2015高考英语：短文改错练习（4）及答案解析
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省石家庄二中高三开学考试（201708）】
第三节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
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【答案解析】
1. importance
考查固定句型。句意：耐心在我们的生活中非常的重要。Be of importance 等于 be
important 。
2. waited for (加for) 考查固定短语。Wait for sth 等待。。
3. past-passed
考查动词的时态。句意：30分钟过去了，但没有一辆车来。根据but no bus came用一般过去时。
4. on foot
考查固定短语。句意：沮丧又着急，我决定步行去。On foot 步行
5. when-than
考查固定句型。No sooner ...than 一。。就
6. take the next bus
考查固定短语。 句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。The next bus 下一趟车。
7. another 30 minutes
考查搭配。句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。Another 30 minutes 再三十分钟。
8. did I realize
考查倒装 句意：只有这时我才意识到我的问题。Only +状语 +部分倒装 。
9. put后it去掉
考查定语从句。句意：耐心会浪费掉所有你所投入的努力。that we have put in 是all the effort的定语从句。
10. losing
考查固定短语。Close to 靠近, to是介词，故后面用动名词的形式。
【英语卷(解析)·2015届河北省衡水中学高三小一调考试（201708）扫描版】
第三节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10出语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
It is well-known that good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school. I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so series overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. In my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then did I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】文章讲述的是好习惯会让人受益终生，作者的减肥之路。
【答案解析】
Entered---Entering
考查非谓语动词。句意：我进入高中，我很喜欢吃快餐并且吃得很多 。两个句子共用一个主语I ，与enter之间是主谓关系，故用现在分词的形式。
eat—ate
考查动词的时态。句意：我进入高中，我很喜欢吃快餐并且吃得很多。Took与eat由and来连接，两个动词的时态保持一致。
serious—seriously
考查副词。句意：我非常胖以致于外表很丑陋。Seriously用来修饰形容词overweight.
It ---what
考查主语从句。句意：更糟糕的是同学们经常嘲笑我。What made matters worse引导主语从句。
去掉a
考查固定短语。Make fun of 取笑某人。
now—then
考查时间状语。句意：从那时起，我下决心不吃零食。根据句意，从那时起。
avoiding---avoid 考查动词短语。Make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做某事；
off—up
考查固定短语。句意：与此同时，我开始慢跑减肥。Take off 关掉；take up 从事。
In—To
考查固定短语。To one’s surprise 使某人感到吃惊的是。
until---before
考查连词。句意：不久之后 ，我转型成功。It was not long before ….不久之后。
短文改错
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about
77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources
82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85.____________
【参考答案-----】改错:
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about
77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources
82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85. them
短文改错
When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost
76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry?
77.
Experts have found that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. When one is feeling stressed, it set free,
79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get
80.
rid of the stress and you will often feel better before a
81.
good cry. Of course sex has nothing to do to crying.
82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more
83.
of this hormone than men. But next time you feel like
84.
bursting into tears, go ahead. It won't good to your health.
85.
【参考答案】
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容词作表语。
77．√
78．tear → tears。动词contain为复数形式，主语也应为复数形式。
79．it后加is。此处应用被动语态。
80．get → getting。of为介词，后面应接动名词作宾语。
81．before → after。哭后的感觉比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。从句不可用because of而应用because来引导。
84．But → So。分析语境逻辑可知，此处不表转折关系。
85．won't → will．
(2017·昆明市适应性检测)
We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.
答案：
We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people
crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad
be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as
example. Only after his hard
did he become successful.
we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is
the process in which
try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy .
(2017·浙江省五校联考)
A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
答案：
A young man called LowCarbon Brother
a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help
carbon dioxide in the air. For example,
always picks up some waste paper on the street
uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns
the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a
life with so many modern
around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support
his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,
he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
短文改错--1
At Chinese New Year, my family and I have a very busy 76._____________
time. Two days before New Year’s Day, I went out with my
77. ____________
friends from school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong.
78. ____________
It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to, and the
79. ____________
food was delicious. After that, we went to shopping for new
80. ____________
clothes and found lots bargains. I visited my old teacher,
81. ____________
Mr. Smith. To my surprised, he said he didn’t find Chinese
82. ____________
New Year very excited. He was not even wearing new clothes! 83. ____________
Because we have so many tests this week, so I have to
84. ____________
start studying hard again now. I wish the holiday were long!
85. ____________
书面表达 （满分30分）
61. bunch
62. praise
63. permission
64. blame
65. consideration
66. differs
67. familiar
68. relief
69. delivered
70. gradually
71. misled
72. length
73. promoting
74.appointed
75. annoyed
76. have改为had
77. 此行无错。
78. the改为a。
79. and改为but。
80. 去掉to/shopping 改为shop。
81. lots 后加of。
82. surprised 改为surprise。
83. excited改为exciting。
84. 去掉第二个so。
85. long改为longer。