2017届高考英语二轮复习热点限时训练：短文改错系列9

　　短文改错系列9

　　一、短文改错

　　1．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。 对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　of his room into a passage of the hotel and ask

　　the servant to bring her a glass of water. The servant

　　did as he asked. The Englishman returned to his

　　room, and a few minutes later he came into the passage again

　　and once more asked the servant a glass of water.

　　Every a few minutes the Englishman would come out

　　of his room and repeated his request. After half an hour

　　the astonishing servant decided to ask the man what

　　he was doing with the water. “Nothing,” he answered

　　calmly. “It’s simple that the room is on fire.”

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】lately改为late

　　ask 改为 asked

　　her改为 him

　　he 后加was

　　and改为 but

　　servant后加 for

　　去掉 a

　　repeated改为 repeat

　　astonishing改为 astonished

　　对

　　【小题1】late是晚的 lately是最近，近来

　　【小题2】根据came可知，是过去式

　　【小题3】根据上面的her 可知

　　【小题4】被动，他被要求的那样

　　【小题5】转折

　　【小题6】ask sb for sth 向某人要6

　　【小题7】few修饰可数名词，有every了，就不要冠词

　　【小题8】跟come并列

　　【小题9】astonished意为吃惊的 astonishing意为令人吃惊的

　　【小题10】对

　　短文改错

　　’t be ill very often. What’s more, I also get myself relaxing in different kinds of sports. Only in this way I do a better job in my study in high spirit. By doing physics exercise, I’m becoming stronger and confident than ever. I do not think that this is necessary for everyone to spend a little time on sports every day because people’s health is the most important one in modern life.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】第一个and 改为or

　　【小题2】real改为really

　　【小题3】Take改为Taking

　　【小题4】relaxing改为relaxed

　　【小题5】I前加can或will

　　【小题6】spirit改为spirits

　　【小题7】physics改为physical

　　【小题8】confident前加more

　　【小题9】not去掉

　　【小题10】this改为it

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】一小时或者两小时

　　【小题2】修饰helpful形容词要用副词

　　【小题3】此处taking作主语

　　【小题4】sb be relaxed感到放松的

　　【小题5】only放句首要用部分倒装

　　【小题6】固定短语

　　【小题7】修饰名词execise用形容词

　　【小题8】根据后面的 than 可知，此处是比较的意思

　　【小题9】我认为

　　【小题10】此处是形式主语

　　3．此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So am I. My mother is a ordinary teacher. She always works hard, just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She had been suffering from arthritis(关节炎)for many years. Despite of this, she never stops working or giving up hope. I still remember the day when my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director. The card was read “thank you for your hard works; Happy Teacher’s Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud for my mother.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】am----do

　　【小题2】 a-----an

　　【小题3】 good 前加 in

　　【小题4】had-----has

　　【小题5】of

　　去掉

　　【小题6】giving-----gives

　　【小题7】accepted—received

　　【小题8】works-----work

　　【小题9】moving----moved

　　【小题10】for------of

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】根据上一句的believe可知

　　【小题2】ordinary是原因开头

　　【小题3】in good health固定短语

　　【小题4】一般现在时

　　【小题5】despite后面不要of

　　【小题6】give和stops并列

　　【小题7】此处意为收到

　　【小题8】work作工作时是不可数名词

　　【小题9】moved指感动的

　　【小题10】be proud of 为固定短语

　　4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。

　　注意:1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

　　Dear Editor,

　　My name is Xiao Hai, boy student in Senior Three．Recently,I’ve read in Shanghai Students’ Post what you need some students reporters．I am anxious to be one of them．I very like English．I have been learned it since eight years ago．Now I can talk with foreigners with English．I can read China Daily．I took a first place in an English Composition Contest．Besides, I do well in a computer competition．

