短文改错系列8
一、短文改错
1．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
High school students sometimes feel stressed because frequent exams . Here is some suggestions on how to deal with the problem.
First of all, you should have confidences and hold on to your dreams. It’s important to make a good study plan and carry them out. To stay healthy and energetic, you’d better to do some sports after school, such as playing basketball, swimming and so on. Besides, a balancing diet is helpful. You should eat more vegetables but avoid food with too much fat.
In addition, it’s a good idea to turn to your parents and teachers with help when you got into trouble . They will sure help you out.
【答案】
【小题1】because 后加of
【小题2】is 改为are
【小题3】confidences 去s
【小题4】them改为it
【小题5】去掉to
【小题6】balancing改为balanced
【小题7】but 改为and
【小题8】with 改为for
【小题9】got 改为get
【小题10】sure 改为surely
【解析】
2．下面的文中共共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river. We found the water very dirty
that we could hardly catch any fish in it. A lot of factories along the river always poured
their waste water and rubbish straightly into the river, which made the river polluting. In
this way most of the fish in the river was killed. Unless the rivers all over the country are
polluted like this, no living things will be exist in the water. As we all know, environmental
pollution do great harm to living things. Now more and more people have realized what
serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measure to fight against
pollution. We expect that water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before
long.
【答案】
Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river. We found the water very dirty
so
that we could hardly catch any fish in it. A lot of factories along the river always poured
their waste water and rubbish straightly into the river, which made the river polluting. In
straight
polluted
this way most of the fish in the river was killed. Unless the rivers all over the country are
were
If
polluted like this, no living things will be exist in the water. As we all know, environmental
pollution do great harm to living things. Now more and more people have realized what
does
how
serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measure to fight against
measures
pollution. We expect that ∧water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before
the
long.
【解析】
3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Knowing how to do in case of fire is important. If a fire break out, what would you do? First, you should warn everyone in the building about the danger. Don’t panic or start shouting. Be calmly and act quickly. Second, you and all the others should be get out of the building. Don抰 stop take anything with you. Once you are out of the building, stay out. Do not go back for some reason. Finally, when you are out of the building, calling the fire police. Don抰 try to put off the fire yourself. That can be danetgerous if you do.
【答案】
【小题1】第一句话
how改为what
【小题2】第二句话
break改为 broke
【小题3】第三句话
about改为 of
【小题4】第五句话
calmly改为calm
【小题5】第六句话
划掉be
【小题6】第七句话
stop和 take之间加 to
【小题7】第九句话
some 改为any
【小题8】第十句话
calling改为call
【小题9】第十一句话 off 改为out
【小题10】第十二句话 do之后加 it或 so或 that
【解析】
4．
When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.
But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided
to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers,
saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would
like to have. One of the answers he accepted was from a man
was looking for a job, too. This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir,
when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and
address to your present boss as I have been trying to find
a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter,
he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.
【答案】
【小题1】 job
【小题2】去掉been
a
【小题4】experience
【小题5】received
【小题6】去掉was
my
【小题8】 √
【小题9】read
【小题10】really
【解析】
5．下面段文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
I have learned a lot of about robots, especially about their functions. The great human wisdom is so powerfully that it makes us feel more comfortable live in the world.
【答案】On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which （where）we saw a great diversity of robots. It was amazed (amazing) to find those robots could do a great number of things just as real people, included (including) playing chess, playing the piano and draw (drawing) pictures. Besides, the robots were in different kinds and shapes, which makes (made) us delighted. However, that (what) excited me most was the show given by a group of robots. They danced even (as)if they were dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot of (去掉of) about robots, especially about their functions. The great human wisdom is so powerfully (powerful) that it makes us feel more comfortable live (to live 或living) in the world.
【解析】
6．文中共有10处语言错误错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mark Twain, like you know, was famous in his days as the public speaker. He always liked to play joke
on his friends. One day, the one of his friends lost their wallet and asked him to buy a train ticket for him.
“But I don’t have enough money to pay both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend didn’t
know what to do. “Let’s do this, “ Mark Twain saying, “You can get off the train and when the conductor
comes to check the ticket you can hide under my seat.” Later, however, when the conductor comes to check
the ticket, Mark Twain gave him two tickets-----one for him and the other for his friend.
【答案】Mark Twain, like you know, was famous in his days as the public speaker. He
As
a
always liked to play joke
jokes
on his friends. One day, the one of his friends lost their wallet and asked him to buy a train ticket for him.
去掉
his
“But I don’t have enough money to pay both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend didn’t
Pay
know what to do. “Let’s do this, “ Mark Twain saying, “You can get off the train and when the conductor
said
on
comes to check the ticket you can hide under my seat.” Later, however, when the conductor
came
the ticket, Mark Twain gave him two tickets-----one for him and the other for his friend.
Himself
【解析】
【小题1】（as表示正如）
【小题2】（泛指一位演讲家）
【小题3】（固定词组）
【小题4】（表示泛指）
【小题5】（指代前面的one friend）
【小题6】后加for(固定词组为…付钱)
【小题7】（这里应该填谓语动词用过去式）
【小题8】（固定词组上次）
【小题9】（文章讲述的是一个过去的故事，用过去时）
【小题10】（反身代词表示他自己）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出 该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm very glad to learn from your e-mail that you and your parents will come to Shanghai and
call on me in April 30th.
7．____
But I'm terrible sorry
8．____
that I can't meet with you at Shanghai Pudong International Airport
9．____
because I have to attend a meeting in Beijing. Now let me tell you the way to your 10．____
home. When you get out the airport, you can take Bus NO.936 to
11．____
Rainbow Hotel Shanghai. Walking across Xianxia Road to the west till
12．____
you see the supermarket on your right. Turn to the left there and go
13．____
straightly on. Then you can see a bank on your left.
14．____
The apartment building I lived in is next to the bank. Find Room 601
15．____
that my mother will be waiting for you.
16．____
【答案】
7．on
8．terribly
9．meet
10．my
11．out of
12．Walk
13．a
14．straight
15．live
16．where
【解析】略
7．文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave while he walked out
of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
【答案】Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew
make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me
making
actors
at that time, but I
and/so
rushed back home to get∧. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and
it
had
the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave
anywhere
disappointed
while he walked
when
out of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I
had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
have
【解析】