专题四│ 专题预测 专题预测 专题四│ 专题预测
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________
专题四│ 专题预测
(一) 【参考范文】
Coaching books are now very popular among middle school students, and they are playing an important role in our school life.
Coaching books can help us review, summerize and consolidate what we learned before, and they can also guide us how to learn in future. Good coaching books are just like good teachers, which are a great help to us learning.
专题四│ 专题预测
However, we cannot depend too much on coaching books, because the best way of learning is to learn by ourselves. What’s more, some coaching books are in poor quality, so we need to choose and judge by ourselves. 专题四│ 专题预测 专题四│ 专题预测
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________
专题四│ 专题预测
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。 ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ 专题四│ 专题预测
(二) 【参考范文】
Advertisements are very common in modern society, and they are now playing an important role in our life.
Advertisements can tell people a lot of information about new products—qualities, prices, where to get and so on. What’s more, they can also attract potential customers’ interest and help increase the selling quantity. 专题四│ 专题预测
However, we shouldn’t trust advertisements too much because sometimes the products are not really like what the advertisers claim to be. It is best to check the products before we decide to buy them.
专题二 │ 典例导练 【参考范文】
My country begins to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st, 2011.The main aim is to make every public room have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second-hand smoke. 专题二 │ 专题预测 (一)
最近我国的教育专家对我国中学生所喜爱的节日进行了一项调查,北京、成都等地的1000多名中学生接受了调查。结果表明,80%以上的学生对春节等我国的传统节日知晓,50%的学生最喜爱春节,其他情况如下图所示。 专题预测 专题二 │ 专题预测 专题二 │ 专题预测
[写作要求]
1.请根据以上内容,为学校广播站写一篇英文发言稿;
2.只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ 专题二 │ 专题预测
(一) 【参考范文】
Recently some Chinese educational experts did a survey to find out which festivals are the most favorite ones among middle school students. More than 1,000 students from Beijing and Chengdu and so on participated in the activity. The result shows that over 80% 专题二 │ 专题预测 of the students are familiar with our classical festivals. About 50% of the students choose the Spring Festival as their most favorite. Next comes Christmas Day, Father’s Day and Mother’s Day and Mid-autumn Day, with 20%, 10% and about 8% respectively.
专题二 │ 专题预测
(二)
假设你是吴东,拾到一部电子词典,请失主前来认领。
[写作内容]
时间:2010年10月10日晚
地点:学校运动场
特征:新,灰色,比名片稍大,杂志般厚
联系地址:本校学生宿舍D座502室
联系电话:22221368 专题二 │ 专题预测
[写作要求]
1.标题:Lost and Found;
2.必须用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容;
3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。 ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________
专题二 │ 专题预测
(二) 【参考范文】
Lost and Found
On the evening of October 10th, 2010, I picked up an electronic dictionary on the playground of our school. It is new, grey, a little bigger than a card and as thick as a magazine. The owner of the dictionary can phone me. My name is Wu Dong and my telephone number is 22221368. I live in Room 502 of Building D of the student dormitory of our school. 专题三
说明文型
基础写作 专题三│ 说明文型基础写作 专题导读 专题三│ 专题导读
说明文是用简洁的文字介绍事物的特性、构造、变化或结果的文章。高考中,说明文常见的话题有:产品介绍、地点描述、方位描写、变化分析、购物指南和操作说明等。写作这类文章需注意以下几点:
1.首先要读题审题,弄清需要介绍的内容,把握信息要点,不可遗漏也不能添加。 专题三│ 专题导读
2.写作内容要条理清楚,层次分明。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法和因果法等;说明自然环境方面的内容常用时空次序法和分类法等。
3.时态常用一般现在时。若是介绍其历史时,要用一般过去时。语态可能用到被动语态。若是介绍地点环境等,要善于运用there be结构。 专题三│ 典例导练 典例导练 专题三│ 典例导练
[写作内容]
1.鼠标的必要性。
2.鼠标的便捷性。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ 专题三│ 典例导练 【参考范文】
The mouse is a most effective device used
by people to communicate with a computer.
