短文改错系列7
一、短文改错
1．下面短文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train.
They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows them
enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return one not only is cheaper but
also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some
people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because
enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey.
Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When
they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.
【答案】
【小题1】ticket—tickets
【小题2】traveled—traveling
【小题3】and--- or
【小题4】them后加上to
【小题5】save---saves
【小题6】one--- ones
【小题7】enjoy---- enjoying
【小题8】去掉not
【小题9】were---are
【小题10】rapid---rapidly
【解析】
【小题1】根据前面的are可知后面是复数形式。
【小题2】这是状语从句的省略形式，省略了they are,后面应该接现在分词的形式。
【小题3】根据上下文可知这里表示选择关系，使用or表示选择。
【小题4】固定词组allow sb to do sth
【小题5】主语是a return one是单数；
【小题6】用ones指代上文提及的可数名词复数seats
【小题7】动名词在句中作主语。
【小题8】根据上下文可知商人喜欢软的椅子。
【小题9】本文通篇都是现在时。
【小题10】使用副词修饰动词短语。
2．Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place!
We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. You usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience. If you show much interests in it, reply to me soon.
【答案】
【小题1】take – took
【小题2】to- fit for
【小题3】joining
【小题4】so – such
【小题5】happy- happily
【小题6】that- which
【小题7】You – We
【小题8】∧ to visit
【小题9】a – an
【小题10】interests- interest
【解析】
【小题1】本文是记录过去发生的事情。使用过去时。
【小题2】固定词组be fit for适合…
【小题3】about是介词，后面接动名词。
【小题4】后面接的是名词短语，所以用such.
【小题5】副词修饰动词。
【小题6】非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。
【小题7】根据上下文可知是我们通常…
【小题8】用不定式表示目的。
【小题9】unforgettable是元音发音的，故使用an.
【小题10】interest作为兴趣是不可数名词。
3．英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
3 必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the
street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young
man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell
off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached.
They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote
something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
【答案】I saw an accident happened on my way to（去掉） home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the
Happen（固定结构see sb do sth）
street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young
when(后面句子中的动词是短暂性动词，而while只能和延续性动词连用)
man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell
but（根据上下文可知这里是转折关系）
off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
his（上文提及的司机是男性）
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached.
What（what作为do的宾语）
arrived(reach是及物动词，后面要有宾语)
They sent her∧ hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote
To（send sb to…）
policemen(one of 后面要接复数名词)
something down while∧ was（去掉） talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
(或加he) （状语从句的省略形式，当状语从句的主语和主句一致时，可以省略主语和be动词）
【解析】如上
4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Your parents are your dearest people in the world. When you are young and they always care for you deep. But even though many children still love their mum and dad, families often become more close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to get together. Have you ever thought what you can show your parents that you love them? Find chance and do anything for them or to have a sincere talk with them. If you can do this, your parents will be very happy.
【答案】
【小题1】times---time
【小题2】is---was
【小题3】and---去掉
【小题4】deep---deeply
【小题5】more---less
【小题6】you---they
【小题7】what---how
【小题8】chance 前加 a
【小题9】anything---something
【小题10】to去掉
【解析】
【小题1】这里的time指时间，是不可数名词。
【小题2】这一句是过去时。
【小题3】前面是一个时间状语从句，后面直接接主句，不需要连词。
【小题4】副词修饰动词短语。
【小题5】根据句意可知家人的联系变少，变松散。
【小题6】they指代families家人。
【小题7】后面的句子很完整，根据句意这里是如何想父母表现出你爱他们。
【小题8】这里的chance是可数名词。
【小题9】这里是一个肯定句。Anything用语疑问句和否定句。
【小题10】have a sincere talk with them与do anything for them是并列关系，都应该使用动词原形。
5．下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears.
Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful.
【答案】
【小题1】him---her
【小题2】buy---bought
【小题3】vegetable---vegetables
【小题4】cooked∧a
【小题5】what ---that/which或去掉
on---to
【小题7】not∧to
【小题8】Heard---Hearing 或Having
【小题9】specially ---special
【小题10】but---and
【解析】
【小题1】这里应该是指代mother.
