:30 that I got up. Thinking I would be late,
when（时间状语从句）
I got dressing quickly and left without breakfast. There were such many people
dressed （sb be dressed)
so (so修饰形容词）
at the bus stop that it was hard to catch a bus. So I rush towards my school.
rushed（通篇过去时）
Suddenly, I ran across an old woman and she fell down. Without make an apology,
into(run into偶遇）
making（without介词）
I left him and went on. Later, I heard the old woman was bad injured in the leg and
her（ 因为是an old woman)
badly(修饰injured 用副词）
she was sent to hospital. I felt it very sorry. And the following day I paid her∧visit.
feel +形容词
a(pay a visit固定搭配）
【解析】略
8．下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend/ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the
am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8pm in Friday evening.
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Hi, everyone. Glad to be here.
As you know, in China, we call people bear between 1980 and 1989 the post-80s. I am a young guy who belonged to such a group. For our generation, life is getting more difficulty than the former generations. The job market is tough but the house is kind of expensive to afford. Now plenty of girls would prefer to marry man with a house and a car on his own. I don’t think love built on houses and cars are true love. Thus, this is social reality that we have to face.
Though situations are tough today, many of us post-80s are making many effort to live a good life. Do you think we will make up life better and better in the future?
【答案】Hi, everyone. Glad to be here.
As you know, in China, we call people bear between 1980 and 1989 the post-80s. I am a young guy who
born （born出生，被动，过去）
belonged to such a group. For our generation, life is getting more difficulty than the former
belongs （全文现在时）
difficult（此处为形容词比较级形式）
generations. The job market is tough but the house is kind of expensive to afford. Now plenty of
and（并列关系）
girls would prefer to marry / man with a house and a car on his own. I don’t think love built
a（man可数名词）
of（of one's own属于某人）
on houses and cars are true love. Thus, this is social reality that we have to face.
Is（cars复数）
However（转折）
Though situations are tough today, many of us post-80s are making many effort to live a good
efforts（可数名词）
life. Do you think we will make up life better and better in the future
make life better 让生活更美好
【解析】略