For most people,it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse,which is really handy,flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting,deleting,moving and copying,it 专题三│ 典例导练 enables us to edit text, browse web pages and download what we want.It can also help us e-mail people,shop online and find friends around the world.A simple click with a cute mouse can even brings us a flood of music, movies and PC games. 专题三│ 专题预测 专题预测 专题三│ 专题预测
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ 专题三│ 专题预测
(一) 【参考范文】
Solar cars are cars that use sunlight for power while common cars use gas or petral as their fuel. Both of them have advantages and disadvantages. Solar cars are safe and clean, but they have low power, they are slow and they cannot run at night. Common cars have strong power and they are convenient to use, but they pollute the environment.
专题三│ 专题预测
I think we need to develop future technologies to improve the power for solar cars and to use clean energy for common cars.
专题三│ 专题预测 专题三│ 专题预测
参考词汇:拉萨 Lhasa;冻土frozen earth;高原 plateau
____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ 专题三│ 专题预测 【参考范文】
Qinghai-Tibet Railway, the world’s highest railway, extends 1956 kilometers from Xining to Lhasa. It has set up a number of world records in the history of railway construction. It has 550 kilometers of track laid on frozen earth, the longest distance 专题三│ 专题预测 anywhere in the world. It also has the highest railway station on the route, Tanggula Station, which is 5068 meters above sea level. And Kunlun Mountain Tunnel, running 1686 meters, is the world’s longest plateau tunnel built on frozen earth. 专题四
议论文型
基础写作 专题四│ 议论文型基础写作 专题四│ 专题导读 议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文有三个要素,即论点、论据和论证。论点的基本要求是:观点正确,认真概括,有实际意义,恰当地综合运用各种表达方式;论据的基本要求是:真实可靠,充分典型;论证的基本要求是:推理必须符合逻辑。议论文的写作要注意以下几点: 专题导读 专题四│ 专题导读
1、准确找出论点、论据及其之间的相互关系,即找出要点;
2、合理安排材料的顺序,即论点、论据和结论之间的表述方式;
3、注意文章的时态、语态等。议论文常用一般现在时,但述说过去的事实时,可用过去时态;预测将来时,要用将来时态;也经常使用被动语态;有时假设一种虚拟情况时,还需要用虚拟语气。 专题四│ 典例导练 典例导读 专题四│ 典例导练
[写作内容]
1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲。
2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。
[写作要求]
1.人称:第二人称;时态:一般现在时。
2.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
3.短文开头已给出,但不计入总句数。 专题四│ 典例导练 Hi, Grown-up,
As a student of your age, I understand your situation. _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 专题四│ 典例导练 【参考范文】
Hi,Grown-up,
As a student of your age,I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers, But it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother’s feelings. You may try to find time to have a heart-to-heart talk with her, expressing your ideas and attitudes toward 专题四│ 典例导练 many things. And what’s more important is that you should learn to do your own things well,proving that you are already a“grownup”. It’s even better if you could share more of the housework,such as cleaning,washing and cooking.
Hope my ideas will work. 模块5│ 题型探究 [写作要求]
1.必须紧扣题目《怎样学习英文写作》。
2.必须使用5个规范的英语句子, 组织成连贯的短文。
3.开头、结尾已经写好, 不计入总句数。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。
模块5│ 题型探究 Ladies and gentlemen,
Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing.
_____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
模块5│ 题型探究
【评论点拨】
信息的筛选
根据题目要求, “怎样学习英文写作”只涉及与写作有关的材料, 这是一个非常重要的要求, 言下之意就是说, “听英文广播”与“练习口语”不属于学习英文写作的方法。那么, 有效的信息只有5个, 分别是:背诵范文、多阅读英文文章、学习语法、多写日记和参考别人的作文, 另外加上这些做法的目的。 模块5│ 题型探究 模块5│ 题型探究
【学生样本】
Ladies and gentlemen,
Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing. ①Firstly, I will recite the model article so that I can imitate writing by English thoughts.