【小题2】根据in the morning可知是陈述过去的事情。
【小题3】买了一些蔬菜。这里应该用复数形式。
【小题4】根据意思可知是做了一顿简单但是美味的饭菜。
【小题5】定语从句中作为宾语的关系代词可以省略。
【小题6】观点词组pay attention to…注意…
【小题7】根据句意可知是告诉她不要过于劳累。
【小题8】hear与mother构成主动关系，所以使用现在分词的形式。
【小题9】根据句意可知这是特殊的一天。Special特殊的。
【小题10】上下文是并列关系。
6．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏写符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Many year ago a poor man grew an orange tree.
On the tree there were many fine oranges. Some day he found
one of them was so big as a football . He took it
to the king . The king was so happy that he gave the
poor man lots money. When a rich man heard of it ,
he said for himself ,"I'll take my gold cup to the king
and he will give me much money . The next day the king receive
from the cup . The king was very fond of the cup and he told
the rich man, “I have an orange . It is beautiful than the cup,
so I have decided to give it to you as the reward instead money”.
【答案】
【小题1】year→years
【小题2】Some →One
【小题3】so→as
【小题4】正确
lots→lots of
【小题6】for→to
【小题7】receive→received
【小题8】from去掉
beautiful→more beautiful
【小题10】instead→instead of
【解析】
【小题1】（many后接复数名词）
【小题2】（some day 指的是将来某一天）
【小题3】（肯定句中用as …as）
【小题4】正确
lots of后接名词）
【小题6】（say to oneself自言自语）
【小题7】（应用一般过去时）
【小题8】（recive是及物动词，后不接介词）
【小题10】instead→instead of
7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One evening two young men were walking in the street. They tried to find a chance to steal everything. The clock strikes twelve. Most people were in bed. Quickly they came to a house so it seemed that everyone in the house had fallen sleep. Standing at the front gate, one man whispered in English to the other at a low voice, “You wait here. I will go around to the front door and then get into the house.” Suddenly out of the house ran a dog, barked at them. The two men were very afraid and ran away as fast as possibly. They didn’t stop until they had got to a lonely place. One man said to the other in surprise, “It’s too bad. I had thought that the dog could understand English.”
【答案】One evening two young men were walking in the street. They tried to find a chance to steal everything. The clock strikes twelve. Most people were in bed.
everything—something
strikes—struck;
Quickly they came to a house so it seemed that everyone in the house had fallen
so — and
sleep. Standing at the front gate, one man whispered in English to the other at a
sleeping—asleep
at—in
low voice, “You wait here. I will go around to the front door and then get into
front—back
the house.” Suddenly out of the house ran a dog, barked at them. The two men
barked —barking
were very afraid and ran away as fast as possibly. They didn’t stop until they
possibly—possible
had got to a lonely place. One man said to the other in surprise,“It’s too bad.
去掉had
I had thought that the dog could understand English.”
had—hadn’t/had 后边加not
【解析】略
8．下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At first, I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football
match. Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a
game in that players kicked a ball to each other. Therefore, my father loves football.
During the World Cup in 2006, my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport.
Seeing him strongly interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit
down to watch the game. I found game exciting, and my dad explained for the rules.
We shared our joy. Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!
【答案】At first, I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football
watch （与sit并列，形式应一致）
match. Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch it（形式主语）
a game in that players kicked a ball to each other. Therefore, my father loves football. which（作介词的宾语应用which）
However（前后是转折关系）
During the World Cup in 2006, my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport.
tayed（2006年的事，应用过去式）
Seeing him strongly interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit
interested（形容词作补语）
running（现在分词作定语）
down to watch the game. I found∧game exciting, and my dad explained for the
the（特知前面提到的比赛）
（explain是及物动词）
rules. We shared our joy. Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!
bad（作表语用形容词）
【解析】