2017届高考英语二轮复习热点限时训练：短文改错系列1

　　短文改错系列1

　　一、短文改错

　　1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school． Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided to make the best for it． I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates． Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available． Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are．

　　【小题1】disappointing—disappointed

　　【小题2】find—found

　　【小题3】However—Besides或Also

　　for—of

　　【小题5】hardly—hard

　　【小题6】teachers 前加my或the

　　student—students

　　【小题8】what—which

　　【小题9】去掉but后的that

　　determine—determines

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】disappointing修饰某事

　　disappointed修饰某人

　　【小题2】文章开头Three years ago所以应是过去时

　　【小题3】however但是

　　此处不存在转折关系。而是与前面的表示并列

　　【小题4】固定搭配make the best of

　　好好利用

　　【小题5】hard的形容词 副词 相同，均为hard

　　而hardly表示几乎不

　　【小题6】老师应是特制的 故要加my或the

　　【小题7】one of 后面要用复数

　　表示 。。。之一

　　【小题8】非限制性定语从句。从句中缺主语，关系代词不能用what，用which

　　【小题9】but后已经是一个完整的句子，不用加that

　　【小题10】it后的that指代it 故从句中要用第三人称单数。

　　2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文　中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在写出该加的词

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该写出改正后的词

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour.They reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and watered flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. The group where I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground. All of us worked hardly.Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】me—I

　　【小题2】that 去掉

　　【小题3】They-We

　　【小题4】was divided into

　　【小题5】 leaving—left

　　【小题6】where—which

　　【小题7】equipments—equipment

　　【小题8】hardly—hard

　　【小题9】fell—felt

　　【小题10】so--but

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】and表并列，前后的人称应相同

　　所以应用主格I

　　【小题2】guess后已经是一个完整的句子，不用加that

　　【小题3】本文讲的是“我们”所以应是we

　　【小题4】班里的人应该是“被分成三组”所以应是被动语态

　　【小题5】句意：拣被留下的垃圾

　　所以应是left

　　【小题6】定语从句

　　in后面缺少宾语

　　不能用where

　　应该有which

　　【小题7】equipment为不可数名词，不能加S

　　【小题8】hard的形容词 副词均为hard

　　hardly意为几乎不

　　【小题9】句意：我们感到有点儿累

　　感觉feel

　　过去时为felt

　　【小题10】我们很累但很开心

　　前后转折 故用but

　　3．假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文

　　中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been

　　hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street,

　　he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But

　　hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on

　　his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to

　　escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the

　　nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was

　　out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to

　　normal as soon as possible.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】surprising 改成surprised

　　【小题2】has 改成had

　　【小题3】such 改成so

　　【小题4】to去掉

　　【小题5】while 改成when

　　【小题6】them改成 him

　　【小题7】or 改成 and

　　【小题8】operation 前面加an

　　【小题9】dangers 改成danger

　　【小题10】sincere 改成sincerely

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】修饰主语用过去分词转换的形容词

　　【小题2】他被车撞是之前已经发生的事情

　　【小题3】后面的形容词，用so修饰

　　【小题4】see sb do sth

　　【小题5】固定句型hardly…when…一…就…

　　【小题6】him指代Allee

　　【小题7】上下文不是选择关系，而是并列关系

　　【小题8】operation是可数名词，用a修饰

　　【小题9】固定词组out of danger

　　【小题10】副词修饰动词

　　4．此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　In China there is about 50 million disabled

　　76. _______

　　people. We should try our best make their life much

　　77. _______

　　more easier. For example, when we design a building,

　　78. _______

　　we’ll have to provide a entrance which is suitable

　　79. _______

　　for wheelchairs in the first floor. The Chinese

　　80. _______

　　government take good care of their life. Many people

　　81. _______

　　with disability have received good treatment from the

　　82. _______

　　government. Meanwhile, more and more special schools

　　83. _______

　　have built for them. But that is not enough, their life

　　84._______

　　won’t be much better if everyone shows love for them.

　　85._______

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】is改为 are

　　【小题2】best 后加to

　　【小题3】more去掉

　　【小题4】 a改为 an

　　【小题5】in 改为on

　　【小题6】take 改为takes

　　【小题7】disability 改为disabilities

　　【小题8】正确

　　【小题9】have改为 been

　　【小题10】won’t 改为 will if改为 unless

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】is改为 are

　　there be是倒装句，句子的主语是million disabled people作主语，谓语动词用复数。

　　【小题2】best 后加to

　　固定词组try one’s best to do sth努力做某事。

　　【小题3】more去掉

　　后面已经是比较级了，故more省略。

　　【小题4】 a改为 an

　　entrance是以元音发言，故用an.

　　【小题5】in 改为on

　　在一楼用介词On。

　　【小题6】take 改为takes

　　government作为整体，谓语动词用单数。

　　【小题7】disability 改为disabilities

　　用复数形式指不同的残疾；

　　【小题8】正确

　　【小题9】have改为 been

　　上下文可知使用被动形式。

　　【小题10】won’t 改为 will if改为 unless 上下文串联，除非每个人都表现出对别人的爱，他们的生活才会更好。

　　5．文中有10处错误每句最多两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ^，在其下面写出加的词，删除把多余的词用斜线划掉或修改在错词下划—横线在下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意每处错误及修改仅限一词；2只修改10处从第11处起不计分。

　　College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students

　　have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and

　　others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this,

　　many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part

　　of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are

　　rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high

　　school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these

　　important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.

　　【答案】College students have a few ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their

　　parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply for a bank loan and others will try to find

　　part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good students can win a

　　scholarship.In this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay

　　half of my fees because they are ∧ not rich enough. Besides my study, I will take up a part-time

　　job by teaching some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good

　　at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order that I can easily win a scholarship.