②Secondly, I will read more English article to absorb more language material.
③Thirdly, I will learn grammar to express in the right way. 模块5│ 题型探究
④What’s more, in order to learn by doing, I will write some diaries.
⑤In addition, I will refer to other’s article so that I can gain the advantages to mend my disadvantages.
That’s all. Thank you. 模块5│ 题型探究 【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen,
Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing. I often recite good English articles, which helps me think in English when I imitate English writing. I also read English articles widely to take in as many language materials as possible.
模块5│ 题型探究 Besides, in order to express correctly, I think it important to learn some grammar. I keep a diary every day so that I can learn by writing. Also I often refer to others’ articles to know what I need and what I can learn from others.
That’s all. Thank you. 专题一
记叙文型
基础写作 专题一│ 记叙文型基础写作 专题导读 专题一 │ 专题导读 记叙文是以叙述为主要表达方式,以写人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体,包括记人记事方面的故事、日记、游记、资讯、通讯等。记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等六个要素交代清楚。通常使用第一人称或第三人称来写,第一人称主要是用于写自传或本人的经历,第三人称是用于写他人的经历或事迹。写作时要注意以下几点: 专题一 │ 专题导读
1.注意不要漏掉信息点,但也不要为了生动而随意添加信息。
2.信息点的表述不一定完全按照题目所给的顺序,可能要适当重组。要特别注意故事发展的线索和时间顺序等。
3.记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时,但也要注意灵活运用其他时态。
4.高考中记叙文的话题通常是与中学生的生活阅历有关,如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等,平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。 典例导练 专题一 │ 典例导练 专题一 │ 典例导练 [写作内容]
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容:
1.采访的时间、对象和主题;
2.中小学生近视的发生率及人数;
3.专家解读。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 专题一 │ 典例导练
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ 专题一 │ 典例导练 【参考范文】
Last weekend, I made an interview to the well-known eye-doctor, Professor Wang, about the short-sightedness of the middle school students of our country. From the survey, I learned that more than 50% of the middle school students are short-sighted, the number of which is the largest in the world(ranking 专题一 │ 典例导练 the first in the world). Professor Wang told me that the reason of the short-sightedness is so complicated that no medicine can cure it. He suggested that we should participate in the outdoor activities more and not exhaust our eyes. Besides, he especially told us the way of holding the pen has much to do with the short-sightedness.
专题预测 专题一 │ 专题预测 专题一 │ 专题预测
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
May 20th, Wednesday
Cloudy and drizzle _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 专题一 │ 专题预测
(一) 【参考范文】
May 20th, Wednesday
Cloudy and drizzle
Yesterday my classmates and I went to West Mountain and had a picnic.
All of us set off at seven o’clock from our school gate and rode to the foot of the mountain. After an hour’s climbing, we reached the top of the mountain and enjoyed 专题一 │ 专题预测 the beautiful scenery. Running, singing, jumping, playing chess and games and taking photos, we had a wonderful time there.
After the picnic lunch at three o’clock, we felt very tired, so we went down the mountain and came home.