　　【答案】

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】boy 是可数名词

　　【小题2】宾语从句中不缺少成分

　　【小题3】student作reporters的定语，不需要复数

　　【小题4】like不能用very修饰，要用very much

　　【小题5】I跟learn之间是主动关系

　　【小题6】用英语，in

　　【小题7】take the first place固定短语，第一名

　　【小题8】该事情已经发生

　　【小题9】接受用accept ，receive是收到

　　【小题10】look forward to 其中to的介词，后面动词要用doing的形式

　　5．短文改错

　　It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High

　　School．Last Saturday，the class that I was on held a

　　get-together，which took us a long time prepare．It

　　was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody

　　and set a well time for all of us．We all enjoyed

　　this precious day greatly，remember the time we spent

　　together and the people they were familiar with．It was

　　a pity which some of us were not present as they had

　　gone abroad for further studies，but they called back

　　or sent greeting card from different places．

　　【小题1】graduate→ graduated

　　【小题2】on→ in

　　【小题3】time后加to

　　去掉the

　　well→ good

　　【小题6】remember→ remembering

　　【小题7】they→ we

　　【小题8】which → that

　　【小题9】√

　　【小题10】card→ cards

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】毕业是一个过去发生的事情，使用过去时。

　　【小题2】在具体的哪个班级使用介词in.

　　【小题3】固定句型it takes sb some time to do sth.

　　【小题4】固定词组get in touch with sb.

　　【小题5】time是名词，应该使用形容词修饰。

　　【小题6】remember与we构成主动关系，用现在分词。

　　【小题7】与上文一致，是我们熟悉的人。

　　【小题8】that引导起真正的主语从句。

　　【小题9】√

　　【小题10】根据上下文可知这里应该使用复数形式。

　　6．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线。在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the

　　cinema, I met an English woman,

　　lost her way.

　　I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her

　　hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes

　　that had been taken place in the past few years

　　and she had told me something about her country.

　　Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happy, for

　　I not only helped her out of trouble but practiced

　　my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on

　　English, I would not have been able to help him.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】the改为a

　　【小题2】she 改为who

　　【小题3】see 前加to

　　【小题4】go 改为going

　　【小题5】去掉been

　　【小题6】去掉had

　　【小题7】去掉but

　　【小题8】正确

　　【小题9】on 改为 at

　　【小题10】him改为 her

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】第一次出现的名词用不定冠词表示泛指；

　　【小题2】who是定语从句中的关系代词，在句子中做主语；

　　【小题3】to see the film修饰名词chances指看电影的机会；

　　【小题4】I与go构成主动关系，所以使用现在分词；

　　【小题5】take place没有被动语态；

　　【小题6】本句与89行构成并列关系，都使用过去时；

　　【小题7】although不能与but连用；

　　【小题8】正确

　　【小题9】work at对……下功夫; work on进行…

　　【小题10】根据上文可知是一位English woman。

　　7．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　One cold day, an aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he came, she tells him that her right leg was very sore(酸痛)in the knee. The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult. She asked him how the trouble could be because she had never before suffered some similar discomfort. After make a carefully examination, the doctor said, “You are in a very good state of health for a woman of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just matter of old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble will clear up on spring!” “Nonsense, doctor!” she said, “My left knee is perfect, and it is exactly same age as my right.”

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】去掉was

　　tells→told

　　【小题3】去掉it

　　how--what

　　【小题5】some→any

　　【小题6】make→making

　　【小题7】carefully→?careful

　　【小题8】matter前加a

　　on→in

　　【小题10】same前加the

　　【小题1】send for 是派人去请，为主动用法

　　【小题2】文章全文过去时

　　【小题3】walking就是make的宾语

　　【小题4】她询问的是她的问题是什么，缺少be的表语

　　【小题5】否定句用any

　　【小题6】after是介词

　　【小题7】examination是名词，要用形容词来修饰名词

　　【小题8】a matter of ……的问题，固定短语

　　【小题9】在春天用in

　　【小题10】the same age相同的年龄，

　　8．下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I

　　the

　　was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm

　　am

　　in Friday.

　　on

　　I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you. For other reason I think it will be too more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is up to you to make right choice.

　　【答案】

　　I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking

　　ago

　　about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your

　　asked

　　finishing

　　studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our

　　what

　　country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in

　　easy

　　companies

　　our city hope to hire people like you. For other reason I think it will be too more convenient

　　another

　　for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is

　　But

　　up to you to make∧ right choice.

　　a

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】（两周前）

　　【小题2】(句意为，你当时问我的）

　　【小题3】（after是介词）

　　【小题4】（study缺少宾语）

　　【小题5】（修饰主语it,用形容词）

　　【小题6】(前面有a few )

　　【小题7】(与前面的for one reason 相搭配）

　　【小题8】more删除

　　【小题9】(转折）

　　【小题10】（choice是可数名词）