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】way是可数名词，用few修饰，little修饰不可数名词

　　【小题2】have sb do 使某人做。。。

　　把parents后面的to去掉

　　【小题3】apply for 申请

　　这里指申请银行贷款

　　【小题4】many good students

　　许多好学生

　　【小题5】用这种方式in this way

　　by this way 表示顺便说一下

　　【小题6】句意：让父母付 我的学费中的一半

　　把their改为my

　　【小题7】前文说我要去挣学费，说明我的父母不是很富有

　　故在are前面加not

　　【小题8】把beside改为besides

　　beside表示在。。旁边

　　besides表示另外。。。，除了。。。。

　　【小题9】by是介词，后面加doing

　　所以是teaching

　　【小题10】in order to+短语

　　in order that+句子

　　故这里应把to改为that

　　6．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

　　Which is known to all,nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life.In it,we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so much information as possible.We are often send emails to our classmates or our teachers or make telephone call to our families as well as our friends.However,we can go to school on the net,read different kinds of books and even teach myself English.We can also enjoy music,watching sports and play computer games on the net.We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】Which改为As；

　　playing后加a 

　　【小题2】In改为On；

　　so改为as

　　【小题3】去掉are；

　　call改为calls

　　【小题4】However改为Besides/Moreover； myself改为ourselves

　　【小题5】watching改为watch

　　【小题6】could改为can

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】定语从句，从句中缺少主语，只能用as做代词，指代nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life.这句话，which不能指代一句话。

　　固定搭配 play a part in 在。。。中是。。。的一部分

　　【小题2】“it”指代“Internet”

　　在网上，用on

　　on the Internet为固定搭配

　　固定搭配as much as possible

　　尽可能的多

　　【小题3】句意：我们通常给老师同学发邮件

　　这里是一般现在时，不用are

　　打电话

　　make telephone calls

　　由上下文可知，不止一个电话，故用复数形式

　　【小题4】前后两句话不存在转折，由递进的意味，故用Besides/Moreover

　　句子的主语是“我们” 故此处应是“我们自学英语”故用ourselves

　　【小题5】watch sports 是与enjoy music和play computer games并列存在的，都是can后面的宾语。都应该用动词原形

　　【小题1】本文时态为现在时，故用can 不用could

　　7．下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　One cold winter day in 1900, a small boy was

　　1. _________

　　called Charles Chaplin was walking along the street

　　2. _________

　　in London. He didn’t have breakfast and lunch. He

　　3. _________

　　wants to buy some bread, but he didn’t have any money.

　　4. _________

　　His father died since he was very young. His mother

　　5. _________

　　was often very sickly, so she couldn’t take care of

　　6. _________

　　Charles and his brother. Neither of them had to

　　7. _________

　　work to help his mother. He was a small boy

　　8. _________

　　and his dream was very big. He wanted to

　　9. _________

　　be great man in the world of films. So he worked very hard.

　　10. _________

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】was前加who或去掉was

　　√

　　【小题3】and→or

　　【小题4】wants→wanted

　　【小题5】since→when

　　【小题6】sickly→sick

　　【小题7】Neither→Both

　　【小题8】his→their

　　【小题9】and→but

　　【小题10】be后加a

　　【小题1】not feeling well在句中充当状语。

　　表示“使自己怎么样”时，应该用反身代词。

　　【小题4】felt表示“感到”时，为不及物动词，没有被动形式。

　　and连接的是三个动词went、took、wrote，所以三者在形式上保持一致。

　　上文中已经提到了这位大夫，所以在此应该予以特指。

　　another“再一次”。

　　前后两句话为并列关系，不存在转折的意味。

　　本句话意思是“他根本没有得癌症”。at all“到底，根本”；in all“总共”。

　　rather than为固定短语，连接两个并列成分。

　　【小题1】 Have you ever tried to talk to your son like a friend?

　　【小题2】He was determining not to make the same mistakes.

　　【小题3】 The music performed now is written by GuJianfen.

　　【小题4】 His voice hears as if he has a cold.

　　【小题5】 It is said Yogo is great benefit to human health.

　　【小题6】 An European settler first discovered the place in 1820.

　　【小题7】 He has decided to go abroad to study with the intention of improving his English and find a job.

　　【小题8】 Would Ma Li come to Brunei, I would meet her at the airport.

　　【小题9】 He learned English over listening to the radio.

　　【小题10】 With the help of foreign experts, the factory produced twice many cars in 2000 as the year before.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】错

　　错

　　错

　　错

　　错

　　错

　　错

　　错

　　错

　　错

　　【小题1】to talk 改成talking。Try doing 表“试着去做某事（看是否有效果）”

　　determining→determined 固定词组be determined to do sth下定决心做某事。

　　【小题3】being performed now

　　根据Now说明是正在发生的，故使用现在分词。且音乐和表演构成被动关系，使用现在分词的被动形式。

　　【小题4】hears----sounds系动词听起来：sound. Sound as if听起来似乎…

　　【小题5】of great benefit

　　固定结构：of+名词=该名词的形容词形式。Of great benefit=beneficial.

　　【小题6】An→A European是以辅音开始，所以用不定冠词a.

　　【小题7】find—finding

　　with the intention of后面有两个宾语，improving his English是其中之一，另外一个是finding a job.与improving构成并列关系。

　　【小题8】would →should这是一个与将来事实相反的条件句的虚拟语气。在条件句中，如果是对将来进行虚拟，从句中有三种情况：过去时；were to do ;should+动词原形。如果省略了if,使用部分倒装，本题就是使用了倒装，把should提前。

　　【小题9】over→by通过某种手段使用介词：by.

　　【小题10】twice 后加as….故在twice前面加as.