专题一3│ 专题预测
(二)
请根据以下的情景说明,使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
[情景说明]
假如你叫孙军,是某市一所中学的学生,要给市长写一封信,反映学校门前交通拥挤现象,信须包括以下要点: 专题一│ 专题预测 专题一│ 专题预测
参考词汇:穿行 thread one’s way; 天桥 overpass
[写作要求]
1.短文必须使用5个句子介绍包括以上表格中的全部内容,其中三个句子必须为复合句,可以适当增减细节,使内容连贯。
2.要以书信的格式写这篇反应情况的短文。
3.书信的开头及结尾已经写好,但不计入总句数。
专题一│ 专题预测 Dear Mayor,
I am a student of No. 5 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you. _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sun Jun 专题一│ 专题预测
【参考范文】
Dear Mayor,
I am a student of No. 5 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you. Beside my school there is a primary school and the gates of the two schools both face the main road. In rush hours, there are so many cars, buses and bikes on the main road that the students have to cross the road to school. Crowds of people often thread their way through the moving cars and 专题一│ 专题预测 buses. What’s worse, some pupils are too young to go to school by themselves, so many parents have to go along with them to make sure that their children are safe. I think the government should build an overpass over the road so that we can pass through it safely; otherwise accidents are sure to happen from time to time. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sun Jun 专题二
应用文型
基础写作 专题二│ 应用文型基础写作 专题导读 专题二 │ 专题导读 应用文是指日常生活和工作中为某种具体的实用目的而写的文体,主要有书信、通知、海报、请柬、请假条、便条、日记、启事、祝辞、履历表等。应用文的语言力求平实,准确,简洁。由于应用文使用广泛而频繁,其表达内容结构严谨,易于理解掌握。写作时要注意以下几点: 专题二 │ 专题导读 1.正式的应用文有比较规范的格式,但高考中的基础写作至今尚未考查过格式,只要求表达正文内容。
2.注意时态,如日记常用过去时态,通知、请柬通常要用将来时态,而履历表用现在时态。
3.应用文的写作往往有一些特定的习惯语句或套话,这些语句在考试中可能会考查到,所以要重点掌握。 专题二 │ 典例导练 典例导练 专题二 │ 典例导练
[写作内容]
请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:
1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;
2.目标和措施;
3.相关数据。 专题二 │ 典例导练
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 专题一
记叙文型基础写作 专题二
应用文型基础写作 专题三
说明文型基础写作 专题四
议论文型基础写作 模块5 基础写作
模块 5 基础写作 考纲解读 模块5│ 考纲解读 广东省高考英语写作分为两部分,一是基础写作,即我们常说的控制性写作,二是读写任务写作,属发散性写作。综观近年来的高考英语写作,测试的内容正在从知识型向能力型转变,写作文体日趋多元化,命题更具开放性,也就是说对考生英语写作能力的要求也在逐年提高。基础写作题目的目的是要检测考生最基础的书面语言表达能力,如用词的合理性、
模块5│ 考纲解读 结构的复杂性、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。按照基础写作的评分标准——1.信息内容的完整性(Completeness);2.信息内容的连贯性(Coherence);3.句子结构的正确性(Correctness);4.句子结构的复杂性(Variety)——要求考生要了解复杂句的概念、学会使用复杂句来表达信息要点,尽量避免一些易受汉语思维影响而犯的书面表达错误。总之,考生必须具备用英语熟练地表达自己所在的生活环境的能力。 命题分析 模块5│ 命题分析 1.基础写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。历年来高考作文题的题材都非常贴近考生的学习生活,如:校园活动、校外见闻、交友、旅游以及与考生有关的话题讨论等。可以预料2011年高考写作题的题材还会在这些范围之内,并为所有考生熟悉。
2.写作的体裁主要是记叙文和应用文。命题形式多为看图写故事、看图表说明、根据表格信息写一篇通讯报道,写一封短信或一份通知等应用文。 模块5│ 命题分析 应试点睛 模块5│ 应试点睛
基础写作主要考查同学们对英语基本句型的运用,整合知识的能力和语言结构安排及基本表述的能力。此题基本不要求考生对写作内容进行发挥,只需将所给信息完整准确连贯地写出就可以了。其实际上就是翻译和连词成句,扩句成文的形式。
1.仔细审读写作要求和写作内容信息;
2.确定标题(如果题中要求写标题就确定标题,若题中没做要求则可以不写); 模块5│ 应试点睛
3.写出要点(如:文中涉及到的重点词汇、短语及句型);
4. 列提纲(列提纲的过程实际上是一个谋篇布局,把内容要点按恰当合理的顺序排列,使文章条理、通顺的过程);
5.写草稿并对其修改润色;
6.复查(复查的项目包括:格式是否正确,内容是否完整,表达是否准确,行文是否连贯等)并使用合适的方法将5个句子衔接成连贯的文章。常用的衔接手段是使用过渡词语。 题型探究 模块5│ 题型探究 我们来谈论一下基础写作的解题方法。难点是难句的表达, 每一道题目的中文内容都有一些与英文表达稍有差异甚至大相径庭的表达形式。
例 假设你是李华, 请根据你校美化校园的规划, 用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一封信, 介绍该规划。信的主要内容如下: ? 探究点一难句的表达 模块5│ 题型探究 模块5│ 题型探究
