短文改错系列6
一、短文改错
1．下面短文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A man was driving on the road．Sudden his car stopped．He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble．“It’s the motor．” said voice behind him．He was surprising and turned around．
And he saw only an old horse．“Did you say something?” he asked．“ I said you should check yours motor,” the horse replied．The man rushed to the nearest house．With a very excited voice, he told the farmer that what had happened．The farmer, however, showed no sign of excitement．He explained , “He didn’t know anything about cars．He can only repeat what I often say．”
【小题1】Sudden---Suddenly
【小题2】tried—trying
【小题3】voice前加a
surprising—surprised
【小题5】And---But
【小题6】something---anything
【小题7】yours---your
【小题8】With---In
【小题9】取掉that
didn’t—doesn’t
【解析】
【小题1】sudden是形容词，这里作状语，故用副词。
【小题2】现在分词做伴随状语，故用trying。
【小题3】voice是个可数名词，故加a。
【小题4】感到惊讶，故用surprised.
【小题5】他听到有人说话，却没想到是只马。故是转折关系
【小题6】在否定句中应用anything.
【小题7】yours是名词性物主代词，后面有名词，故用your.
【小题8】用什么声音，应用介词in,而不是with.
【小题9】that引导主语从句，在句中不充当任何成分，而这里已经有了what引导的宾语从句，就不用that连接了。
【小题10】这里是说，马不懂的汽车，他只是重复农民经常说的话。是在直接引语中，故用一般现在时。
2．英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
March 22nd, Tuesday
I watch TV until nearly 12 o’clock, so I could not go over my lessons. This morning I got up very late that I had to hurry to school without breakfast. Yet I was late for the first class. When I entered the classroom, the maths teacher also had to stop explaining an important problem, and all the eyes fixed upon me. My face turned red. Something even bad happened on me in the English class. The teacher asked me to recite the text, but I could speak nothing but sorry, because I did not spend any times preparing my lessons. The teacher looked at me coldly. I stood at my bench, not dare to raise my head. What a terrible day I had! I will never do something like this again.
【答案】
【小题1】watch 改成watched
【小题2】very 改成 so
【小题3】去掉also
【小题4】upon改成on
【小题5】bad 改成worse
【小题6】on 改成to
【小题7】speak改成say
【小题8】times 改成 time
【小题9】dare 改成
daring
【小题10】something改成
anything
【解析】
【小题1】叙述的是过去的事，应用过去时。
【小题2】与后面的that构成so…that句型。
【小题3】去掉also，在此无意义。多余。
【小题4】be fixed on盯着某物或某事。
【小题5】even修饰形容词比较级。
【小题6】sth happen to sb 某人发生某事。
【小题7】speak表示说的内容时，通常是不及物动词。
【小题8】time表示时间是不可数名词。
【小题9】daring在此处是现在分词做伴随状语。
【小题10】something不与never连用。
3．假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”
【答案】Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now
1. touching
listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going
from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all
2. because
3.himself
his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog
sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the
4.去掉was
people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell,
5.so
and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted
6.too
them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of
7.the
coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the
plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he
8.on
9.didn’t
petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when
10.gently
it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”
【解析】
【小题1】touching令人感动的，修饰事物，touched受感到的，修饰人。而这里主语是物，故用touching.
【小题2】表示原因，并非结果。
【小题3】介绍他自己。
【小题4】belong to 没有被动语态。
【小题5】这里不是转折关系，而是因果关系。
【小题6】肯定句中表示“也”，用too。
【小题7】前面一提到过这对夫妇，故用the表特指。
【小题8】坐在膝盖上，用on。
【小题9】本文用的是过去式，故用didn’t.
【小题10】gently修饰动词pet.
4．假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处写一个漏字符号（）, 在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
【答案】
Last Saturday 1 went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading
usual
near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. when
heard
happening
shocked
I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were
people
standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I
pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back
and to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
my
I was proud
what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
of
【解析】
【小题1】as usual正如往常 固定短语
【小题2】while 引导的从句中，谓语动词应是延续性动词。
【小题3】时态前后应一致。
【小题4】happen是不及物动词，不能用被动
【小题5】我感到惊讶，应用shocked
【小题6】people是一个集体名词，始终表示复数概念。解释为“民族”时，才可以用单复数形式。
【小题7】take off 的动作与push 的动作同时发生，不用过去完成时
【小题8】这里是并列的动作，没有转折关系。
【小题9】本文是以第一人称写的，故用to my great relief.
【小题10】be proud of +n. 或名词性从句
5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。
I went shopping at a gift shop in Shanghai. I was greatly interesting and I lost me in beautiful goods. After I paid for that I had bought, I left my handbag on the counter. There was about two thousands yuan in it. I had already walked out of the shop while a young shop assistant walked up to me in my handbag. He insisted on my check it. I opened the handbag and found nothing losing. I thanked him and offered him a reward of 100 yuan, he refused to take anything. I was deeply moved by his selfless act on that day.
