2015届高考一轮复习英语同步练习：短文改错练习（8）

　　2015高考英语：短文改错练习（8）及答案解析

　　短文改错记叙文

　　【英语卷(解析)·2015届浙江省“温州八校”高三返校联考（201708）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

　　【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文

　　【答案解析】

　　members---member

　　考查名词单复数。句意：成长为一名有责任的成员并不难。因为前面有a,故用单数形式。

　　happens---happened 考查动词的时态。我记得这件事发生在一个下雨的周日下午。事发生在过去，故用一般过去时。

　　waiting后面加for

　　考查固定搭配。Wait for sth等待某事；

　　knocked on ---down 考查固定搭配。Knock down sb 撞倒某人；

　　it—which

　　考查定语从句连接词。Which指代 a passing car

　　a –the

　　考查冠词。句意：一个男人立刻冲向那个女生给她急救；the girl上文已经提到过，表示特指；

　　but---and

　　考查连词；句意：幸运地是她伤的不重并且我们送她去了最近的医院。两个句子是并列关系；

　　comparing---compared 考查非谓语动词。句意：与逃跑的司机相比，我对我的所作所为感到很骄傲；

　　aware of 去掉of

　　考查固定短语。Be aware of sth 意识到某事；be aware that 后面加句子。

　　that –what

　　考查表语从句。句意: 做为社会的一员，我意识到，责任正是这个社会所需要的。

　　【英语卷(解析)·2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（201708）】

　　B

　　One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she would eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.

　　【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文

　　【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。

　　【答案解析】

　　7

　　77. families→family

　　her修饰family，应用单数形式。78.

　　79. careless→carelessly

　　修饰written应用careless的副词形式。

　　80.help前the去掉。ask sb for help向某人求助，help为不可数名词，故去掉the。

　　81. too→either 否定句中表示“也”用either。

　　82.read前加to。be able to do sth能做某事。

　　83.chemist’s前加a。chemist在文中第一次出现，故应用不定冠词a。

　　84. but→and。

　　此处的前后分句是并列关系，不是转折关系，故用and。

　　85. will→would。 主句为过去时，从句也应用过去时，故will改为would。

　　短文改错

　　A person’s age no longer tells you something about

　　76. _______

　　his social position, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer

　　77. ________

　　a particular year which one goes to school or goes to

　　78. ________

　　work or gets married or start a family. The social clock

　　79. ________

　　that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get

　　80. ________

　　a job, or stop working isn’t as strong as it was used to be.

　　81. ________

　　It doesn’t surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university

　　82. ________

　　president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old

　　83. ________

　　man who has become a father for the first time. What we

　　84. _______

　　all know, public’s ideas are changing nowadays.

　　85. ________

　　【参考答案】

　　76. something → anything

　　77. healthy → health

　　78. which → when

　　（或 year in）

　　79. start → starts

　　80. when to

　　81. was

　　82．√

　　83.or

　　a

　　84. What →As

　　85. public’s → public

　　【重庆南开中学】

　　第一节

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am pleasant to learn that you’re coming to Beijing 76．

　　to study Chinese. I’ve got some informations about foreigners

　　77．

　　learning Chinese. Here I’d like to recommend you famous

　　78．

　　language school-Elite Language School.

　　It reported that such a Chinese training course will satisfy

　　79．

　　your demands. It starts in February 20th and lasts a month till

　　80．

　　March 19th . It is given in No. 1 Lecture Hall but it’s intended

　　81．

　　for beginners like you. Besides, the tuition is reasonable. It cost

　　82．

　　only 2,000 RMB. I think it suits you and you will enjoy them.

　　83．

　　If you have more questions, please let me know or just sufing 84．

　　www. Elite.org. The more you will know, the more eager you will

　　85．

　　be to come.

　　Hope to see you in Beijing soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　(河南五校联考)

　　After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________

　　look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________

　　found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________

　　I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________

　　He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________

　　studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________

　　his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________

　　will go through the job­hunting talk today and he would8.________

　　take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________

　　what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________

　　答案与解析：

　　1．去掉the　finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。

　　2．month→months　month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。

　　3．interested后加in　be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。

　　4．him→himself　calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。

　　5．do→did　根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。

　　6．√

　　7．beaten→beating　a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。

　　8．will→would　这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。

　　9．surprised→surprise　to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。

　　10．said后加was　what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。

　　【参考答案】

　　Women，present and ancient， at the home and．______ abroadwear long hair,that adds to their beauty．But few ．______ people realize it affects her brains．Hair grows constantly．．______ It takes in nourishment(营养) constantly．If it was short．______ of nourishmentit’ll die and falls off．Body supplies hair with．______ nourishmentit can’t be stopped even in a minutes．If it takes in．______ too manythat means hair has already used too much

　　7．______ nourishment

　　body gives it to the head．As time passes， ．______ brain is relatively short of nourishment．It leads dizziness 9．______ (头昏)．Therefore one’s brains will be weakened．．______．去掉the ．─which

　　3．her─their．was─is ．falls─fall ．—minute

　　7．many─much ．去掉it

　　9 lead后加to

　　10．√

　　例如：

　　It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. Luckily

　　the

　　I was completely tree then, so I'll to say “yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00p.m.

　　am

　　in Friday evening.

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