[写作要求]
1.应包含所给出的全部信息, 开头和结尾已经给出。
2.必须使用5个句子组成连贯的短文。 Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.______________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours,
Li Hua 模块5│ 题型探究
【学生样本】
Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. ①In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air, we plan to have more trees in our school now. ②In order to get a good place to study and live, we have many plans. ③First, we plan to build up a botanical garden
模块5│ 题型探究 and let_students_visit_and_use. ④Second, we plan to build up a small garden for people to rest and study. ⑤At last, we plan to build up some statues of famous people to effect students and teachers. Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours,
Li Hua 模块5│ 题型探究
【评论点拨】
我们来看看学生的样本有什么地方可以改进:
第①句:“In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air ”比较生硬, to make our school beautiful应该改为to make our school more beautiful;“we plan to have more trees in our school now”中的have改为plant会好些。 模块5│ 题型探究
第②句:是个废句, 而且还霸占了后面的信息的位置。
第③句:“First, we plan to build up a botanical garden and let_students_visit_and_use.”中的画线部分没有表达出“供同学们参观、实践”的意思。
第④句:“Second, we plan to build up a small garden for people to rest and study.”中应删掉up, study后应该加上in。不过改为“Second, we plan to build a small garden in which we can take a rest and do some reading.”会好些。 模块5│ 题型探究
第⑤句:“At last, we plan to build up some statues of famous people to effect students and teachers.”中的effect应该改为encourage。 这篇文章的主语全部都是we, 好处是可以最大限度地减少英语表达方面的错误, 但是比较单调, 可能影响高分。不过, 我们只要变换句式, 例如改为被动语态, 就可以改善效果。 模块5│ 题型探究
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fre-sher, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in. According to the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flowers and grass in and around our school. A botanical garden will be built
模块5│ 题型探究 for us to visit and practise in. Besides, we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest. What’s more, some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder.
Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【注】 由于主语灵活变动, 使文章读起来摆脱了呆板, 行文有了生气。 模块5│ 题型探究
有时候我们发现有些句子不能够简单地直接翻译, 我们可以运用意义对等的原则, 把原文的意义用另外一种英语结构表达出来,既意译法。
例 广州珠江钢琴厂有产品打入欧洲市场, 并且能够在欧洲设厂;在中国, 只有广州珠江钢琴厂做到了。
这个意思, 我们可以这样处理:The Zhujiang Piano Factory is the only manufacturer in China with branches and business in Europe.
? 探究点二
意译的使用 模块5│ 题型探究
【评论点拨】
这个句子使用“with branches and business in Europe”意译为“有产品打入欧洲市场, 并且能够在欧洲设厂”, 使用“the only manufacturer in China”意译为“在中国, 只有广州珠江钢琴厂做到了”, 句子使用“manufacturer”一词, 与前面的“factory”对应, 表示“生产厂家”的意思。至于“广州珠江钢琴厂”就好办了, 只需要翻译为“The Zhujiang Piano Factory”。
模块5│ 题型探究
我们认真观察, 中文使用了3个动词“做到、打入、设厂”, 英文只有一个is充当表语, 动词都变成了介词“in…with…in…”,提示名词之间的关系;中文使用定语+中心词形式“有产品打入欧洲市场, 并且能够在欧洲设厂(的企业)”, 但是英语使用的是中心词+后置定语形式“manufacturer in China with branches and business in Europe”。 模块5│ 题型探究
以上例子告诉我们:逐字逐句死译只能是死路一条, 意译必须从整体的宏观角度把握全局, 从瞄准原文的写作目的出发, 为实现原文的交际目的而努力。
我们再来体会几个句子:
1.老师的鼓励把我带进了充满挑战的科研道路。 My teacher’s encouragement led me down onto a path to scientific research full of challenges.