【答案】One day I went shopping at a gift shop in Shanghai. I was greatly interesting（interested） and I lost me (改为myself)(固定词组lose oneself in使自己迷失在…中) in beautiful goods. After I paid for that (改为what)（宾语从句的引导词，并在句中作宾语） I had bought, I left my handbag on the counter. There was about two thousands (改为thousand)（确定数词后面的量词用单数） yuan in it. I had already walked out of the shop while (改为when)（while后面的动词应该是延续性的动词，而walk是短暂性动词） a young shop assistant walked up to me in (with) my handbag. He insisted on my check (改为checking)（On后面要接动名词） it. I opened the handbag and found nothing losing（形容词lost宾语补足语） (改为lost). I thanked him and offered him a reward of 100 yuan, (加上but)(上下文存在转折关系) he refused to take anything. I was deeply moved by his selfless act on (去掉on) that day.
【解析】如上
6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some students thought that they can learn English well if they remember the grammar rules and learn by hearts as many words as they can. And I don’t quite agree with them. Learning rules from a grammar book and remember long lists of words are not enough. We must learn by listening
to, speaking, reading and writing. We should practice our spoken English both in and out class, and try to read and listen whenever possibly. This is also helpful to keep diaries and write letters or shortly stories in English. Only with this way can we learn English well.
【答案】Some students thought that they can learn English well if they remember the grammar rules and
think
根据后面的can可知，谓语动词应用一般现在时。
learn by hearts as many words as they can. And I don’t quite agree with them. Learning rules from
heart
But
learn sth. by heart是固定短语用心记牢…
根据后面的内容不同意他们的观点，可只是转折关系，故用but。
a grammar book and remember long lists of words are not enough. We must learn by listening to,
remembering
动名词做主语，故用remembering.
listening 是不及物动词，在没有宾语2时，无需加to。
speaking, reading and writing. We should practice our spoken English both in and out class, and
out后加 of
try to read and listen whenever possibly. This is also helpful to keep diaries and write letters or
possible
It
Whenever possible=Whenever it is possible, 故需用形容词。 It为形式主语，真正地主语为不定式，而this是不可以做形式主语的。
shortly stories in English. Only with this way can we learn English well.
short
in
in this way用这种方法。
【解析】如上
7．下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
【答案】
with
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds∧ view
quarrel with sb.
特指高三学生必须充分利用每一分钟这个观点，故加the.
the
that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It
full
make full use of full形容词修饰名词use.
seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about
her 这是母亲的观点，所以应该是to her.
be unable为形容词，需加be动词才能作谓语。
my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion,
eyes
眼睛为一双，故用eyes
watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know
work
hard work中work为不可数名词
watching
动名词短语作主语
what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
at home and abroad 在国内外
has
前面是it is important…，故用现在完成时。
【解析】如上
8．假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Boys and girls, welcome to Elite Secondary School! I’m Mr. Green, in charge of this school. I’d like to introduce you to various aspect of our school, from our history to our buildings and activities. Elite Secondary School set up in 1960. In the past fifty years, Elite had experienced a lot of changes and developments. Our school finally decided to move to Aberdeen in 1990, due to the lack of the space. The school campus now was almost three times larger than the previous one. We even have three libraries which are available with all the teachers and students. As for laboratories, they have two Physics labs, two Chemistry labs, and a Biology lab which was established last year. Students here always have an enjoyable time at school because there is a widely range of extra-curricular activities for them to choose. We try to provide as much activities for our students as possible. Elite Secondary School is committed to providing the highest level of education to the children. Thank you for your time.
【答案】Boys and girls, welcome to Elite Secondary School! I’m Mr. Green, in
charge of this school. I’d like to introduce you to various aspect of our
1.aspects
school, from our history to our buildings and activities. Elite Secondary
School▽ set up in 1960. In the past forty years, Elite had experienced
2.was
3.has
a lot of changes and developments. Our school finally decided to move to
Aberdeen in 1990, due to the lack of the space. The school campus now
4. 去掉the
was almost three times larger than the previous one. We even have three
5.is
libraries which are available with all the teachers and students. As for
6.to
laboratories, they have two Physics labs, two Chemistry labs, and a
7.we
Biology lab which was established last year. Students here always have
an enjoyable time at school because there is a widely range of
8.wide
extra-curricular activities for them to choose▽. We try to provide as
9.加from
much activities for our students as possible. Elite Secondary School is
10.many
committed to providing the highest level of education to the children. Thank you for your time.
【解析】
【小题1】前面有various修饰，故应将aspect改为aspects.
【小题2】学校是被建立的，故应用被动，加was.
【小题3】根据前面的In the past forty years，可知应用现在完成时，故had改为has.
【小题4】space空间，不可数名词。这里没有特指什么空间，故无需加the.
【小题5】因为有时间状语now，故应用一般现在时。
【小题6】be available to固定短语。
【小题7】根据前面We even have three libraries，可知，这是第一人称。
【小题8】wide可以做形容词，而widely是副词，故用wide.
【小题9】有很多课外活动可供选择，故不是之间choose activities, 而是choose from activities.
【小题10】activities是复数形式，不能赢Much修饰。