2015高考英语：短文改错练习（5）及答案解析
【英语卷（解析）·2015届广西桂林十八中高三上学期第一次月考（201709）】
第一节
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
（注：本题为新课改内容）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the first day when I went to work in a very famous restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few people coming for dinner. So I am “invited” to have a meal in the restaurant. After ordered two French dishes and some food, I began to look frequently at their watch timing the serving of the meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything else wrong there. I wrote something improper down secret. My meal was not serving yet. I looked at my watch 32 minutes passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main reason why the business was poor. Then I wrote a report about my findings and presented it the boss.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
71. 第一句 第一个in改为on。
72. a few 改为few。
73. 第二句 am改为was。
74. 第三句 ordered改为 ordering。Order
75. their改为my。 I ,它的形容词性物主代词是my。
76. 第四句that改为whether。
77. 第五句 secret改为secretly
78. 第六句 serving改为served。Meal
79. 第八句 wait改为waiting。
80. 第九句 the boss前加to。present sth to sb 将某物呈献给某人
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：1.在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
【答案】
1.把for去掉
ask for意为
2.the改为her
in one's twenties在某人
3.similarly改为similar
similar to是后置定语修饰interests
4.he改为she
这里指代的是a girl所以要用she
5.interesting改为interested
be interested in对感兴趣这里同第
6.Beside改为Besides
beside adv.旁边地 adv.除此之外
7.such后加a
such a pen pal这样一个笔友such a如此一个
8.whichever改为whatever
whatever 无论什么，强调不明什么对象。whichever 无论哪个，强调在明确的对象中不知要选哪个。
9.d改为believe
根据后面的从句的时态可知这里是一般现在时
10.learning改为learn
learn是will的宾语所以用原形
(2017·宝鸡市三模)
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,
Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming
for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
答案：
Jack has
regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,
Jack was going home by bike as usual
he heard a woman screaming
for help.Then he was riding quickly
the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman
by a man with a knife in
hand.Without hesitation, Jack made
immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by
him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three
came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand,
since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
(2017·长春市第四次调测)
I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
答案：
I still remember my middle school life in
Changchun. I was then in
school for
from Wenchuan. As we
all left home
an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . However, we seldom felt lonely or . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we
play basketball on the playground,
in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We
each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years
we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
(2017·甘肃省二诊)
Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children to want things that they don't real need.
答案：
Many teachers
worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies,
children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because
so much viewing, children may not
develop the habit of
and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio
young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.
one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children
want things that they don't
need.
(2017·乌鲁木齐三诊)
Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is real positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy
nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.
答案：
Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is
positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only
up our strength and endurance
it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other ， it allows us to get outside
enjoy
nature. For those of
who spend our days
working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite .
conclusion, it is
good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.