(动词词组lead…down onto…to…full of拖动句子, 动词少, 介词多) 模块5│ 题型探究 2.我对英文很感兴趣, 老师表扬了我。
The teacher praised me for my great interest in English.
(先结果后原因, 动词词组praise…for…in拖动句子。试比较:Because I was greatly interested in English, the teacher praised me. 先原因后结果。哪一个句子表达更好?)
模块5│ 题型探究
3.树上结满了果子。
The branches of the trees were heavy with fruit.
(典型的意译手法, 先结果后原因, 动词词组were heavy with 生动地描述了硕果累累的情景。) 模块5│ 题型探究
我们经常说这个句子地道, 就是因为这个句子体现了英语民族的思维方式在语言表达上的投射。 例 比较以下句子:
1.Clinton had wanted to collect heavy tax on the middle class.
修改后:
Heavy tax on the middle class was Clinton’s idea. ? 探究点三句子的质量 模块5│ 题型探究 2.The people who listen to the radio have a habit of getting up early, but those who watch TV usually go to bed late.
修改后:
Radio listeners are early birds, but TV viewers are usually night owls.
3.After the American farmers used the industrial methods into agriculture, they made great progress in agriculture.
修改后:
The use of industrial methods was the reason for America’s great progress in agriculture. 模块5│ 题型探究 【评论点拨】
第1句运用“先结果后原因”的逻辑表达方式, 首先呈现信息的焦点“向中产阶级征收重税”, 然后才说“这是克林顿想干的事情”。句子的was就是“曾经”的意思。
模块5│ 题型探究
第2句运用构词法与修辞手法。the people who listen to the radio被复合词radio listeners所代替, those who watch TV被复合词TV viewers所代替, 干脆利落。have a habit of getting up early读起来有点呆板, 使用修辞手法把早起的人比喻为early birds, 又把晚睡的人比喻为night owls, 这样读起来就饶有趣味。
模块5│ 题型探究
第3句运用名词化的技术。所谓名词化, 就是把英文的动词改为名词, 通过介词来指示名词之间的关系。the American farmers used the industrial methods into agriculture…是一个句子, 修改后变为名词短语 the use of industrial methods。句子they made great progress in agriculture变为名词短语America’s great progress in agriculture。前一个名词短语是原因, 后一个名词短语是结果, 中间用名词reason就说明了两个名词短语之间的关系。 模块5│ 题型探究
广东高考英语基础写作的特点之一是:信息要经过处理才能够写成文章。处理的方式有两种:第一种比较简单, 我们称为“非信息选择”型, 考生只需要把题目要求的全部信息表达出来就可以了。第二种是“超量信息”型, 考生必须要进行“选择性写作”, 不需要也不能够把题目所有全部信息表达出来。这种的难度较大。“超量信息”型基础写作的最大特征是题目含有不需要的信息, 这种信息必须予以摒弃。如果含有这种不需要的信息, 其结果是“该写的没写, 不该写的写了”, 分数就会很低。 ? 探究点四“超量信息”型
模块5│ 题型探究
例 请根据以下你在研究性学习中搜集到的小明学习英文写作的方法和心得, 挑选相关信息写一篇文章作为演讲稿。
[写作内容]
小明说, 要背诵范文, 这样可以运用英语思维进行模仿性写作;要多阅读英文文章, 这样可以吸收语言材料;要听英文广播, 这样可以提高听力水平;要学习语法, 这样可以正确表达;要多写日记, 这样可以在练中学;要多练习口语, 这样可以提高口头技能;要参考别人的作文, 这样可以取长补短。
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